Just resubmitted TPATT and I have to say, I really thought it would do better than it did in that last round...
Can I ask for feedback? Possible improvements?
The Princess and the Thief
I wish I had something more constructive to say, but I can't really think of anything wrong with it. 
Though, there is one thing I was wondering, what's with the tiny "TM" at the end of the sentence at the top?
Though, there is one thing I was wondering, what's with the tiny "TM" at the end of the sentence at the top?
A steamy story from the heart of France, starring a beautiful princess and a pair of Hilariously Incompetent Criminals™!
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anonymoosefan
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Just a little joke about how common the "bumbling criminal" trope is.
