[Halloween Game Idea] Fucked by Daylight Script

[DarkNecros16]

Hi there, I hope an admin sees this, I made this script because I believe that we haven't had a Halloween game since a long time ago so I wrote this idea so you can read it, change anything if you like to and if you choose my idea have time to make the game. Please, a little of feedback would be very useful to me.

Tentative name: Fucked by Daylight (Part 1)
Game idea by: DarkNecros16

Plot: In a very dark realm four survivors are going to have a very peculiar night. Can our friends survive to this paranormal but pleasing experience?
Characters:
Melanie Thompson: (Meg Thomas) (She has a big ass with normal breasts) http://pm1.narvii.com/7158/294d264ff932 ... v2_uhq.jpg
Fang Shui: (Feng Min) (She have small tits, but she have a cute face) https://cdnb.artstation.com/p/assets/im ... 1580749869
Ellie Rakuri: (Elodie Rakoto) (She haves a giant and juicy ass, big tits and very wide hips) https://uvejuegos.com/img/noticias/44577/Elodie.png
Jack Square: (Jake Park) https://i.pinimg.com/originals/fb/16/be ... fabcbb.jpg

Scenario: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ni4Lj0X ... el=CowsIAM (You can take screenshots from this video to illustrate the backgrounds)
Hooks: https://www.vhv.rs/dpng/d/429-4293321_l ... dog-in.png (Obviously you can do them simpler)
Generators: https://cdnb.artstation.com/p/assets/co ... 1574785508 (Obviously you can do them simpler)
Exit gate: https://steamlists.com/wp-content/uploa ... ts-com.jpg

*The game starts with a small introduction about the Entity’s realm and how it works*

“Somewhere deep into the darkness, there exists a forbidden kingdom entirely made of shadows, and there dwells a horrorific creature that rules over this land. This corrupted kingdom has many dangers, but if you seek them there are also some hidden pleasures”

*We can see Jack walking through the forest until he meets Melanie and Fang working on a generator*
Jack: Hey girls, what are you doing?
Melanie: What did you think we are doing?
Fang: We’re trying to get the hell out of here, what were you doing?
Jack: Well actually I spend some time breaking hooks and searching in boxes.
Melanie: So useful as always... (*She looks a little upset*)
Fang: Calm down Melanie, after all we just need to fix this last generator to get access to the exit gate
Melanie: That’s right, I wonder where Ellie went
Jack: Maybe the killer caught her...
Fang: Oh no, that sounds terrible!
Jack: Well... after all it’s her or us
Melanie: You're not very good at teaming up, right?
Jack: Well what if we take a break of all this repairing and relax for a moment. I even have a deal for you
Fang: What is it?
Jack: I found this pink key while I was looting boxes, do you mind having some “quality time” in exchange for it?
Melanie: Ewww!
Fang: Well actually that sounds like a pretty good plan B, we only progressed half of this generator and you never know where the killer is
Melanie: C’mon Fang we can do it like we did it with the other four generators, we are good at repairing
Jack: So... what did you say ladies?

1st Sex Scene: Melanie and Fang foreplay and blowjob https://ftopx.com/large/202001/5e182ea925a3e.jpg
Sex dialogues:
Before interacting
Jack: Woah, look who changed her mind
Melanie: I only do it because Fang feels a little insecure about our survival chances idiot
Fang: You´re really going to give us that key? You promised it!
Jack: Of course of course, now start already
Stroking glans
Jack: Haha you two surely are skillful with your hands, not gonna lie
Licking
Melanie: Well this is not so bad as it seems, has a good taste
Jack: Ohhh so you’re starting to appreciate me
Melanie: Don’t ruin it idiot
Handjob
Jack: Ahhh yes... stroke my cock, show me you two can handle more than a generator
Blowjob
Fang (Between gasps): It tastes so good...
Melanie (Thinking): Damn, it’s true...
Cumming
Jack: Oh fuck! Take my cum, swallow it bitches!!!
Ellie: Well well well, what do we have here? (*Dialogue coming from outside the screen*)
*Scene changes and now we can see a foreground of a thick ebony milf with a juicy ass, big tits and very large hips with her arms crossed, Fang, Melanie and Jack’s dialogues come from outside the screen*
Ellie: Looks like all of you were taking advantage of our depressingly stupid killer and his lack of ability to find us
Melanie: ELLIE!!!
Fang: Where have you been?
Ellie: Pulling pallets, jumping windows, you know, I’m in great shape, I have amazing legs
Jack: You can bet on that!
Ellie: I know you would spend some money to take a closer look to them, but since money doesn’t help us here. What if you give me that pink key instead?
Melanie and Fang: Hey! That’s ours!!!
Jack: Hey calm down girls, you can go back to fixing that generator, while we are busy hehehe
Ellie: Oh c’mon little girls, get out of the way and see how an adult woman takes care of a cock!

2nd Sex Scene: Ellie’s Thighjob https://cdn.sex.com/images/pinporn/2021 ... =furreaper
Sex dialogues:
Before interacting
Ellie: Well big boy, you like my legs, don’t you? Then let´s see if you can handle them
Jack: Oh god, this looks great!
Easy
Jack: Oh they feel so soft, I love this
Medium
Jack: Fuck it’s so tight, this is amazing!
Hard
Jack: Yes! Faster babe!
Cumming
Jack: Crap I’m cumming
Ellie: Haha I knew you couldn’t handle my thighs, no man can´t resist a Rakuri’s Thighjob

3rd Sex Scene: Ellie’s Anal https://thumb-lvlt.xhcdn.com/a/FiJHutGl ... /amp.6.jpg
Sex dialogues:
Before interacting
Ellie: Now I’ll show you what a real woman can do! Ride me baby!
Easy
Jack: Oh shit is even more tighter!
Medium
Ellie: Yes! That´s the spot!!! Harder!!!
Hard
Ellie: Ahhhhh fuck, It’s so deep, I´m gonna cum!
Jack: Fuck, me too!
Cumming
Ellie: Fill my ass big boy, show me you’re a true man!!!
Jack: I’ll do it! I’LL DO IT!!!

“However our friends didn’t know that everything comes to an end, and after the pleasure comes the pain”

*Scene change, we see Jack slumped in the ground exhausted while a big man shadow is seen over him, there is no trace of the girls*
Jack: Wow that was amazing, what about a round two girls? Girls?!?!?!
*Jack looks up and see’s the killer in front of him*
Jack: OH FUCK, NOOOOOO!!!!!
*Hitting noises and hooking sound, now we see Jack hanging in a hook screaming in pain*
Ending: *The girls open the big gate to escape the Entity’s realm once and for all, with their clothes ripped. They just run away screaming and no looking back*
Fang: Wait we’re not going to leave him, are we?
Melanie: Well... after all it’s he or us!
Ellie: Thanks for the key kiddo!

THE END


You can read it here in Google Drive, there would be some changes to make it a little easier to read: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1s8r ... sp=sharing

[DarkNecros16]

I have another Idea, but PLEASE at least give me some feedback, don't ignore me

[BigK7o8]

I have another Idea, but PLEASE at least give me some feedback, don't ignore me

Hey, read your script, here's some suggestions:

1: The first scene is pretty complicated. I would make it shorter, maybe cut out a little dialogue, and cut down on the scene changes. The more scene changes and position changes there are the harder it is to animate, and the harder it is to animate the less likely a game is to get made.

2: The ending is pretty violent. You can get away with a lot of stuff in these games but explicit violence like that is a pretty big no-no. And maybe change the name of "the killer" to something different like "the attacker" (just a suggestion, it's your script I'm sure you could come up with something better) to avoid breaking any rules. Maybe just have a shadow appear and then jack disappears and the girls run away, I don't know.

Other than that, I think you did good, you followed the format of short intro, short ending, and three sex scenes, and you gave good reference pictures. I'm going to be honest I'm not really familiar with the dead by daylight universe so I can't really comment on any of that, but it's a good start.

[Anonymous Master]

there's also no creatures in the games

[DarkNecros16]

I have another Idea, but PLEASE at least give me some feedback, don't ignore me

Hey, read your script, here's some suggestions:

1: The first scene is pretty complicated. I would make it shorter, maybe cut out a little dialogue, and cut down on the scene changes. The more scene changes and position changes there are the harder it is to animate, and the harder it is to animate the less likely a game is to get made.

2: The ending is pretty violent. You can get away with a lot of stuff in these games but explicit violence like that is a pretty big no-no. And maybe change the name of "the killer" to something different like "the attacker" (just a suggestion, it's your script I'm sure you could come up with something better) to avoid breaking any rules. Maybe just have a shadow appear and then jack disappears and the girls run away, I don't know.

Other than that, I think you did good, you followed the format of short intro, short ending, and three sex scenes, and you gave good reference pictures. I'm going to be honest I'm not really familiar with the dead by daylight universe so I can't really comment on any of that, but it's a good start.

Oh god, thank you so much for your feedback, I'm going to correct the changes you suggested, but talking about that shadow you suggested that''s actually what happened, maybe it didn't understood very well, so I'm going to cut the final scene of Jack hanging in the hook

THANK YOU SO MUCH