Characters & Places
Ms. Veronica Knelz
https://e-hentai.org/s/52c9ba8e86/716532-1
( body figure and outfit )
(Patient Tristan ) no needed detail of male face
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Ms. Daphne ( Secertary)
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(Counselors building)
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(Ms. Veronica Office )
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Story & Dialog
( Back View Of Tristan sitting on the caoch at home watching T.V and a Ad plays of New The Counselors office)
T.V Ad: " Hello there are you in need ofguidance with problems problems in life
Tristan: " Pff as if "
T.V Ad: " Are you struggling with your Margie ?
Tristan: " Single Life 4ever "
T.V Ad: " Do you struggle with weight loss"
Tristan: " Bruh im fit as fuck" (Flexes arms)
T.V Ad: " Do you have problems in bed with the ladies " ?
Tristan: " I dont think so ... maybe?"
T.V Ad: " Well you're in Luck Come down to The new Counselors Offices at 6969 S Banger St and call 555-2115 to make your appointment today
Tristan: "I better check this place out !"
Tristan (calling): "Hi there I Would like to make an appointment "
Tristan : "Oh so tomorrow at 2:30 p.m got it "
( The Next day )
(Tristan waiting in the lounge ready to be called up )
Daphne: "Tristan!"
Tristan:" That's me !"
Daphne: " Right this way please"
(Tristan knocks on the door)
Veronica: "Come in"
(door opens)
(Veronica sitting down in her chair)
https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post& ... id=1968430
Tristan : "Hi there nice to meet you Im"..(get interpreted)
Veronica: "Tristan I know so what brings you here today ?"
Tristan: "Well the thing is that im not so good with the ladies in bed. "
Veronica: Mph.. That can be ....easily fixed. but tell me whats the problem can you not keep it hard,
Tristan : "NO "
Veronica : "Are you into men and you just dont know it yet ?"
Tristan : "GOD NO"
Veronica: "Then What is it Tristan !"
Tristan : I cant cum at all !"
Veronica: " Have you tried to masturbate ?
Tristan : Yea I'v tried every thing doc i can cum and i don't know why it like nothing excites me any more
Veronica :what kind of woman do you usually have sex with.
Tristan: mostly girl my age.
Veronica have you ever had any older woman like a milf or a cougar ?
Tristan : No i they wouldn't be able handle me .
Veronica : is that so .. very well get up and pull you pants down
(Tristan pull down his paint and cock flips out and smack Veronica boobs playable scene)
https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post& ... id=2119271
Veronica : Well my god you are huge no wounder why you cant cum this thing is a monster
Tristan: Thanks Doc ! But what can you do to help me !
Veronica : Im gonna give you 4 exercises for today session if that doesn't work then nothing will.
Sex Scenes
( Try to make the cock long and thick)
Sex Scenes1
Blow job /w double handjob
https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post& ... id=2605576
Veronica: Alright im gonna go slow build the patse and dont be afraid to cum i like to swallow ( winks)
Tristan : Nice Spitters are quitters.
Veronica thought: (Slow ) it completely filled my mouth
Veronica: (Medium) : Now ill try to take it deeper
Veronica: (Hard) :Grab my head and take me balls deep
Tristan: You got crazy lady
Veronica: Mmpfff
Veronica: (Manuel ) lets see how long i can have your long cock in my throat
( a timer will go on when you have her deepthraoting )
(Bounes) if you held her for 1 minute
https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post& ... id=1923835
Sex Scene 2 Tit Fuck
https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post& ... id=2457076
( pours oil on her boobs)
Veronica: Now it time for the second exercise
Veronica: (Slow) Mmm your cock is throbbing
Tristan your huge tits are so soft
Veronica: (Medium) fuck my huge fucking tit
Veronica: (Hard ) i want you to cum all over my tits an face Tristan do you hear me
Tristan Yes Ma'am
Tristan : I'M CUMMING ugghhhhgg
Veronica very good just two more exercises
Sex Scene 3
https://e-hentai.org/s/1f6d105200/1032559-33
Veronica: Alright Tristan don't let me down now i want you to wreck my pussy and ass
Tristan you Go it !
(pussy)
Veronica : (Slow ) "mmph godd that feel good !"
Veronica : (Medium) "If you keep this up ill go crazy"
Veronica: (Hard "YES YES YESS FUCK MY PUSSY KEEP GOING UNTIL YOU CUM IN SIDE OF ME !''
(creampies)
Veronica : That was such a huge load some fo your cum is spilling out of me
(ANAL)
Veronica : "Now shove that cock up my ass !"
Tristan: "My god no woman ever wanted my cock up there as before !"
Veronica(Slow)" Mmm yes keep pushing!"
Veronica ( Medium) OH Gwad yes i can feel it hitting my stomach
Veronica ( Hard ) IM CUMING IM CUMING IM CUMINGGGGG .... OH GOD YES
(anal Creampie)
(Fades black to next scene)
( https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post& ... id=1968430)
Ms. Veronica sitting on her chair next drenched in come all over her body and cum over following from her pussy and dripping down from the chair to the floor . While Tristan is passed out on the floor right next to Veronica
Veronica : Very good Tristan i excpeted you to vist me every two week from on on
Tristan : mmmm .. k
Veronica : (pages Daphne ) Can you come and bring the clean up kit and when your done please bring in my next Apointment
The End
The Sex Cosnluer
As for what I think, it's alright I guess, but I think it's kinda pointless including an image for the secretary and making her that hot and then not include her in any of the sex scenes. It's just a waste of potential.
Also It's Kelumir, not Kelmar.
Anyway, here are your adjustments.
The Sex Counsellor
Characters & Places
Dr. Veronica Knelz
( Her body and outfit. )
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Tristan ( I don’t really mind what he looks like, but could you please give him hair and a beard like this? )
https://ibb.co/d8Bauc
Ms. Daphne ( Secretary )
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( Counsellors building. )
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( Veronica’s Office )
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Story & Dialog
( The game starts with a view of Tristan from behind as he’s sitting on the couch at home watching T.V. as an ad plays for the new Counsellors Office.)
T.V Ad: " Hello there are you in need of guidance with the problems in your life? "
Tristan: " Pfft, as if. "
T.V Ad: " Are you struggling with your marriage? "
Tristan: " Single life forever. "
T.V Ad: " Do you struggle with weight loss? "
Tristan: " Bruh I’m fit as fuck. " ( Flexes his arms. )
T.V Ad: " Do you have problems in bed with the ladies? "
Tristan: " I don’t think so. Well... maybe. "
T.V Ad: " Well you're in luck. Come down to the new Counsellors Offices at 6969 S. Banger St. Or call 555-2115 to make your appointment today. "
Tristan: " Hmm... Maybe I ortta check this place out. "
Tristan picks up his phone and calls the number.
Tristan: " Hi there. I would like to make an appointment. "
Tristan: " Ok. Uh-huh. So tomorrow at 2:30, got it. "
( The Next Day. )
( Tristan is waiting in the lounge of the Counsellors Office waiting to be called in. )
Daphne: " Ok, Tristan? "
Tristan: " That's me. "
Daphne: " Alright then. Right this way please. "
( Daphne shows Tristan down the hall to DR. Veronica’s office and he knocks on the door. )
Veronica: " Come in. "
( Tristan opens the door and steps into the office. Dr. Veronica is sitting in her chair with her pen and notepad, like this. )
https://ibb.co/jdV1Zc
Tristan: " Hey there, it’s nice to meet you. I’m... "
Veronica: " Tristan, I know. So, what brings you here today? "
Tristan: " Well, the thing is... I’m not very good with the ladies in bed. "
Veronica: " Hmph. That can be... Easily fixed. But tell me, what exactly is the problem? Can you not keep it hard? "
Tristan: " NO! "
Veronica: " Are you into men and you just don’t know it yet? "
Tristan: " GOD NO!! "
Veronica: " Then what is it Tristan? "
Tristan: " I just can’t cum at all. "
Veronica: " Have you tried masturbating? "
Tristan: " Yeah, I've tried everything doc. I can’t cum and I don't know why. It’s like nothing excites me anymore. "
Veronica: " What kind of woman do you usually have sex with? "
Tristan: " Mostly girls my own age. "
Veronica: " Have you ever had any older woman, like a milf or a cougar? "
Tristan: " No, they wouldn't be able handle me. "
Veronica: " Is that so? Very well, why don’t we put that to the test shall we? Get up and pull you pants down. "
( Tristan stands up, pulls down his pants and his cock flops out and smacks Veronica’s boobs. Option to replay the scene. )
https://ibb.co/cUu60H
Veronica: " Oh My God! You are huge. No wonder you can’t cum. This thing is a monster. "
Tristan: " Thanks Doc. But what can you do to help me? "
Veronica: "I’m gonna give you 4 exercises for today’s session. If that doesn't work, then nothing will. "
Sex Scenes
( Note for Artist: Please try to make the cock long and thick. )
Sex Scene 1: Blow job with double hand-job
https://ibb.co/hN85uc
Veronica: " Alright I’m gonna go slow, build the pace and don’t be afraid to cum. I like to swallow. " ( Winks. )
Tristan: " Nice. Spitters are quitters. "
Veronica thought: (Slow) ( Oh god, it completely fills my mouth. )
Veronica: (Medium) " Now I’ll try to take it deeper. "
Veronica: (Hard) " Grab my head and take me balls deep. "
Tristan: " You’re crazy lady. I like that. "
Veronica: " Mmpfff!! "
Veronica: (Manuel) " Let’s see how long I can hold your long cock in my throat. "
( A timer will start up when you have her deep throat Tristan’s cock. )
( Bonus if you were able to hold her for on it for 1 minute. )
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Sex Scene 2: Tit Fuck
https://ibb.co/k7FULH
( Veronica pours oil on her boobs. )
Veronica: " Now it’s time for the second exercise. "
Veronica: (Slow) " Mmm, your cock is throbbing so much. "
Tristan: " Your huge tits are so soft. "
Veronica: (Medium) " Fuck my huge fucking tits! "
Veronica: (Hard) " I want you to cum all over my tits and face Tristan! Do you hear me!? "
Tristan: " Yes Ma'am "
Tristan: " OH FUCK I'M CUMMING!! UGGHHHHGG!! "
Veronica: " Very good. Just two more exercises to go. "
Sex Scene 3: Missionary
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Veronica: " Alright Tristan, don't let me down now. I want you to wreck my pussy and ass. "
Tristan: " You Got It! "
(Pussy)
Veronica: (Slow) " Mmph, God that feels good! "
Veronica: (Medium) " If you keep this up I’ll go crazy! "
Veronica: (Hard) " YES! YES! YESS!! FUCK MY PUSSY!! KEEP GOING UNTIL YOU CUM INSIDE ME!! ''
(Tristan creampies her pussy.)
Veronica: " That was such a huge load. Some of your cum is spilling out of me. Just one exercise to go."
(Anal)
Veronica: " Now shove that cock up my ass! "
Tristan: " Oh my god. No woman ever wanted my cock up there before! "
Veronica: (Slow) " Mmm! Yes! Keep Pushing! "
Veronica: (Medium) " OH Gwad, Yes! I can feel it hitting my stomach! "
Veronica: (Hard) " I’M CUMING! I’M CUMING!! I’M CUMINGGGGG!!! .... OH GOD YES!!! "
(Anal Creampie)
(Screen fades black and changes to the next scene)
Dr. Veronica sitting in her chair with cum all over her body and following from her pussy and dripping down from the chair to the floor, while Tristan is passed out on the floor right next to Veronica.
Veronica: " Very good Tristan. I expect you to visit me every two weeks from on, ok? "
Tristan: " Mmmm... 'K. "
(Veronica pages Daphne.)
Veronica: Daphne, could you come and bring the clean-up kit please? And when you’re done please bring in my next appointment. "
Daphne: " Yes Dr. Veronica. "
The End
I don't know about anyone else but I think your story is kinda like... Move on to sex scene quickly, dialogue or story doesn't really matter. Story/Plot - Lacking. However, I like the character you used for this game, Murai Rinko.
I personally like the scenario, character is good as well. It does seem a little short though, especially since there's no mini-game involved. Though I'm not sure adding in mini-games just for the sake of it is necessarily a good idea. Not sure if it's the premise that's too basic or the writing that leads up to the sex scenes. It's almost as if there's no real drama?(not sure if that's the right word). Like basically when all is said and done he just pulls down his pants then gets a free fuck. Fleshing out the story and characters a bit more might go a long way especially if you're planning to make a series out of it.