Elica Hoonkers The Lost Woods Quest
All in all I think it's good, though you still need to update your submission as it still has the incomplete image links. And on the subject of links, have you put any more thought into my suggestion of changing the second sex scene? Or would you prefer to stick with what you have?
Also, I’m working on a version of your idea with the spelling and grammar fixes I promised. It’s almost done, I’m just waiting to know if you want to change sex scene 2 to my suggestion or not.
I’m also working on another little surprize for you.
Also, I’m working on a version of your idea with the spelling and grammar fixes I promised. It’s almost done, I’m just waiting to know if you want to change sex scene 2 to my suggestion or not.
I’m also working on another little surprize for you.
im sorry yea make that change , Look If this story gets to be a popular one i want my fans to help me in anyway possible . the story isnt just for me it for other to share and experience i want this not to be my idea ( kinda is ) but later stories to be the fan on them coming to together and creating some fun and exotic !
Ok JINXED, here's the fixed version I promised.
And if you're still wondering what the surprise I mentioned is, check the links under "Characters".
Story:
Elica works as a maid in the Wild Boar Traven. She is sick of her job with little pay and no fun. All she dreams about is being a member of the Adventurer's Guild, but the only thing that's holding her back is the expensive members fee needed to join. Which is 500 Gold coins. So, she decides one night, after having a bad day of work, to steal her boss’s secret stash of gold and run away to the Adventurer’s Guild. The Morning Elica arrives at the Adventurer's Guild, she pays the fee, joins the guild and is given a guild members uniform. She then gets sent out to investigate a mysterious cave in the Lost Woods.
Characters
Bartender
https://i.pinimg.com/236x/78/d9/0c/78d9 ... 3c538a.jpg
Elica
(Tavern uniform)
https://image.ibb.co/cN1xUG/image.png
(Guild uniform)
https://image.ibb.co/cxdpbw/image.png
Orc 1, 2 & 3
https://images.dakkadakka.com/gallery/2 ... 20Orcs.jpg
Guild recruiter
https://orig00.deviantart.net/fa2f/f/20 ... 8m0cxa.jpg
Locations / Backgrounds
(The Wild Boar Tavern)
https://rpg.ambient-mixer.com/images_te ... 0_full.jpg (the Outside)
https://cdna.artstation.com/p/assets/im ... 1472592400
(Adventurer’s Guild)
https://hedrick-cs.deviantart.com/art/C ... -608736421
Sex scenes
(Scene 1) BJ & Tit Fuck
https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post& ... id=1925874
(Scene 2) Cowgirl & Double BJ
https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post& ... id=2327606
(Scene 3) Gangbang
https://www.8muses.com/comix/picture/Jo ... k-Cocks/71
(Last Scene) The Bukkake
https://www.8muses.com/comix/picture/Jo ... k-Cocks/82
(Please use the pic on right for the pose.)
Story Dialog
Elica: *Sigh*. “ I wish I could just go and join the Adventurer’s Guild. I could be off having all sorts of adventures. But instead, I’m stuck here. ”
Bartender: “ Elica! What’s the holdup? We got costumers and all you’re doing is daydreaming about joining that guild, aren't ya!? ”
Elica: “ No Sir! Sorry Sir, I’ll get back to work. ”
Later that night, after a hard day’s work of cleaning and serving customers, Elica is taking a bath and starts thinking of the guild and about how her life would be much better if she quit her boring job to join them. So, she gets dressed, grabs her stash of saved up gold and then sneaks into her boss’s room and steals his stash of gold as well, before she runs off into the night. The next morning, Elica arrives at the Adventurer’s Guild.
Guild Recruiter: “ Hi there traveller. What brings you here today? ”
Elica: “ Hi. I've come here to join the guild. ”
Guild Recruiter: “ Oh great, and I’m guessing you know about the members fee, right? ”
Elica: “ Yes. Here you go. ” (Elica gives the recruiter the bag of gold.)
Guild Recruiter: “ Alright, here's your standard guild uniform and weapon. Just put it on and follow me to the quest room. ”
(The two women move to the quest room.)
Guild Recruiter: “ This is where you can pick out quests that were given to us by people who need our help. ”
Guild Recruiter: “ Here, try this one. It's a simple recon quest. It’s an easy one for beginners. Just go check out this cave in the Lost Woods and see why people have been getting chased away from the cave. So just have a look around and here’s the map. ” (She gives Elica a map to the Lost woods)
Elica: “ Alright. Here I go. ”
Fades to the map with a red doted line showing Elica travelling to the Lost woods.
Elica arrives at the Lost Woods and takes the path to the mysterious cave. She sees the cave, but nothing is strange about it, so she wonders into the dark cave until she sees a light in the back of the cave. She sneaks up to the light and sees two huge orcs siting around a camp fire eating meat. She tries to sneak back out until she bumps into something behind her. She then gets picked up by a third orc and he brings her to the other two orcs and all three of them surround her.
(Side note) The orcs are speaking like this due to no education plus accent.
Orc 1: “ Wat’z diz boyz? ”
Orc 2: “ I'z thikz it’z won of dem ‘umen gurlz. ”
Orc 3: “ Wat she doing in ‘ere? I bet she ‘ere to steal sum of our Grog! ”
Orc 2: “ Naw. ‘Umenz don’t like orc Grog! ”
Orc 1: “ Yea. Wat’z you be doing in our cave ‘umen? ”
Elica: “ Nothing, I swear. I’m just passing by. ”
Orc 3: “ Tellz uz da truth or elze. ”
Elica: A-alright. Please don't eat me. I was sent here from my Guild to see what was scarring people away from this cave. ”
Orc 1: “ So you waz sent ‘ere to git rid of uz!? ”
Elica: “ NO! I swear! I was just about to leave. I mean no harm to you. But... ”
Orc 2: “ But wat? ”
Elica: “ You have to stop scaring people that come near your cave. If not, the guild that I came from will send someone to hunt you all down, so please stop. ”
Orc 1: “ Alright ‘umen lady, we’ll stahp... ”
Elica: “ Oh thank goodness. ”
Orc 1: “ For a price! ”
Elica: “ What do you want? Gold? ”
Orcs 1, 2 & 3: “ YES! ”
Elica: “ Sorry guys, but I’m broke. ”
Orc 3: “ If youz can’t pay uz in gold, then maybe we get to keepz you instead! ”
Elica: “ WHAT!? No Way! ”
Orc 2: “ ‘Owz about we get to fuck you? All three of uz? We ‘aven't ‘ad a good fucking in a while. Wat you say boyz!? ”
Orc 1 & 3: “ Yeaaaaa! ”
Elica: *Gulps* “ O-ok, fine. But if you must, promise me you will stop scarring people way. ”
Orc 1 2 & 3: “ We will. ”
Then the foursome begins.
And if you're still wondering what the surprise I mentioned is, check the links under "Characters".
Story:
Elica works as a maid in the Wild Boar Traven. She is sick of her job with little pay and no fun. All she dreams about is being a member of the Adventurer's Guild, but the only thing that's holding her back is the expensive members fee needed to join. Which is 500 Gold coins. So, she decides one night, after having a bad day of work, to steal her boss’s secret stash of gold and run away to the Adventurer’s Guild. The Morning Elica arrives at the Adventurer's Guild, she pays the fee, joins the guild and is given a guild members uniform. She then gets sent out to investigate a mysterious cave in the Lost Woods.
Characters
Bartender
https://i.pinimg.com/236x/78/d9/0c/78d9 ... 3c538a.jpg
Elica
(Tavern uniform)
https://image.ibb.co/cN1xUG/image.png
(Guild uniform)
https://image.ibb.co/cxdpbw/image.png
Orc 1, 2 & 3
https://images.dakkadakka.com/gallery/2 ... 20Orcs.jpg
Guild recruiter
https://orig00.deviantart.net/fa2f/f/20 ... 8m0cxa.jpg
Locations / Backgrounds
(The Wild Boar Tavern)
https://rpg.ambient-mixer.com/images_te ... 0_full.jpg (the Outside)
https://cdna.artstation.com/p/assets/im ... 1472592400
(Adventurer’s Guild)
https://hedrick-cs.deviantart.com/art/C ... -608736421
Sex scenes
(Scene 1) BJ & Tit Fuck
https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post& ... id=1925874
(Scene 2) Cowgirl & Double BJ
https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post& ... id=2327606
(Scene 3) Gangbang
https://www.8muses.com/comix/picture/Jo ... k-Cocks/71
(Last Scene) The Bukkake
https://www.8muses.com/comix/picture/Jo ... k-Cocks/82
(Please use the pic on right for the pose.)
Story Dialog
Elica: *Sigh*. “ I wish I could just go and join the Adventurer’s Guild. I could be off having all sorts of adventures. But instead, I’m stuck here. ”
Bartender: “ Elica! What’s the holdup? We got costumers and all you’re doing is daydreaming about joining that guild, aren't ya!? ”
Elica: “ No Sir! Sorry Sir, I’ll get back to work. ”
Later that night, after a hard day’s work of cleaning and serving customers, Elica is taking a bath and starts thinking of the guild and about how her life would be much better if she quit her boring job to join them. So, she gets dressed, grabs her stash of saved up gold and then sneaks into her boss’s room and steals his stash of gold as well, before she runs off into the night. The next morning, Elica arrives at the Adventurer’s Guild.
Guild Recruiter: “ Hi there traveller. What brings you here today? ”
Elica: “ Hi. I've come here to join the guild. ”
Guild Recruiter: “ Oh great, and I’m guessing you know about the members fee, right? ”
Elica: “ Yes. Here you go. ” (Elica gives the recruiter the bag of gold.)
Guild Recruiter: “ Alright, here's your standard guild uniform and weapon. Just put it on and follow me to the quest room. ”
(The two women move to the quest room.)
Guild Recruiter: “ This is where you can pick out quests that were given to us by people who need our help. ”
Guild Recruiter: “ Here, try this one. It's a simple recon quest. It’s an easy one for beginners. Just go check out this cave in the Lost Woods and see why people have been getting chased away from the cave. So just have a look around and here’s the map. ” (She gives Elica a map to the Lost woods)
Elica: “ Alright. Here I go. ”
Fades to the map with a red doted line showing Elica travelling to the Lost woods.
Elica arrives at the Lost Woods and takes the path to the mysterious cave. She sees the cave, but nothing is strange about it, so she wonders into the dark cave until she sees a light in the back of the cave. She sneaks up to the light and sees two huge orcs siting around a camp fire eating meat. She tries to sneak back out until she bumps into something behind her. She then gets picked up by a third orc and he brings her to the other two orcs and all three of them surround her.
(Side note) The orcs are speaking like this due to no education plus accent.
Orc 1: “ Wat’z diz boyz? ”
Orc 2: “ I'z thikz it’z won of dem ‘umen gurlz. ”
Orc 3: “ Wat she doing in ‘ere? I bet she ‘ere to steal sum of our Grog! ”
Orc 2: “ Naw. ‘Umenz don’t like orc Grog! ”
Orc 1: “ Yea. Wat’z you be doing in our cave ‘umen? ”
Elica: “ Nothing, I swear. I’m just passing by. ”
Orc 3: “ Tellz uz da truth or elze. ”
Elica: A-alright. Please don't eat me. I was sent here from my Guild to see what was scarring people away from this cave. ”
Orc 1: “ So you waz sent ‘ere to git rid of uz!? ”
Elica: “ NO! I swear! I was just about to leave. I mean no harm to you. But... ”
Orc 2: “ But wat? ”
Elica: “ You have to stop scaring people that come near your cave. If not, the guild that I came from will send someone to hunt you all down, so please stop. ”
Orc 1: “ Alright ‘umen lady, we’ll stahp... ”
Elica: “ Oh thank goodness. ”
Orc 1: “ For a price! ”
Elica: “ What do you want? Gold? ”
Orcs 1, 2 & 3: “ YES! ”
Elica: “ Sorry guys, but I’m broke. ”
Orc 3: “ If youz can’t pay uz in gold, then maybe we get to keepz you instead! ”
Elica: “ WHAT!? No Way! ”
Orc 2: “ ‘Owz about we get to fuck you? All three of uz? We ‘aven't ‘ad a good fucking in a while. Wat you say boyz!? ”
Orc 1 & 3: “ Yeaaaaa! ”
Elica: *Gulps* “ O-ok, fine. But if you must, promise me you will stop scarring people way. ”
Orc 1 2 & 3: “ We will. ”
Then the foursome begins.
! Kelumir thank you so much this way better than what i could of done. and i like the desing on elica that what i was looking for man thank you soo much 
You said something about the link not working so i checked it out ,and it was just the back grounds everything else between the character design and the sex scenes are working perfectly just not the backgrounds but I was wondering would that matter because the artist can makeup a background for the story?