Attack of the Ghost Charmer

[junky]

I liked the game through I think there's too much text for such small game. The scene with Nancy and the lesbo scene were good but the scene with the Ghostcharmer was meh, and she was the most sexier in the game which was dissapointing for me.

I think you guys should make less text for this serie, cuz it's getting really boring to get to the sex part playing through.

My rate is 7/10

[Jimjim3DX]

I liked the game through I think there's too much text for such small game. The scene with Nancy and the lesbo scene were good but the scene with the Ghostcharmer was meh, and she was the most sexier in the game which was dissapointing for me.

I think you guys should make less text for this serie, cuz it's getting really boring to get to the sex part playing through.

My rate is 7/10

Thanks for the feedback. Vadim did want it shorter, and it is a little bit shorter than the previous one. I'll try and work on that if I end up writing more. The dialogue is usually either character development or interactions, plot or task exposition (so the player knows what to click next etc), or humorous elements to try and make characters more interesting/fun etc. Not sure if cutting one element out specifically would make it better. I think I just need to streamline it a little better. I enjoy the visual novel style and getting to know the characters etc, but I know a good split of people would rather just get to the sex. There's the skip feature but I know a lot of people still want to know what's going on etc so it;s not always a good idea to skip.

Plus I'm nowhere near the best writer which probably shows the most during the sex scene dialogue since I have the hardest time trying not to be repetitive and using the same typical phrases. That's why I'm usually an artist who works with other writers, haha. It doesn't really make sense why I'm doing these when I think about it, but it's an enjoyable experience so I'll continue for as long as I'm able.

Anyway, I'll try and work on keeping things more concise in the future.

[junky]

I liked the game through I think there's too much text for such small game. The scene with Nancy and the lesbo scene were good but the scene with the Ghostcharmer was meh, and she was the most sexier in the game which was dissapointing for me.

I think you guys should make less text for this serie, cuz it's getting really boring to get to the sex part playing through.

My rate is 7/10

Thanks for the feedback. Vadim did want it shorter, and it is a little bit shorter than the previous one. I'll try and work on that if I end up writing more. The dialogue is usually either character development or interactions, plot or task exposition (so the player knows what to click next etc), or humorous elements to try and make characters more interesting/fun etc. Not sure if cutting one element out specifically would make it better. I think I just need to streamline it a little better. I enjoy the visual novel style and getting to know the characters etc, but I know a good split of people would rather just get to the sex. There's the skip feature but I know a lot of people still want to know what's going on etc so it;s not always a good idea to skip.

Plus I'm nowhere near the best writer which probably shows the most during the sex scene dialogue since I have the hardest time trying not to be repetitive and using the same typical phrases. That's why I'm usually an artist who works with other writers, haha. It doesn't really make sense why I'm doing these when I think about it, but it's an enjoyable experience so I'll continue for as long as I'm able.

Anyway, I'll try and work on keeping things more concise in the future.

Don't get me wrong, I like the idea and so. but once u played the game if u want to replay the scenes u have to pass thorugh all that amoun of text that u just loose the interest on it. just try to make the text part shorter.

And instead of focusing on text part focus more on the sex part to make it more arousing.

[Jimjim3DX]

Don't get me wrong, I like the idea and so. but once u played the game if u want to replay the scenes u have to pass thorugh all that amoun of text that u just loose the interest on it. just try to make the text part shorter.

And instead of focusing on text part focus more on the sex part to make it more arousing.

Yeah, at least there's the auto save feature now, so you can reload the game and go straight to the end for the scenes. It'd be nice to also have access to previous episodes scenes upon completing the most recent episode though. Especially since you can access the previous episodes from the start menu.

When you say focus more on the sex part, do you mean make the non-sex scene dialogue be more of a build up to the sex, rather than just straight character building, interactions or exposition? You're not wanting for more dialogue in the sex scenes themselves right?

Or did you simply mean, put more development time/focus on the sex scenes rather than other parts of the game? Anything animation/game play related is all Vadim, I don't really have any say in how he spends or divides his development time. I just wrote the dialogue for his revised idea.

To my understanding though, the animation and art process takes many weeks, and then adding all the dialogue I write takes only a few extra days at the end. The only way to give Vadim more time in that regard would be to come up with a scenario that would almost exclusively re-use existing art assets from previous episodes. That way the only thing he'd have to do is the three new animations and add it all together at the end. I think that could be where the series is headed in the eventual future, once enough characters have been introduced. But for now, I'm sure people would much rather have at-least 1 or 2 new (or new returning) characters per episode (with new items/locations) instead of just cycling through the 9-10 girls featured so far.

I've suggested to Vadim that next time there's an XXX files vote, that he just creates a list of possible characters (including returning ones) and members can just vote on that instead of submitting ideas for stories. Then the top 2 girls make it in and Vadim gets his pick of the third to keep it fair. That way at least people should be relatively happy with the character choices. Since I think the majority of members care more about having a satisfactory selection of girls over the plot specifics.

[junky]

I've suggested to Vadim that next time there's an XXX files vote, that he just creates a list of possible characters (including returning ones) and members can just vote on that instead of submitting ideas for stories. Then the top 2 girls make it in and Vadim gets his pick of the third to keep it fair. That way at least people should be relatively happy with the character choices. Since I think the majority of members care more about having a satisfactory selection of girls over the plot specifics.

Hey. that's a great idea.

[Kelumir]

Just out of curiosity, am I the only one who doesn't like Officer Watson's design?
I mean, first off there is the shape of his head, what with the wide chin/jawline and it looking like it's been stretched.
And second (and the biggest thing), if remember the first one correctly, he's meant to be a new recruit fresh out of the academy. But with the grey hair and glasses he looks like an old man (not that young people can't have glasses, but you get my point), and I find that very confusing and somewhat infuriating.

[junky]

Just out of curiosity, am I the only one who doesn't like Officer Watson's design?
I mean, first off there is the shape of his head, what with the wide chin/jawline and it looking like it's been stretched.
And second (and the biggest thing), if remember the first one correctly, he's meant to be a new recruit fresh out of the academy. But with the grey hair and glasses he looks like an old man (not that young people can't have glasses, but you get my point), and I find that very confusing and somewhat infuriating.

Agree about the design, don't like his head neither. But Vadim makes this style for most of his actual games
The only characters he makes that look nice are the ones from his older games cuz he tries to make them look like in previous games, except Busty Bomber I think she looked bad in the xxx files game. I aso didn't like how he made Mizuki.

[Jimjim3DX]

Yeah his design is a little confusing. How old is he supposed to be exactly? Plus, as time goes on things will probably only get worse so far as Watson's character is concerned. I mean, there's only so many stories you can do about him being a wimp or him fucking the villain or "oh no not those pesky aphrodisiacs!" before it gets stale and repetitive. I would like to see him go through some sort of arc over the course of the next few episodes but we'll have to see. It's Vadim's character so it's ultimately up to him if any change in direction was to occur.

I don't think he was fond of my idea of having some episodes told from other character's perspectives. Though I would still like to see an episode where something happens to Watson and you have to play as Mighty Mom or one of the other female characters, just to mix things up a bit.

'Juggs' is also a bit of an issue in this series. Since only Serega is allowed to animate her scenes. Plus we're not going to be able to write anything for her other than exposition and general lines etc, since she's a character that Serrated still has plans for. Which means she's kind of "in the way" in most episodes. An in-useable character that has to be included every time.

It'd be a different story if Vadim and Serega would collaborate on an episode, and Serrated was willing to write for it. But all things considered I don't really see that happening anytime soon, if ever.

[Pravus06]

Finally got around to playing it. A few thoughts.

1) I overall liked it. It was good!

2) Minigame was indeed a bit hard. It took me a bit to get used to it. Watson moves SO SLOW!

3) As others said, that final scene was just BEGGING for a gangbang.

4) It was a damn shame that Chief Juggs didn't go do Kid Pervert, but I 100% understand the story reason why not.

5) That bent over nurse in the hospital? I was hoping for something with her.

6) I 100% understand that if all my desires were implemented, the game would be too much work, so I still give the game like a solid 8/10.

[Jimjim3DX]

Finally got around to playing it. A few thoughts.

1) I overall liked it. It was good!

2) Minigame was indeed a bit hard. It took me a bit to get used to it. Watson moves SO SLOW!

3) As others said, that final scene was just BEGGING for a gangbang.

4) It was a damn shame that Chief Juggs didn't go do Kid Pervert, but I 100% understand the story reason why not.

5) That bent over nurse in the hospital? I was hoping for something with her.

6) I 100% understand that if all my desires were implemented, the game would be too much work, so I still give the game like a solid 8/10.

thanks for the feedback.

4) Less of a 'story' reason and more of a 'we can't use that character' reason.

5) Vadim added her, I suggested making a proper character out of her in a future episode, but we'll see.