Thuna vs. Griselda!

Serrated
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Sun Jun 10, 2018 5:03 am

Hey all, I got a new idea for Thuna Thunder Juggs the next Serega round. Since my idea didn't do that well last time, I am going to change it up a bit and cut out a lot of the historical background. If you love detail that makes sense, I think I am going to do away with that this time and have less back story. For those of you who like story, don't worry, it will still be there but won't be as long winded.

So instead of Thuna getting shipwrecked and discovering a totally new and uninhabited island I am going to have her awake upon the shores of MNF kingdom. There she will meet a gnome who tries to help her and takes her back to his village to get her some food and water, but on their way back the gnome finds that his home is under attack by the orcs, lead by no other than Griselda the Gifted and her pack of dark forest orcs.

The male gnome panics and pleads Thuna for her help, feeling grateful that the gnome awakened her on the beach Thuna draws her greatsword and dives into the action slaying one orc after another until the rest of the orcs retreat in fear, and all that is left is Griselda. Griselda however has no intention of letting this one human warrior defeat her so she lunges at Thuna. When her greataxe and Thuna's her greatsword, clash both weapons break. So now they are left with there bare hands and are trying to wrestle each other, both with their massive tits colliding against each other. Eventually Thuna wins and gets Griselda to submit. Griselda knows when she is defeated and offers her life to male gnome. The male gnome decides to be benevolent and spare her, her life, if she becomes the sex slave for him and all the other male gnomes for a month. She reluctantly accepts and than the fun begins, meanwhile Thuna watches on with amazement as she is shocked by the size of the cocks on the male gnomes and after playing with her pussy, by watching Griselda take one gnome cock after another, she joins in the fun and starts sucking and tit fucking the gnomes as well, and what started as a battle ends as one big orgy.

Anyway, this is a rough draft of an idea. it takes me a few hours to go over and iron out the details again and again. So any suggestions, comments or criticisms for this idea?
crocdeloup
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Sun Jun 10, 2018 5:45 am

Hello, for me the idea is not great you should go on something other than creature (gnome, orc, etc ...) he already has a game in this style in preparation.

You should leave on an idea in the viking world, like clan alliance thanks to sex (thuna fuck the leaders in exchange for their help for an invasion for example)
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Jimjim3DX
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Sun Jun 10, 2018 3:11 pm

Personally I prefer this new version of the idea serrated, especially if we get to see the return of Griselda so soon ;). I hope this idea wins at the next Serega vote.
Serrated
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Sun Jun 10, 2018 5:21 pm

Jimjim3DX wrote:
Sun Jun 10, 2018 3:11 pm
Personally I prefer this new version of the idea serrated, especially if we get to see the return of Griselda so soon ;). I hope this idea wins at the next Serega vote.
Thanks Jim, I appreciate that! ;)
junky
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Sun Jun 10, 2018 7:43 pm

I liked the first version more since it was an introduction of Thuna. And it didn't got bad score it's just that schollgirl curse it's a popular serie and it won.

And what about OJLFS P2?
Serrated
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Sun Jun 10, 2018 11:09 pm

junky wrote:
Sun Jun 10, 2018 7:43 pm
I liked the first version more since it was an introduction of Thuna. And it didn't got bad score it's just that schollgirl curse it's a popular serie and it won.

And what about OJLFS P2?
Lust for Sail might come first, because it's been about a year since the first one was released. So it's absolutely possible I might make that first.
jradi5
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Mon Jun 11, 2018 9:23 am

I will look forward to either version. However, the idea of Thuna vs. Griselda sounds great!
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Caliborn
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Tue Jun 12, 2018 12:16 am

That could turn out to be pretty good ! I'm guessing we'd get 2 sex scenes with Griselda and then 2 with Thuna ?
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Wed Jun 13, 2018 12:32 am

Caliborn wrote:
Tue Jun 12, 2018 12:16 am
That could turn out to be pretty good ! I'm guessing we'd get 2 sex scenes with Griselda and then 2 with Thuna ?
They usually only draw three these days. So probably one with Thuna, one with Griselda, and then another with both Thuna and Griselda. Off the top of my head, I think a cool final scene (with both amazons) would be if they were on all fours, facing the camera, while some diminutive gnomes pounded them from behind.
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Thu Jun 14, 2018 1:55 am

Serrated wrote:
Wed Jun 13, 2018 12:32 am
Caliborn wrote:
Tue Jun 12, 2018 12:16 am
That could turn out to be pretty good ! I'm guessing we'd get 2 sex scenes with Griselda and then 2 with Thuna ?
They usually only draw three these days. So probably one with Thuna, one with Griselda, and then another with both Thuna and Griselda. Off the top of my head, I think a cool final scene (with both amazons) would be if they were on all fours, facing the camera, while some diminutive gnomes pounded them from behind.
Yes, that last scene sounds great!
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