is it a good idea to make shorter version of your ideas?

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Sun Jan 10, 2021 8:14 am

should i make a short version of Big top bangeroo 5 Cherry Pop Time for the people who don't want to read all of it??
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Sun Jan 10, 2021 12:41 pm

If you give people a “short” version, that’s great, because if you like it, you’ll always be interested in reading the full version.
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Sun Jan 10, 2021 2:24 pm

!Big top bangeroo! Sorry, but we are forced to end this episode as we are not legally allowed to make such content.
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Sun Jan 10, 2021 2:27 pm

mnf_kosmos wrote:
Sun Jan 10, 2021 2:24 pm
!Big top bangeroo! Sorry, but we are forced to end this episode as we are not legally allowed to make such content.
Ohh damn ok do i have to change the wording on it or should i just chose a different idea
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Ill fix it when i get home
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Sun Jan 10, 2021 2:57 pm

mugen64 wrote:
Sun Jan 10, 2021 2:27 pm
mnf_kosmos wrote:
Sun Jan 10, 2021 2:24 pm
!Big top bangeroo! Sorry, but we are forced to end this episode as we are not legally allowed to make such content.
Ohh damn ok do i have to change the wording on it or should i just chose a different idea
As an exception, I will discuss the possibility of reproducing this game with the team. But on condition that there is no hint of sex with animals. Because I like this series of games.
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Me too sorry i forgot the rules and got a little overzealous
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mugen64 wrote:
Sun Jan 10, 2021 3:02 pm
Me too sorry i forgot the rules and got a little overzealous
We all sometimes forget about the rules. And then we will have to remove the game from the site.
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Big Top Bangeroo 5 Cherry Pop Time(FIX)

Characters Wilbur the clown
Victoria Vanderbit but young with a ponytail
https://images.app.goo.gl/RGAXhqvRbgH1tFo87
[Keep clothing on during sex scene]
(thoughts)
-talk

Story

Short version Wilbur goes back in time to bang a younger version of Victoria Vanderbit with a twist

Long version

Wilbur at his house
Wilbur(damn that Victoria hitting me up with a text saying she is taking a Vacation. I wanted to go balls deep in her too. what am I going to do now?)

Wilbur( hmmm maybe i still can.)

Wilbur on the phone- hey professor I'm calling in that favor you owe me.

Couple of hours later Wilbur gets a package which says one time use only.

Wilbur(finally my time watch is here with this i can go back in time for one round trip and i know the perfect time to go back to ha ha ha this is gonna be great)


Wilbur goes back in time and he’s in front of a high school. He looks and sees people throwing up their graduation hats. He sees Victoria among the crowd.

Wilbur( hmph even in her graduation Victoria is still as bitchy as ever but that young killer body of hers makes up for it)

Wilbur(anyway i gotta stay focus if i remember correctly the limousine should be red)

Wilbur fine's the red limousine and hot wires it. Drive’s the limousine in front of the school and picks up Victoria and her girlfriends.

Wilbur(now for my plan to spring to action. I remember when Victoria was being a big time tease during her youth and using people for free clothing,cars and jewelry at the time. if i can record her saying she was using these people. i can convince her to let me pop her cherry)

Mini game begins
Try to record young Victoria and her friends talking and don't get caught or its game over
Game-play pretty much like lana-croft-and-the-serpent-amulet mini game

In front of a mansion
Everybody leaves from the car.Victoria the last one to leave

Victoria - alright see you girls tonight. Now to set up some more idiots.

Wilbur-hello Victoria

Victoria annoyed- oh god a clown listen my family isn’t hiring anymore clowns right now we already pick up one charity case and that was more then enough so fuck off!

Wilbur- wow ok fine i'll leave but i guess i'll just have to leak these tape recordings of how you played those millionaires son for cars, jeweler and expensive clothing to the press
Wilbur plays recordings

Victoria angry - damn you. You recorded my conversation while driving. how Reckless can you be.

Victoria(damn it I was careless this could ruin my family's name if this gets out to the press)

Wilbur- really reckless when i want something.

Victoria- whatever clown, what do you want from me? Money, cars or stock in the company?

Wilbur- nope I don't want none of those things.

Victoria - grrrr then what do you want then?

Wilbur loud- i want your V-card!

Victoria angry- heyy keep your voice down nobody knows that not even my friends.

Wilbur- well that's your fault for lying to all your friends. Anyway if you give me all your v-cards, I'll delete the recordings.

Victoria- grrrr let me guess you wanna brag to all your clown friends you pop my cherry!

Wilbur- i could care less about recognition.you could say you give it to a prince or a football player for all care. All I want to do is pop your cherries.

Victoria- if i give you what you want you’ll delete the recording on your tape and this remains anonymous between us.

Wilbur- yup i'm a clown of my word.

Victoria annoyed - fine you got a deal. Where are we doing this and It better not be in public.

Wilbur had a big grin on his face- don't worry i got the perfect spot i'll give you a call with the address tonight. Oh and here’s a picture of the outfit i want you to wear tonight with a pink cowgirl hat.

https://images.app.goo.gl/Vtcw3KDzihfwYpkA9
Victoria-damn it i had plans tonight but fine!

Wilbur(perfect that was easier than i thought now to get everything set up)

In a abandoned circus stable
Victoria- really you couldn't pick a nicer place to do this and making me wear such a slutty ass outfit

Wilbur- nope i only pick nice spots and outfits for good girls. Not for my bitches!

Wilbur walk to Victoria and kisses her

Victoria- hey jerk who said you can have my first kiss

Wilbur - I told you I'm popping all your cherries but before we begin.

Wilbur drinks a position and becomes a monster.{ form looks similar to Mortal Cum Butt xmotaroozxx}

Victoria surprised -jerk couldn't at least stay normal for my first time?Turning yourself to a monster a bit much.

Wilbur-nope not my problem
Victoria annoyed- grrr whatever lets start

Sex scene 1 tit fuck

https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post& ... id=2253687
[Slow!]

Victoria - I don't get the appeal.

Wilbur- you’ll get it when you get older

Victoria- what does that mean?

Wilbur- don't worry about it just move those tits up and down more.

[Med!]
Wilbur- fuck this feel great

Victoria- you seem to be having too much fun jackhammer my tits

Wilbur- damn right i am

[Hard!]
Victoria - fuckkk not so rough!

[Cum!]
Wilbur-get ready for your first cum bath

Cum all over her

Victoria- fuck couldn't you have least not dirty up my clothing you pathetic clown.

Wilbur- you know what i'm tired of you talking shit. Time for your first blowjob experience.

Victoria- can i just give you a hand-job instead?

Wilbur- no either your mouth around my dick or your mouth around the reporter's microphone. your choice

Victoria angry- grrrrr FINE

Sex scene 2 https://images.app.goo.gl/YWNXQ4c4bbVQaKRv5
[slow!]
Wilbur- finally got to make that big mouth of yours useful.

Victoria(stupid jerk)

[Med!]
Vitotria- gawk gwak

Wilbur- damn not bad for your first time however i know i can make you go balls deep so open your mouth as wide as you can.

[Hard!]

Wilbur- good girl that what i like.make sure you swallow all of my cum!

Victoria- gwgk gawk gwak

Cums in her mouth

Wilbur - that was fun but now for the main event lay on the square hay over there.

Sex Scene 3 like pic but in the pussy
https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post& ... id=3907734

Wilbur - Alright any last words to say to your virgin pussy before i pop?

Victoria - no you idiot let's get this over with.

Victoria( damn it i know i should have given that football player a shoot. Now my cherry about to be pop by a long monster dick clown)

[Rub!]

Wilbur - what the matter Victoria you got quite silent on me?

Victoria- stop playing clown and get on with it

Wilbur - if you insist

[Prod!]

Wilbur- damn this is a lot harder than i thought

Victoria - this is what you get for turning yourself into a monster clown. Your dick is too wide and long to fit into my pussy.

Wilbur- it’s gonna fit. I'm just gonna put all my muscle into it.

Victoria- oh oh oh shit

POP Penetrate{it's up to you if u want to add a little blood}

Victoria- AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH

[Slow!]

Wilbur-told you my dick was gonna fit. Now it's time for me to give you some future payback balls deep style.

[Med!]

Victoria- AHHHH Clown AHHHH YOUUU AHHH PUSSY AHHHH FUCK AHHH

[Hard!] Vitoria eyes in back of her head

Wilbur- spoiled Ass bitch take all this dick

Victoria- AHH AHHH AHHHHH

[Cums!]
Victoria heavy breathing- fuck you idiot you couldn't have done that more gentle my pussy feel numb and why do you keep rumble on about the future?

Wilbur- what do you expect your pussy was tight. I had to force it in. anyway don't worry about me talking about the future instead worry about the last cherry i'm about to pop.

Victoria touching her ass with grit teeth- fuck i forgot

Sex scene 4 anal
https://images.app.goo.gl/Nz9kPEPvdCxacAyo8

Victoria - did you put on the lube?

Wilbur- of course i did

Wilbur(like i would put on lube and miss out on some painal action)

[Prod!]

Victoria( fuck this is gonna hurt. I should have kept my schemes to myself now my anal cherry done for)

POP Penetrate

Victoria- AHHHHHHHH FUCKKKKK

[Slow!]

Wilbur- holy shitttt your Teen Ass is tight

{Med!}

Victoria - AHHH SHIT SHIT SHIT AHHHH FUCKKK NOT AHH SO FUCKING DEEP AHHH

[HARD!] victoria has a fuck silly crying face

Wilbur- giving this ass that future clown business.

Victoria- ughhh uggha ahhhh ahhh ahhh uggha ahhhh

Wilbur - AHHHH FUCK about to cum

[Cums!]

Victoria collapse

Wilbur- damn that was great cant wait to fuck the regular you just as hard.

end?
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Thu Jan 14, 2021 8:10 am

mnf_kosmos wrote:
Sun Jan 10, 2021 5:55 pm
mugen64 wrote:
Sun Jan 10, 2021 3:02 pm
Me too sorry i forgot the rules and got a little overzealous
We all sometimes forget about the rules. And then we will have to remove the game from the site.
I fixed up the wording of the story and im just hitting you back up just to make sure we're good?
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