Idea submission: The Probe

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Jellybutt
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Sun Jul 05, 2020 7:28 pm

So I heard that the artists are taking ideas they like from the forums now?

If that's the case I'd like to try my luck again with my idea, The Probe! -a mostly anal special.

Betty-Sue is your stereotypical sexy farm girl. You know: tiny denim shorts, skimpy plaid shirt, freckles, bare feet, gets abducted by aliens... wait what?

General appearance:
https://postimg.cc/tZZwBzt7

With a nice busty figure so that her boobs are almost bulging out of her shirt:
https://postimg.cc/1VDTQ5dQ

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So as above, our story opens with Betty-Sue being abducted into a UFO! (Unidentified Fucking Object.)
https://postimg.cc/FfWXWRMC

When she wakes up, she's strapped into a strange machine in a dark room as a voice asks if she's ready.

The machine should be kinda like these:
https://postimg.cc/Z0NX3V5M
https://postimg.cc/fJnng1Ps
(A top part with a lot of mechanical arms to hold her limbs in different positions and a bottom part with a bunch of different anal probe tentacles. Please make the probes thick and green like in the second pic.)

"R-ready for what?" she asks. "What's happening? Who the fuck are you?!"
"Ready to play... THE PROBE!" says the voice, as the room lights up to reveal the set of an alien gameshow with an entire cheering audience!

Game show stage:
https://postimg.cc/v4GRGfMS

The host of the gameshow is a stereotypical green alien:
https://postimg.cc/Jsxf00z7

But wearing a suit and wig like these:
https://postimg.cc/VSN3CwJq

And there's an audience of similar aliens shown in silhouette up the front like this:
https://postimg.cc/LntKdNd1

Host: "Yes it's 'The Probe!' the galaxy's favourite gameshow! Each week we test one lucky contestant from a primitive civilisation to see just how primitive they are. All you have to do is answer 10 simple space themed questions to win, but watch out! Get just 3 questions wrong and you get-"

Audience: "THE PROBE!"

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So basically we play one of the little quiz mini-games where the player is asked a few space themed questions with multiple choice answers: one right, one wrong, and one just angry rage from Betty-Sue, e.g.:

Q: What are the names of Mars' moons?
a) Phobos and Deimos.
b) Homer and Charon.
c) Let me go you fucking aliens!

Q: What is Saturn mostly made of?
a) Hydrogen.
b) Methane.
c) You can't do this! I have rights dammit!

Q: What is the approximate diameter of Uranus?
a) 50,724 km.
b) 30,990 km.
c) None of your business! Y’all leave my anus alone!

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Get 3 questions wrong and you get a game-over sex scene (that's a new one, huh!) of Betty-Sue getting a big, THICK anal probe right up her ass!

Sex scene 1 (Game-over):
https://postimg.cc/TLXsXgWV

Note: The cum option in all sex scenes should cause the probing machine to ejaculate a glowing green goo like this:
https://postimg.cc/hQxFt0fN

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Get 8 or more questions right however to win the quiz and continue the story.

(Betty-Sue looks relieved.)

Host: "Well it looks like our contestant is smarter than she looks! Congratulations human, you've won our quiz! Which means that now it's time for you to claim your fabulous prize! ...ALSO an anal probe! "

Betty-Sue: "WHAAAAAT?!?!"

*Audience cheers!*

Sex scene 2:
https://postimg.cc/9420Rg6s

Sex scene 3:
https://postimg.cc/qh8GcFqn

Sex scene 4:
https://postimg.cc/nj8kDxFp

Note: Again, the cum option in all sex scenes should cause the probing machine to ejaculate a glowing green goo like this:
https://postimg.cc/hQxFt0fN

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And finally our ending scene, the aliens dumping Betty-Sue back in a field.
She should be laying on the ground exhausted with green goo still oozing out of her holes:
https://postimg.cc/gr6bsGN4

Meanwhile an old man is sitting on a fence nearby playing a banjo:
https://postimg.cc/K152TQJ2

Old man: "Probed again, huh Betty-Sue?"

Betty-Sue: "They were green ones this time…"

Old Man: "What’s that make, three times this month?"

Betty-Sue: "FUCKING ALIENS!!!"


Thanks for reading!
Hopefully one of the artists will like it enough to give it a chance. :D
Last edited by Jellybutt on Tue Jul 07, 2020 2:12 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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anonymoosefan
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Mon Jul 06, 2020 12:22 pm

Woah, Jellybutt! Haven't seen you around for a while!

Love the idea!
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Jellybutt
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Tue Jul 07, 2020 2:07 pm

Thanks Moose!

Anyone have any constructive criticism?
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Wed Jul 08, 2020 10:34 am

Not entirely sure why, but image links aren't working on my side
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anonymoosefan
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Mon Jul 13, 2020 4:29 pm

My concern is whether this will get past the rules the payment companies have forced on MnF?
I mean, it's not the aliens themselves having sex with the girl, it's a machine so it should be okay, right?
Perhaps one of the artists can confirm of deny?
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Jellybutt
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Thu Jul 16, 2020 10:35 am

I don't see why not.
If they can do a robot yeti controlled by an elf then I'm sure they can do a tentacle machine controlled by aliens.
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anonymoosefan
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Sat Jul 18, 2020 3:50 pm

True.
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anonymoosefan
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Mon Jul 20, 2020 2:31 pm

I'm reminded of Japanese game shows:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dWQ1hks1dE8
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Jellybutt
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Fri Jul 24, 2020 7:45 am

anonymoosefan wrote:
Mon Jul 20, 2020 2:31 pm
I'm reminded of Japanese game shows:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dWQ1hks1dE8
:lol:

What happened to them?
Assumedly there's a mattress down there?
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anonymoosefan
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Mon Jul 27, 2020 5:09 pm

Jellybutt wrote:
Fri Jul 24, 2020 7:45 am
:lol:

What happened to them?
Assumedly there's a mattress down there?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mol_ivUkblg
They go down a slide covered in some kind of gooey slime, earning points based on how far they slide.
I don't think they're told any of this beforehand mind you.
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