Spider-Man and Black Cat aka Felicia Hardy?

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CodeW
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Tue Jul 24, 2018 2:43 pm

Just asking if anybody is interested in the idea.
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Wed Jul 25, 2018 5:43 pm

Here's my idea. Please tell me your honest opinion about it. It's not yet complete.
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Wed Jul 25, 2018 5:45 pm

Tarantula-Man = Spider-Man
Moonlight Cat = Black Cat
Marie Jane = Mary Jane

Tarantula-Man's [William Parker] appearance:
https://imgur.com/mkyIaQX [Tarantula-Man]
https://imgur.com/C5gRC2G [William Parker]

Moonlight Cat's [Valencia Felino] appearance:
https://imgur.com/mkyIaQX

Marie Jane's appearance:
https://imgur.com/bKlvwvg

William has been feeling very lonely without Moonlight Cat around. She left William without saying a word. She took a flight to another country and lived there for 6 months, hoping she could escape her criminal past. Within the 6 months that she wasn't around, William and Marie Jane have gotten very close to each other, so close that Marie even accepted William's proposal for marriage.

Bored of living life as a normal person, Moonlight Cat decided to return to the country where it all started. She missed the feeling of being chased by cops and Tarantula-Man. Money is never the real reason why she steals. Every successfully stolen item looks like a trophy to her. She felt nauseous when Tarantula-Man removed his mask. William then knew that Moonlight Cat never loved the man behind the mask. She is only interested in Tarantula-Man and Tarantula-Man alone. On the other hand, Marie Jane wants William to stop being Tarantula-Man and live a normal life with her.

Moonlight Cat was shocked when she heard from her friends that Tarantula-Man is no longer single. All of a sudden, she felt extremely jealous of this lady that managed to steal him from her paws. She was afraid that he would start avoiding her. She then decided to give Tarantula-Man a call.

Valencia: Hey there, spider boy. I wanna be tangled up in your sticky webs tonight. Got time for some fun?

William: I'm very sorry, Cat. I'm married now. I gotta remain faithful to my wife. Talk to ya some other time. My wife's waiting for me at home. Bye!

Valencia: Wait! Hello? Ugh! I cannot believe this!

The next day [1 AM Midnight]

William: With great power comes great responsibility. I'll never forget those words, Uncle Ken.

TV News Reporter: This just in. Moonlight Cat is back and she has stolen the Pink Lust diamond from the Cheveux Museum.

William: Forgive me, Marie Jane. The city needs me.

Marie Jane: Zzz... Zzz...

With webs stickier than a man's sperm, Tarantula-Man swinged his way to the Cheveux Museum, hoping that Moonlight Cat is still somewhere nearby. Upon arriving at the Cheveux Museum, he realized that he was already too late to stop her.

Valencia: Looking for me, spider boy? I'm at your house right now.

William: My house?! Don't you dare lay a finger on Marie Jane!

Valencia: Aren't you forgetting something?

William: Oh, right. I almost forgot. The diamond! Put it back where it belongs, Cat!

Valencia: Come and get it, spider boy. * hangs up on Tarantula-Man *

William: Could it be a trap? Marie Jane's life is in danger. I gotta head back ASAP.

Back at home

Moonlight Cat is wearing something like this:
https://imgur.com/BnxxvFH

Moonlight Cat is lying on a couch like this:
https://imgur.com/68zc8HA [With or without high heels. Whichever you prefer.]
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Neyzar060
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Wed Jul 25, 2018 11:16 pm

Well I like the plot and love to see someone interested on writting a Spidy idea ^^ It seems she would make use of the diamond there!

By the way, check out Valencia Felino's pic, you put Tarantula-man's pic again instead of hers.
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Thu Jul 26, 2018 1:12 am

Neyzar060 wrote:
Wed Jul 25, 2018 11:16 pm
Well I like the plot and love to see someone interested on writting a Spidy idea ^^ It seems she would make use of the diamond there!

By the way, check out Valencia Felino's pic, you put Tarantula-man's pic again instead of hers.
I'm so happy right now! Thank you so much, Neyzar! Yeah, I'm still thinking about how she could make use of that diamond. Kinda stuck right now Ahaha

Thanks for pointing out my mistake. I'll correct it ASAP.
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Thu Jul 26, 2018 7:06 am

CodeW wrote:
Thu Jul 26, 2018 1:12 am
Neyzar060 wrote:
Wed Jul 25, 2018 11:16 pm
Well I like the plot and love to see someone interested on writting a Spidy idea ^^ It seems she would make use of the diamond there!

By the way, check out Valencia Felino's pic, you put Tarantula-man's pic again instead of hers.
I'm so happy right now! Thank you so much, Neyzar! Yeah, I'm still thinking about how she could make use of that diamond. Kinda stuck right now Ahaha

Thanks for pointing out my mistake. I'll correct it ASAP.
Your welcome ^^
If you want I could help you via email or something.
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Thu Jul 26, 2018 10:39 am

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Your welcome ^^
If you want I could help you via email or something.
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I'd love to hear your suggestions. My email is codew9688@gmail.com
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CodeW
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Thu Jul 26, 2018 1:14 pm

I think I need to rewrite the whole thing Ahaha
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Neyzar060
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Thu Jul 26, 2018 1:16 pm

CodeW wrote:
Thu Jul 26, 2018 1:14 pm
I think I need to rewrite the whole thing Ahaha
Why? Something doesn't convince you?

By the way I just sent you an email ^^
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Thu Jul 26, 2018 1:29 pm

Neyzar060 wrote:
Thu Jul 26, 2018 1:16 pm
CodeW wrote:
Thu Jul 26, 2018 1:14 pm
I think I need to rewrite the whole thing Ahaha
Why? Something doesn't convince you?

By the way I just sent you an email ^^
Everything I wrote afterwards was just terrible. I might make some changes here and there.

Yup, seen it and replied to it. Thanks for helping me out!
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