Hey, everyone. I was wondering what everyone thinks of this. Mizuki hasn’t had a game in over two years, so since she’s my favourite character, I decided to write this. I don’t have a premium account right now because I can’t afford it but I’d love to see this in action. Let me know what you think.
Diva Mizuki: Quiet On The Set!
Summary: Diva Mizuki shoots one of her porn movies. (I’d prefer if Serega makes this one.)
Characters:
- Diva Mizuki
- Baka
- James McJizz (Director) (https://www.shutterstock.com/image-vect ... -300791693)
- Jack (Actor) http://www.malemodel.us/photo-blog/hunk-121/ (First Guy)
Intro:
Opening Scene: Porn Studio (https://www.houzz.com/photos/modern/liv ... e--compact) (Take as many liberties as you want, I don’t really care how it looks)
McJizz is waiting impatiently with Baka.
McJizz: Quiet! Quiet, everyone!(Sigh) where is she? MIZUKI!
Mizuki: (Offscreen) Yeah?
McJizz: Come on! You’re on now!
Baka: Hey, don’t rush her, she needs to look as good as she can for this movie.
McJizz: Yeah, yeah, I know. I’m just hoping to win the MNF Porn Award for best film this year. I’ve been at this for 15 years and this is going to be the one! I can feel it!
Mizuki: (Offscreen) Sorry to keep you waiting!
McJizz: I guess it’s oka- WOAH!
Mizuki stands in front of a door wearing a revealing bath robe that can barely contain her tits (https://m.aliexpress.com/s/item/3254380 ... -Nightwear)
Mizuki: How do I look?
McJizz: (Drooling) Uh... Uh...
Baka: Like a million bucks, babe!
Mizuki: Thanks sweetie!
McJizz: Yes.. um.., Mizuki, I’d like you to meet your co-star Jack.
Camera pans to Jack, who is naked and has a raging boner
Jack: Hey, baby
Mizuki: Wow... Baka, you might have some competition, haha.
Baka: (Looks away in embarrassment)
McJizz: Well, let’s not waste anytime.
Mizuki has a seductive smirk and disrobes, becoming completely naked and making her tits bounce.
Mizuki: Oh, I can’t wait any longer...
McJizz: Ready? And action!
(I’d like to reiterate that everyone having sex in this game should be completely naked, no shoes or socks or anything. Thanks.)
Scene 1: Deepthroat (http://amator.szexkep.xyz/index.php?c=porngif&k=16)
Mizuki: Mmm... I want you to fucking ravage me! Don’t hold back!
Jack: Heh, if you fucking say so.
Easy: Slow and steady
Medium: Faster, a slight bulge appears in Mizuki’s throat when Jack’s dick goes all the way
Hard: Even harder than the reference gif, there’s a bulge in Mizuki’s throat and her eyes are closed
Cum: Gets faster and then slows down, cum leaks out of Mizuki’s mouth while Jack’s cock is still in her throat (Please don’t have cum come out of her nose, I’m not a fan of that)
Scene 2: Vaginal cowgirl (http://sexpositions.club/positions/27.html)
Jack: Alright, I’m gonna tear that tight pussy of yours!
Mizuki: Well, come on! I don’t have all day...
Stop: Mizuki rubs against Jack’s dick with a smirk on her face.
Easy: Slow and steady, Mizuki has a playful grin on her face, Jack also has one
Medium: Faster, Mizuki’s eyes are closed and she’s moaning, Jack’s eyes are closed and he’s seething his teeth
Hard: Very hard and fast, Mizuki’s eyes are shut tight and her mouth is wide open, Jack’s eyes have rolled backwards
Cum:
Jack: OH FUCK!
Mizuki: YEAH!
After cumming in Mizuki’s pussy, Jack looks absolutely exhausted while Mizuki has half lidded eyes and a seductive smile
Jack: Man, I’m completely spent, I can’t finish right now!
Mizuki: You’re joking, right?
Jack: I just can’t do it.
Mizuki: Well, how are we going to finish?
Camera pans over to Baka, completely naked with a full erection and a smug look on his face.
Baka: Move aside, junior, amateur hour’s over. It’s time for the big boys to play...
Scene 3: Doggy anal (http://x.imagefapusercontent.com/u/Secr ... 164892.gif) Scaled to include both Baka and Mizuki
Before penetration:
Mizuki: Oh, darling, you never let me down!
Baka: Don’t you know it. Alright, Jack, take notes and watch how a slut with big tits and a huge ass deserves to get fucked.
Easy: Slow, Mizuki has half lidden eyes and a sly grin, Baka has a devious smile on his face
Medium: Around the same speed as the reference gif, Mizuki has the same expression as the woman in the gif, Baka’s eyes are closed and his mouth is open like he’s moaning
Hard: Mizuki is getting absolutely pounded, her eyes are closed and her tongue is out, similar to Mizuki Tour, Baka’s eyes are closed and his tongue is also out
Cum: Harder then Baka slams down in her ass and cum leaks out. Afterwards they both smile at each other
Scene 4: Gangbang (https://171gifs.com/london-keyes-double ... s-gasms-2/) Gif at the bottom
You can’t really see the men’s faces but Baka fucks her pussy and Jack fucks her ass
Before penetration:
McJizz: (Offscreen) Last stretch, let’s do it!
Easy: Slow, alternating strokes, Mizuki has a rather stressed look on her face, similar to her face on Mizuki Tour during medium speed
Medium: Mizuki now has a smile on her face, faster, alternating strokes
Hard: Mizuki looks like she’s in absolute ecstasy, hard pounding at the same time
Cum: Baka and Jack cum at the same time and there’s a huge amount. Afterwards, everyone looks exhausted but happy.
5 months later
McJizz, Mizuki, Baka, and Jack are at the MNF Porn Awards all holding awards, the men are wearing black tuxedos, Mizuki is wearing a revealing red dress and high heels (http://www.tvguide.com/galleries/reveal ... t-1083645/)
McJizz: Thank you so much. I never would’ve thought that I’d win an award in my lifetime, let alone every single category!
McJizz: However, I could have never done it without my actor Jack, my producer Baka, who also starred in this film, and especially without the living legend herself, Diva Mizuki!
(Crowd applauds)
Mizuki steps up to the podium
Mizuki: This was, without a doubt, the greatest movie I’ve ever done! I get soaking wet just thinking about it! So, since I don’t have any plans tomorrow, everyone in the audience can come to my dressing room and fuck me however they want!
(Crowd cheers loudly)
Baka: (Teasingly) You’re such a slut, baby.
Mizuki; Yes, I am, honey. Yes, I am.
Game ends
Diva Mizuki: Quiet On The Set!
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Lordofbigboobs
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This looks good. Your dialogue are great your scenario amazing and the choice of the sex scene are the best you could choose. A great work to me.
All in all it looks good, however I personally think a couple of the image links need re-thinking.
The first is the link for sex scene 2, the vaginal cowgirl. While I the image is ok, I simply think you could find a better one. I mean, one reason I like using images that various adult artists have done is that I feel the hot sex going on in said images gives the members and MnF artists a better idea as to what's going on and get's a bit more excited.
The second one is the link for sex scene 4, the gang-bang. I find the link you've included a little confusing. Yes, I know you said the last two images, but there's still a number of images there. I feel it would be better if you included direct links to the images themselves rather than just the page you found them on.
Also, just Baka and Jack fucking Diva is more 'double-penetration' than 'gang-bang'. Maybe if the director got involved and had her suck his dick or he shoved it between her tits, then it would be a gang-bang.
The first is the link for sex scene 2, the vaginal cowgirl. While I the image is ok, I simply think you could find a better one. I mean, one reason I like using images that various adult artists have done is that I feel the hot sex going on in said images gives the members and MnF artists a better idea as to what's going on and get's a bit more excited.
The second one is the link for sex scene 4, the gang-bang. I find the link you've included a little confusing. Yes, I know you said the last two images, but there's still a number of images there. I feel it would be better if you included direct links to the images themselves rather than just the page you found them on.
Also, just Baka and Jack fucking Diva is more 'double-penetration' than 'gang-bang'. Maybe if the director got involved and had her suck his dick or he shoved it between her tits, then it would be a gang-bang.
I know but it can’t find the gif for scene 4 on its own. I did specify that it’s the one at the bottom. Also, I named it “gangbang” because I was going to have McJizz fuck her tits and/or mouth but I decided against it and I forgot to change the name.Kelumir wrote: ↑Sun Jan 14, 2018 8:43 pmAll in all it looks good, however I personally think a couple of the image links need re-thinking.
The first is the link for sex scene 2, the vaginal cowgirl. While I the image is ok, I simply think you could find a better one. I mean, one reason I like using images that various adult artists have done is that I feel the hot sex going on in said images gives the members and MnF artists a better idea as to what's going on and get's a bit more excited.
The second one is the link for sex scene 4, the gang-bang. I find the link you've included a little confusing. Yes, I know you said the last two images, but there's still a number of images there. I feel it would be better if you included direct links to the images themselves rather than just the page you found them on.
Also, just Baka and Jack fucking Diva is more 'double-penetration' than 'gang-bang'. Maybe if the director got involved and had her suck his dick or he shoved it between her tits, then it would be a gang-bang.
You mean, this image?
https://171gifs.com/wp-content/uploads/ ... asms-2.gif
Did you try right click and 'Open Image in New Tab'? That's what I did and it took me about 5 seconds.
I couldn’t. I wrote it on mobile.Kelumir wrote: ↑Sun Jan 14, 2018 10:58 pmYou mean, this image?
https://171gifs.com/wp-content/uploads/ ... asms-2.gif
Did you try right click and 'Open Image in New Tab'? That's what I did and it took me about 5 seconds.
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Sexy Mizuki
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I really hope a member will post this idea once they allow submissions!! Btw do you also like Jyubeis Diva Mizuki a lot?