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[crocdeloup]

Did you understand or need precision ?

[Kelumir]

That's ok, I understand now. Thank you.

[Kelumir]

hello, which one could check the mistakes on my next submission ?

I'd be glad to. Though I'm a little confused by the opening scenario description.


Ok, here you go.

PKMN: Road to Hoenn

Scenario:
Two friends discover the existence of a Pokémon league a little peculiar to Hoenn.
Indeed, this year is the first league where the first trainer to beat a Gym Leader or Elite 4 member can ask them for whatever they want, and they cannot refuse.

Characters
- Hero (Brice): https://pre00.deviantart.net/4777/th/pr ... 7lmeus.png

- Rival (Paul): https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/pok ... 0918003628

- Roxanne:
https://archive-media-1.nyafuu.org/vp/i ... 867693.png
Body:
https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post& ... id=1571161

- Flannery:
http://i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/ori ... 49/06c.png
Body: https://rule34.xxx//images/2030/c2d3e6e ... eg?2198362

- Winona: https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/pok ... 1227194703
Body + clothes for sex scene:
http://i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/ori ... 5/cb1.jpeg

- Phoebe:
http://i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/ori ... 34/348.jpg
Body: http://lotus.paheal.net/_images/e0bf3b5 ... rkyman.jpg

- Glacia:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/fc0a/f/20 ... 8xyrqg.jpg
Body:
https://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/194 ... arch=Boris

Scenario:
Scene 1: Brice is at his friend Paul's place. They are sitting around watching TV.

Brice: Urrgh... God I'm so bored! Seriously, our village is so lost, I bet it's not even on the map.

Paul: Yeah. And there aren't even any girls our age here.

An advertisement starts playing on the TV:
Are you bored in your quiet life?
Become a trainer now!
The Hoenn region is waiting for you!
And to motivate you this year, the Pokémon League of Hoenn has organized a special event!
The first trainer to defeat a Gym Leader or Elite 4 member can ask for whatever they want from them. Private training, a free trip, money, anything! Be creative in your requests and do not forget to ask!

The 2 friends are very attentive!

Brice and Paul: We have to take part in this league!!

TV: The start of the event will take place in 2 weeks in Rustboro City.
So, see you soon trainers!

Paul: I’m going to the professor's lab right away to get a Pokémon!

Brice: Hey, you don't have to be in such. We still have time you know.

Scene 2:
Brice is looking in his father's old trainer business to see if he can find anything useful, and he finds some old Poké Balls!

He tries them out and a legendary Pokémon comes out of the last (off the screen).

Brice: This is great! With this Pokémon I'll be unbeatable.

Scene 3:
2 weeks later...

Brice and Paul are in the Rustboro City Pokémon gym, where Roxanne welcomes them.

Roxanne: Hello challengers. I am this areas Gym Leader, Roxanne. If you'd like to follow me.

The small group arrives in a battle field.

Paul: Alright, you go ahead. You have no chance of winning anyway.

Brice: Thank you very much!

Transition to after the fight.

Paul: What was that great Pokémon!? How'd you get something so super strong when we only just started!?

Roxanne: Congratulations challenger! You've won, and you're the first one to beat me. Right, feel free to ask whatever you want.

Brice: I, do have something. But it's a little embarrassing.

Roxanne: It's alright. You can tell me. I won't get upset.

Brice whispers in Roxanne's ear.

Roxanne: Oh, that's okay with me.

Sex Scene 1:
https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post& ... id=2570505
Blow job + Cunnilingus

Scene 4:
Over the following days, Brice travels to several other gyms and is the first to defeat their Gym Leaders.

Brice arrives at the gym of Lavaridge City, where Flannery greets him.

Flannery: Hi, I'm Flannery the Gym Leader of Lavaridge City specializing in Fire Pokémon.
Are you a challenger?

Brice: Yes, and I hope to win the event prize from your gym!

Flannery: Well, you’re certainly confident. Though how is it that you got here so fast?

Brice: Oh, you will understand once the fight begins.

Flannery: All right, let's go then.

After the fight:

Flannery: Alright, I admit my defeat. You're too strong for me. As agreed, you can choose whatever you want for your reward.

Brice: I already chose! I want you to give me a tit-job!

Flannery: Uh... Are you sure that's what you want?

Brice: Yes, I'm sure.

Flannery: All right then. I'll give you the best tit-job of your life!

Sex Scene 2:
http://holly.paheal.net/_images/df90fe6 ... rkyman.png

Scene 5:
Brice continues his winning streak, and soon arrives at Fortree City.

Brice: Where is the gym of this city? I'm totally lost!

Winona: Are you looking for the gym young man?

Brice: Yeah. Do you know where it is?

Winona: You bumped into the right person. I'm the Gym Leader of this city. My name is Winona. Come with me I'll take you to the gym.

Whilst they're walking to the gym:

Winona: You wouldn't be Brice by chance?

Brice: Yes, that's me. Why?

Winona: I've heard a lot about you, especially from the Gym Leaders you've already beaten. I know what you asked them.

Brice: So, you know what's waiting for you in a little while?

Winona: Do you really think you can beat me?

Brice: Yes, and I have already decided what I'll ask for.

Winona: Hehe. We'll see. Well, here we are. Let's see if you're more than just talk.

After the match:

Winona: The other Gym Leaders didn't lie. You really have a gift for dressage. Very good. So, what do you want as a reward?

Brice: I want to fuck you all night!

Winona: Uh... I was not expecting that... But, alright.
I'll prepare an outfit especially for you.

Sex Scene 3:
Outfit: http://i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/ori ... 5/cb1.jpeg

Position:
http://www.bisexualdave.com/wp-content/ ... hay-03.jpg

Vaginal sex + anal sex.
Between the vaginal and anal, Winona's breasts get released from her clothes.

Cums inside her ass.

Scene 6:
Brice finally arrives at the Hoenn Pokémon league. He finds Paul, who is looking rather depressed.

Brice: Hey Paul. You don't look so good. What happened to you?

Paul: There are only the prizes of the Elite 4 left. I managed to get here before you, but I got slaughtered! You've won everything so far and now I'm gonna loose the honor of winning the last reward to you too.

Brice: Hey man, you're my best friend. I won't leave you like this. If you want, I can share my rewards with you.

Paul: Really!? That would be great!

Brice: Wait for me here. I'll take care of the Elite 4, and I'll come back with the rewards.

Brice enters the league chamber of the Elite 4.

1 Hour Later...

Brice comes out of the league chamber with Phoebe and Glacia.

Brice: Alright Paul, I have a very special reward for you!
I present to you Phoebe, the master of the Ghost type, and Glacia the Ice master.
Now, which of these two lovely ladies do you want to fuck first?

Paul: Brice you are the best! I'll start with...

Player chooses either Phoebe or Glacia before changing to the last sex scene.

Sex Scene 4:
http://lotus.paheal.net/_images/bc05bfd ... man.jpgice

Brice fucks the girl Paul did not choose.

Vaginal fuck => cum in pussy.

End.

[crocdeloup]

Thank you for the correction !
I hope my idea will win !

[crocdeloup]

Hi kelumir, could you correct this game idea?

Scenario :
Princess XXXelda asks Link to go through hyroll to become the legendary hero of pleasure is to help XXXelda perpetuate the royal lineage.

Characters :
XXXelda :
http://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/2423 ... f_the_Wild
Clothers :
https://www.google.fr/imgres?imgurl=htt ... ea309unx2M

Only during the scene 1:
https://i.pinimg.com/originals/8c/74/fa ... f38f67.jpg
Paya :
http://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/2132313#search=Paya
Clothers :
http://i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/ori ... 81/bd6.jpg
Urbosa :
http://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/2154 ... rch=Urbosa
Clothers :
https://img00.deviantart.net/a5d0/i/201 ... bh5uby.png
Mipha :
http://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/2075280#search=Mipha
Clothers :
https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/zel ... -prefix=fr
Link :
https://ih1.redbubble.net/image.3427623 ... ,t.3u1.jpg

Scene 1:
The princess summons link to the castle to reveal her destiny.
Dialogue:
XXXelda :
Welcome link, as you know it is today that you will start your quest to become the hero of pleasure. To start, go to the desert gerudo and meet Urbosa. she has already been informed of your arrival and will help you in your quest.
Link :
I go immediately ! thank princesse XXXelda .
Scene 2 :
Link comes to the city gerudo and stops (the men are forbidden).
He is brought before Urbosa the head of the gerudo.
Dialogue :
Urbosa:
Who are you stranger? Do not you know that the city is forbidden to man!
Link: I am link, future hero of pleasure I come on order of the princess to meet you.
Urbosa: So, you're the one I'm waiting for you! Now, follow me.
I will give you all my sexual energy!
Sex Scene 1 :
https://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/2155330#search=Paya
(Classic boobjob )
After cum :
Urbosa :
I'm done.
Now head east to meet Princess Zora Mipha.
she will transmit to you are sexual energy as I did.

Scene 3:
Link arrives at the Zora estate and is greeted by Mipha's childhood friend and Zora princess.
Dialogue :
Mipha: Link is it?
I almost did not recognize! what is it 12 years? (Link is 20 years old)
Link: I see you're still as energetic as in my memories!
Mipha: Are you here to accomplish your quest and become the hero of pleasure?
Yes, but embarrassed me a bit of having to do that with you.
Mipha: Do not worry it does not bother me it's our destiny after all!
(Mipha flushes and laughs nervously because she's secretly in love with Link)

Sex scene 2 :
https://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/229 ... arch=Mipha
(here only take into account the position)
Classic: pussy fuck ( easy ; medium ; hard ; cum)
After cum:

Mipha: It was great.
Link, go to the village Cocorico is talking to Impa she will tell you the rest of your trip.
Scene 4:
Link is attack on the way to Cocorico
(Link back attack from behind from the point of view of the attacker)
Scene 5:
Link wakes up 100 years later in a sanctuary (see picture)
https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/zel ... -prefix=fr
He goes to the village Coconino (ellipse)
Scene 6: He is greeted by Paya the little son of impa
Paya: Have you been link?
Link: yes, It was me and you who were you?
Paya: I'm Paya the little girl D'impa the oldest of the village
Link: Will I be able to see Impa?
Paya: it will not be necessary.
I know exactly why you are here.
As a result, your quest is to receive Sexual Energy my people.
It's Impa who should have done it but with the arrival of Ganon and Your cryogenization I will have to take care of it.
Sex scene 3 :
https://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/233 ... rch=Urbosa
(just global position)
Vaginal + anal (easy; medium; hard; cum in ass)

After cum :
Link to become the hero of pleasure.
you only have to receive the sexual energy of XXXelda!
Scene 7:
link this makes the castle is released XXXelda
link finds Princess XXXelda tied in the castle prison
XXXelda :
Link finally you are here! Hurry up to free me!
You must absorb my sexual energy as soon as possible, I hope you were in shape !
Link : My body is ready ! (for lovers of Nintendo meme)
sex scene 4 :
https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post& ... id=2395472

scene 8: after deaht of ganon link and XXXelda discusses in the hyroll plain
XXXelda: while Ganon is dead what can I do?
Link: I have a small idea (map of the characters of back link caresses l
the buttocks of XXXelda)
end

[Kelumir]

Hi kelumir, could you correct this game idea?

Done.

Scenario :
Princess XXXelda asks Link to go through Hyrule to become the legendary Hero of Pleasure to help XXXelda perpetuate the royal lineage.

Characters :
XXXelda :
http://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/2423 ... f_the_Wild

Clothes :
https://orig00.deviantart.net/2929/f/20 ... b11zxo.jpg

Only during the scene 1:
https://i.pinimg.com/originals/8c/74/fa ... f38f67.jpg

Paya :
http://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/2132313#search=Paya

Clothes :
http://i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/ori ... 81/bd6.jpg

Urbosa :
http://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/2154 ... rch=Urbosa

Clothes :
https://img00.deviantart.net/a5d0/i/201 ... bh5uby.png

Mipha :
http://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/2075280#search=Mipha

Clothes :
https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/zel ... -prefix=fr

Link :
https://ih1.redbubble.net/image.3427623 ... ,t.3u1.jpg


Scene 1:
The princess summons Link to the castle to reveal her destiny.
Dialogue:
XXXelda : Welcome Link. As you know, it is today that you will start your quest to become the Hero of Pleasure. To begin, go to the Gerudo Desert and meet Urbosa. She has already been informed of your arrival and will help you in your quest.
Link : Of course, I shall go immediately! Thank you princess XXXelda.

Scene 2 :
Link arrives at the Gerudo city but stops at the gate as men are forbidden.
He is then brought before Urbosa, the leader of the Gerudo.

Dialogue :
Urbosa : Who are you stranger? Do you not know that the city is forbidden to man?
Link : I am Link, the future Hero of Pleasure. I came under orders from Princess XXXelda to meet you.
Urbosa : So, you're the one I'm waiting for. Now, follow me.
I will give you all my sexual energy!

Sex Scene 1 :
https://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/2155330#search=Paya
(Classic boob-job.)
After cum :
Urbosa : I'm done.
Now head east to meet the Zora princess Mipha. She will give you more of the same sexual energy as I did.

Scene 3:
Link arrives at the Zora kingdom and is greeted by Mipha, Link's childhood friend and the princess of the Zora.

Dialogue :
Mipha : Is that you Link? I almost didn't recognize you! What has it been, 12 years?
Link : Yes, it has been a long time. But I see you're still juat as energetic as I remember!
Mipha: Hehe, thank you. Are you here to accomplish your quest and become the Hero of Pleasure?
Link : Yes, I am. But, I'm a bit embarrassed having to do this with you.
Mipha : Do not worry, it does not bother me. It is our destiny after all!
(Mipha blushes and laughs nervously because she's secretly in love with Link.)

Sex Scene 2 :
https://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/229 ... arch=Mipha
(Please only take into account the position.)
Classic: Pussy fuck (Easy > Medium > Hard > Cum)
After cum:

Mipha : Wow. That was great.
Link, now you must go to Kakariko village and talk to Impa. She will help you with the rest of your journey.

Scene 4:
Link is attack on the way to Kakariko.
(Link is attacked from behind and we see it from the point of view of the attacker.)

Link wakes up 100 years later in a sanctuary (see picture).
https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/zel ... -prefix=fr

After waking up, he continues his journey and goes to the Kakariko Village.

Scene 5:
He is greeted by Paya, the granddaughter of Impa.
Paya : Hello. Are you the one known as Link?
Link : Yes, that's me. And, who were you miss?
Paya : I'm Paya, the granddaughter of the villages elder, Impa.
Link : Impa id your grandmother? Will I be able to see?
Paya : I'm sure she would be glad to see you again, but it will not be necessary.
I know exactly why you are here. You are here to complete your quest and receive the sexual energy you need from my people.
It was my grandmother who should have done it, but with the return of Ganon and your slumber, I will have to take care of it.

Sex Scene 3 :
https://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/233 ... rch=Urbosa
Vaginal + anal (Easy > Medium > Hard > Cum in ass)

After cum :
Paya : Alright Link, now you are almost ready to become the Hero of Pleasure.
Now you only have to receive the sexual energy of XXXelda!

Scene 6:
Link then makes his way to the ruins of Hyrule castle to rescue Princess XXXelda.
After making his way inside, Link finds XXXelda tied up in the castles dungeon.
XXXelda : Link! You're finally here! Please hurry and free me!
You must absorb my sexual energy as soon as possible. I hope you are in shape!
Link : Don’t worry, my body is ready! (for lovers of Nintendo meme)

Sex Scene 4 :
https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post& ... id=2395472

Scene 7:
Now with all the sexual energy he needed gathered, Link finally became the Hero of Pleasure. After defeating Ganon, Link and XXXelda discuss the future while standing in the Hyrule plains.
XXXelda: So, Ganon is gone once more. What are we going to do now?
Link: Well, I have a little idea. (Link holds up a map while he caresses XXXelda's ass.)

End.

[crocdeloup]

thank you for the correction.
so, do you like my idea?

[Kelumir]

Yeah, looks pretty solid and I can't think of anything wrong with it.

Also, I find it kind of funny that the reference image you used for the Urbosa sex scene is an image of Paya and the one for the Paya sex scene is an image of Urbosa.

[Kelumir]

Hey, anyone know any movies or anything with a scene where a couple of people are hiding behind an overturned table during a gun fight?
I need a screen shot for... something I'm working on.

And a rough timestamp would also be appreciated, thanks.

[Kelumir]

hello, you could tell me where are the stardew valley drawings ?

Ok, the line art for them is done. How do these look to you?

Marnie:
https://ibb.co/gLY6dJ

Leah:
https://ibb.co/fJ36dJ

Robin:
https://ibb.co/iXVmdJ

Abigail:
https://ibb.co/dHuZXd