The corrpetd battle nun

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(intro)
In the 69th millennia there is only War . The Chapter house The Sisters of Lust have been given an assignment by Lady Victrola to recover twomissing battle sister that has been captured by the enemy of man . This tasked was sent to the leader of the Chapter House , Canoness Natasha one of the most decorative sister with countless victory under her name .

Characters
(Natasha)
https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post& ... id=2667425

(sex scene outfit)https://c.76.my/Malaysia/women-black-br ... nsss@7.jpg

(Mistres Victrola)
https://www.pinterest.com/pin/407786941239353768/

(demon Lord )
https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post& ... id=2905077


(Back grounds)
(sister of Lust battle ship)
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/v6vqd

(Demon Cathedral)
https://www.deviantart.com/chriscold/ar ... -482321872

(Hell-Ripper)
https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/yug ... 0827013905

Dialog)

( Scene1)

* intercom* "Incoming message "
Victrola : Hello Natasha , i see your back from your previous mission, was it success .
Natasha: " yes My lady ."
Victrola : "Good , Now that your back Im tasking you out on a important mission.
Natasha: " And what will have me do my Mistress .
Victrola: Two of our Sister have gone MIA and we believe they are being held here on this planet! (hologram shows the planet)
Natasha: Is that Hell-ripper , the planet that infested with demon spawns ?!
Victrola: Yes you are correct my dear . you will have to go alone.
Natasha: and what fight every single demon by myself.
Victrola: No you will have to sneak in and recover your Sisters they are being held in the Demon lords thrown room.
Natasha : yes Mistress Victrola it will be done. (1 hour passed)

(Scene 2 )
*Victrola Land safely on Hell_ripper *
Natsha: this place is hell hole ... lol alright let follow this beacon
(1 hour passes)
Natasha: (thought)" My god this is where my battle sisters are being captive . The horrors the demons must of put them through i gotta hurry before
im too late.

(Scene 3 )
*Natasha sneaked into the Demon lord Thrown room
Natasha : this must be the place but where are they its so dark in here ?
*muffled noises *
Natasha: "There they are " are ok my sisters !?

*the room is lit and revels the hinding demon lord * take the demon girl away *
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Demon Lord : HAAHHA i see you fell for my trap Canoness Natasha !
Natasha: shit im surrounded !
Demon lord : you thought you can come in here without me noticing !
Natasha: *thoguht* Well that would explain why it was so easy to sneak in here.
Demon: Now what to do with you mmmm?
Natasha: how about unchain me and ill show you what i can do to you .
Demon Lord : My children what say you how shall we punish this Sister of Lust .
Demon crowd: Taint her soul .
Demon lord: you heard them Natasha now time for the ritual

Sex Scene 1 Bj *Cums* either face or swallows

https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post& ... id=2881148

Natasha: get that out of my face you demon filth.
Demon Lord : After im done with you your gonna beg for my cock to fill you up
Natasha is cock is so thick it fill my whole mouth.
Demon lord you like that huh bicth!
*Cums*
Demon lord : how my cum taste bitch
Natash: Like crap ... *thought* some how it taste sweet and iwant more*

Sex scene 2 missionary
https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post& ... id=2905543

Demon Lord : let see if my cock can fit in your tit pussy .
Natasha: Go ahed i probably wont feel thing *thought* my god he gonna tear me apart
Demon lord: ohhh yea thats a tight fight
Natasha: why does it feel so good if he keep it up longer im gonna lose my mind
*cums *
Natasha: more.
Demon lord :more of what !
Natasha: I need more thick demon cock !!!
Demon lord :Hahaha i told you i would change your mind.

sex scene 3 Dp
https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post& ... id=2532733

Demon lord : Let see if you can handle two of us Natasha !
Natasha: ram those thick demon cocks in me !!
Demon Lord: We wont stop until your filled with our cum
*cums*
Natasha: ohh my im so full of cum i cant think straight
Demon Lord : now your mine natasha

https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post& ... id=2532767
End Scene *with Natasha in the middle with both of her battle sister on the sides

To be continued!

[anonymoosefan]

Love it!

[omfgdafuqsomething]

any good 40K puns? xD

Either way. Slaanesh approves.

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Lol i can add some and If you have any let me know and i can add it too

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So looks like my game wont win this time but i still have hope so if there any thing I can improve let me know

[anonymoosefan]

So looks like my game wont win this time but i still have hope so if there any thing I can improve let me know

If the demon lord is a shemale perhaps she should be called a demon queen?
Either way, in the threesome for scene 4, does the demon lord invite in a second demon or create some sort of magic copy of herself? Because you should probably specify that.
Also maybe switch the images for Natasha and Mistress Victrola since the second looks a lot more like a nun (and hotter too).

Lastly, maybe edit the spelling & grammar?
Every little bit helps!

[sigmar]

Good idea, I just hope that the rest of the people on this site will vote it in. I get tired of seeing the same game come out time and time again. And you know exactly what I mean. neardy guy/buff guy fucks ridiculously big tit girls.

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I feel yea really appreciate all the support

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Also if there's anything and put that you would like to give to improve the story let me know or if you want to proof read what I typed any kind of help will be gladly appreciated

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hey guys I'm back again !! I was going over my 2 stories I wrote if anyone has the time to look over them for errors I will gladly appreciate it !!