That, or maybe make it so it's Bebop and Rocksteady before Shredder turned them into mutants.DerLurker wrote: ↑Thu Feb 08, 2018 8:56 amOr a simpler solution: Making Bebop and Rocksteady like 96% human through some humanizing potion with just small details remaining qho they actually are.
It's the winner of a vote, that should have been removed before it could get so much votes, so it deserves to be made and not tossed away.
More game ideas!
At the moment I still aren't sure that CCBILL allows sex scenes among the non-human characters. I sent them a request to them with this question. When I got the answer I will decided which idea to make. I'm afraid the April's idea with humanized characters will be not that juicy.
Hey, I'm thinking of submitting this script I just made as an idea, but idk if there's things I must change or if I can improve it.
Particularly I find it pretty long, having 5 sex scenes, but idk if it'll be a real problem. There's quite a bit of character exposition, as well.
https://pastebin.com/ba60Pxd9
The name is "Game of the Scarlet Devil" and it takes place in the Touhou Project universe.
What do you guys think?
Particularly I find it pretty long, having 5 sex scenes, but idk if it'll be a real problem. There's quite a bit of character exposition, as well.
https://pastebin.com/ba60Pxd9
The name is "Game of the Scarlet Devil" and it takes place in the Touhou Project universe.
What do you guys think?
Sadly I don't have the time to read it now as I have to leave for work soon, but what I can tell you is that you need to remove one of the sex scenes as we're not allowed to make games with 5 anymore.
It;'s been a rule for a while now that they all have to have a maximum of 4.
It;'s been a rule for a while now that they all have to have a maximum of 4.
Ok, I've just finished reading through it, and there are a few things I'd like to mention.Caliborn wrote: ↑Sat Feb 10, 2018 12:05 amHey, I'm thinking of submitting this script I just made as an idea, but idk if there's things I must change or if I can improve it.
Particularly I find it pretty long, having 5 sex scenes, but idk if it'll be a real problem. There's quite a bit of character exposition, as well.
https://pastebin.com/ba60Pxd9
The name is "Game of the Scarlet Devil" and it takes place in the Touhou Project universe.
What do you guys think?
First, the image you have for Jake was already used by Dwayne for one of the guys in Cassie Cannons: MILF Journalist. I would recommend finding a new one.
Second, aside from having 5 sex scenes, the length shouldn't be that much of a problem. Though you might want to remove one or two lines of dialogue here and there just to be sure, but it's up to you if you actually want to, so you don't have to. I also spotted a few grammar issues and typos, but I'd be glad to help with those.
Lastly, with each sex scene you have several "parts" for them. That is a bit too complex.
Let's look at sex scene 4 as an example:
Part 1 is describing a double blowjob. Part 2 is describing a cowgirl scene with a second girl teasing the guy. And Part 3 is describing a scene with standing missionary with one girl while fingering and making out with another.Caliborn wrote:SCENE 4 (Remilia & Flandre)
Part 1: They're in a room. Jake is sitting on a bed, Remilia and Flandre are lying down on each of his legs. Both are licking Jake's dick, Flandre on the right side and Remilia on the left side from our perspective (inspired by this https://hitomi.la/reader/666737.html#19 ). The player can chose one who will suck Jake's cock, while the other with lick his balls. At the end, the player can chose who Jake will fuck.
Part 2: Jake is sitting on the border of the bed, and the one the player chose is bounching on his dick with her hands on Jake's shoulders. Jake is holding her near her belly. The other girl is behind Jake, teasing his nipples and licking his ear.
Part 3: The one the player chose is lying down on the bed with her dress open in the middle, to let her tits appear. Jake is standing on the ground and fucking her, while fingering the other girl, who is standing next to him, kissing him.
Finish: Jake cums inside the girl the player chose. The other girl is cumming as well.
That is 3 different sex scenes by itself. You need to reduce each scene to have so it's just one of the "parts" you currently have.
I hope this has been helpful.
(Posting with a new account because I can't access the former for some reason, it tells me the password doesn't match even though I changed it multiple times)
Thanks for answering. Changing the example image shouldn't be a problem, however I didn't know you couldn't have "parts" for sex scenes, I've seen a lot of MnF games with them, were they always threated individually?
Also, I was wondering if loli is an issue. Because the only example I can find is Romani in Majora and the game seems to be very old. That would be kind of a shame if I had to cut Flandre and Remilia since they're some of the most popular and iconic characters in the cast.
Also yes, english isn't my first language so maybe there'll be a few typos and grammar issues, it'd be awesome if you could help with them as well.
Thanks for answering. Changing the example image shouldn't be a problem, however I didn't know you couldn't have "parts" for sex scenes, I've seen a lot of MnF games with them, were they always threated individually?
Also, I was wondering if loli is an issue. Because the only example I can find is Romani in Majora and the game seems to be very old. That would be kind of a shame if I had to cut Flandre and Remilia since they're some of the most popular and iconic characters in the cast.
Also yes, english isn't my first language so maybe there'll be a few typos and grammar issues, it'd be awesome if you could help with them as well.