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Bartman
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Fri May 26, 2023 9:22 pm

Health check

A naive woman had to undergo a health check for the first time because of her professional training.

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At the reception

Receptionist

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Alicia: Hello

Receptionist: How can I help you?

Alicia: I have a health check appointment today.

Receptionist: Your name?

Alicia: Ailcia Bloom

Receptionist: Bloom, Bloom, ah, there you are. Good, please go to room three, the doctor will be with you in a moment.

Room three

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Five minutes later

Dr. Brown: Hello I am Dr. Brown

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Dr Brown: Are you here for a health check?

Alicia: Yes, Doctor

Dr Brown: Have you had a health check before?

Alicia: No, Doctor, this is my first time.

Dr Brown: Do you have any allergies or medical conditions?

Alicia: No Doctor

Dr Brown: Are you taking any medication?

Alicia: No Doctor

Dr Brown: Good, let's start by taking your blood pressure.

Doctor taking blood pressure.

Dr Brown: Very good, your blood pressure is fine.

Dr Brown: Now let's have a look at your throat. Open your mouth and stick out your tongue.

Dr Brown: Hm.

Alicia: What is it, Doctor?

Dr Brown: I'm not sure, I can't see very well.

Dr Brown: I need to go in with a light camera so I can see better.

Alicia: Light camera?

Dr Brown: Please put these blindfolds on. The light is bad for your eyes.

Alicia: Hmm okay

Dr Brown: And please kneel on the mat.

Alicia: Why do I have to kneel down?

Dr Brown: The camera is attached to a device that can't be adjusted. So you have to move towards the camera.

Alicia: I see doctor

Alicia has put on the blindfold and kneels on the mat.

The doctor opens his pants and takes out his cock.

Dr. Brown: Please open your mouth so I can slowly insert the camera.

Alicia: Okay doctor

The doctor pushes his cock into Alicia's mouth.

Alicia's thoughts: The camera feels almost my whole mouth. I can hardly breathe.

Alicia tries to speak

Dr.Brown: Please don't speak, it will interfere with the examination.

The doctor guides Alicia's hands to his thighs.

Dr.Brown: Please hold on to these bars.

Alicia's thoughts: These bars feel strange.

Dr.Brown: Since the camera won't move, I need to move your head. I push your head toward me and you push it back. The important thing is that you follow my rhythm.

Alicia's thoughts: ...

Dr.Brown: All right, let's begin.

First scene

Easy
Dr Brown: We'll start slow, so the throat opens slowly.

Alicia: COUGH, COUGH, COUGH

Medium
Dr Brown: Very good, the throat has opened a little and we can go in a little deeper.

Alicia: BURP, BURP, BURP

Hard
I can't see anything, we need to go deeper.

Alicia's thoughts: I hope it doesn't take much longer or I'll suffocate.

Cum
Good, now I can see it. The throat is slightly inflamed. I'll inject some medicine through the camera and the inflammation will go down.

Alicia's thoughts: How? What? Inject a medicine?

As Alicia coughs from the sperm in her mouth, the doctor puts his trousers back on.

Dr Brown: You can take the blindfold off now.

Dr Brown: There is a sink behind you, you can wash out your mouth there.

Three minutes later

Dr Brown: Your throat is fine thanks to the medicine.

Alicia: I didn't even realise that my throat was inflamed because I never had a sore throat. Until now, honestly, my throat hurts after the exam.

Dr Brown: The pain is because the inflammation is healing slowly. And the fact that you didn't notice it is because the inflammation was at a very early stage, and it was good that we caught it and treated it so early, otherwise you would have had serious consequences later on.

Alicia: I see doctor, I guess I have to thank my boss for sending me for a health check today.

Dr Brown: Yes, it was a good idea to get checked out.

Dr Brown thinks: Otherwise you wouldn't be lucky enough to get fucked by me.

Dr Brown: Next I will listen to your heartbeat, so please take off your top.

Alicia: Would it be enough if I just pulled it up, because honestly, Doctor, I'm a little embarrassed.

Dr.Brown: Unfortunately not, or I won't hear the heartbeat properly, plus I'm a competent doctor and it's nothing I haven't seen before. So no need to be embarrassed.

Alicia: I see.

Alicia takes off her top.

The doctor takes his stethoscope and listens to Alicia's heart.

Dr.Brown: Your heart sounds good, next I'll examine your chest, you'll have to take off your bra.

Alicia: Take off your bra?

Dr.Brown: Yes, in order to examine your chest, your chest must be completely relaxed and loose, and the bra you are wearing is constricting the chest too much.

Alicia: I see.

Alicia has removed her bra.

The doctor examines her breast.

Dr Brown: Hm, there seems to be some kind of lump here.

Alicia: A lump?

Dr Brown: Yes. right in the middle between your breasts.

Alicia: Is it bad?

Dr Brown: No, don't worry, it's still very small. I will massage it away with a massager.

Dr Brown: Put the blindfold back on, please.

Alicia: Why?

Dr.Brown: Because the massager emits rays that are harmful to the eyes.

Alicia: Okay

Dr.Brown: Please kneel in front of the table and put the blindfold on.

Alicia: You want me to kneel down again?

Dr.Brown: Yes, unfortunately the device is not high enough.

Alicia: I see

As Alicia kneels in front of the table and puts the blindfold on, the doctor takes off his trousers and sits on the table.

Dr Brown: I need you to come a little closer.

The doctor guides Alicia's breasts towards his cock.

Dr Brown: Can you feel the device?

Alicia: Yes Doctor

Alicia thinks: It feels so strange.

Dr Brown: Because the device doesn't move, you have to move your breasts up and down.

Alicia: But if the massager doesn't move, how can it help get rid of the lump in my breast?

Dr Brown: I told you that the device sends out a jet and when you rub it on your breast, the jet is directed into your breast and loosens up the lump in your breast.

Alicia: I see.

Dr Brown: All right, let's get started.

Second scene

Easy
Dr. Brown: Massage slowly until the knot has loosened a bit.

Alicia: Okay doctor

Dr. Brown thinks: My dick between her breasts feels pretty damn good.

Alicia thinks: Feels so weird.

Medium:
Dr. Brown: Very good, it seems to have loosened up a little bit. A little faster now.

Alicia: Okay doctor

Hart
Dr. Brown: Very good, even faster.

Alicia: Okay Doctor

Dr. Brown thinks: The sight of her breasts bouncing up and down on my cock is indescribable and feels so damn good.

Alicia thinks: It feels like it's pulsating. Are those the rays going through my breasts?

Cum
Dr. Brown: The lump has completely dissolved, I'm going to squirt a cream on it so it doesn't form again. Don't stop until the cream is applied.

Alicia: Okay, doctor.

The doctor has completely covered Alicia's breasts with his sperm.

Dr. Brown: Spread the cream completely on your breasts and massage it in.

While Alicia massages the sperm on her breasts, the doctor puts on his pants.

Two minutes later

Dr.Brown: Good, you can take off your blindfold now.

Alicia: Can I put my bra and top back on?

Dr.Brown: Yes, and then please take off your panties, sit on the gynecological chair and pull up your skirt.

Alicia: What?

Dr.Brown: Now comes the gynecological examination.

Alicia: Is that necessary?

Dr.Brown: Yes, that is also part of the health check. It could be that you have contracted STDs.

Alicia: But I've only had sex once.

Dr.Brown: If you meet the wrong person, it can happen the first time.

Alicia: But that was 10 years ago and I have no symptoms.

Dr.Brown: You didn't notice the inflammation in your throat or the lump in your breast either.

Alicia: Yes, I guess you are right, doctor.

Alicia puts on her bra and top and lies down on the gynecological chair. Then she pulls up her skirt and takes off her panties.

The view of Alicia and the doctor is separated by a curtain.

Dr.Brown: Since I have to insert the light camera into your vagina, this curtain is unfortunately necessary so as not to hurt your eyes.

Alicia: I see

Good, let's start

Third scene
Easy

Dr.Brown: I'm going to take it slow. Are you ready?

Alicia: Yes doctor

Dr.Brown Thoughts: Damn, that feels so awesome.

Alicia's thoughts: Shit, it's way too big

Medium
Alicia: Doctor, I'm getting all warm

Dr.Brown: That's normal for an exam like this. You need to relax.

Alicia's thoughts: This exam is getting me too excited.

Dr.Brown Thoughts: Her tight pussy is squeezing my cock. Apparently she likes it.

Hard
Alicia: Doctor, is this examination going to take much longer?

Dr.Brown: No, it will be over in a minute.

Alicia's Thoughts: I'm so aroused, but I have to suppress it. I can't cumming or he'll think I'm a slut.

Dr.Brown Thoughts: I'm going to make this slut come.

Come
Dr.Brown: The examination is almost over.

Alicia's thoughts: Very good, I can do it.

Dr.Brown: I'll inject another cream to remove the impurities and then the examination is over.

Alicia's thoughts: What? Damn it, I'm coming!

Alicia's thoughts: How embarrassing! I came. I hope he didn't notice.

Dr.Brown: You can get dressed again, the examination is over.

Alicia: Good, okay.

Five minutes later

Dr.Brown: The results will be mailed to you in the next few days.

Alicia: Okay. Thank you very much doctor and goodbye.

Dr.Brown: Goodbye Mrs. Bloom.

The moment Alicia leaves the room, the doctor pulls a remote control out of his coat pocket, presses the single button on it and suddenly finds himself in a lab.

Jacob: Unbelievable, the remote actually worked!

Jacob: I wanted to have sex with a woman and it sent me to a woman I could have sex with.

Jacob: The remote sent me to exactly where I could achieve my goal.

Jacob: I've had enough fun for today.

End
Last edited by Bartman on Sun May 28, 2023 4:25 am, edited 1 time in total.
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mugen64
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Fri May 26, 2023 10:01 pm

I like the story so far keep going 👍🏾
Junior_p
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Fri May 26, 2023 11:18 pm

I liked it, post the end of your story
Bartman
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Sun May 28, 2023 4:47 am

I finished writing it. I wanted to make it funnier, but that didn't work out so well. I wanted to put an anal scene at the end, but then I thought it might be too long. Unfortunately my English is not the best, but I hope you still understand and like it.

The reason I got the idea to write a story like this was because I remembered a game I had completely forgotten about. I only played it once, but I remember liking it. The game was called Medical Examination, so I thought I'd write a similar story. I hope I succeeded in writing a good story.

I'm looking forward to your feedback.
Junior_p
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Mon May 29, 2023 2:27 am

I loved the story, simple and exciting. Are there any other stories you've written? I would be honored to read
Bartman
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Mon May 29, 2023 5:12 pm

Junior_p wrote:
Mon May 29, 2023 2:27 am
I loved the story, simple and exciting. Are there any other stories you've written? I would be honored to read
Just another Tilda story I once wrote. But that was a long time ago.

viewtopic.php?t=848

This is the second story I've written now. I only came up with it because of this game.

https://www.meetandfuckgames.com/hentai ... amination/

I was going to write a sequel, but then I thought it might be better to write a standalone story in case there is a sequel, and I didn't want to spoil it with mine, because I think "Serega" writes good stories.
Coob
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Thu Jun 01, 2023 9:25 am

Very good. Honestly, this could work for a Geek Girl Gwen game. Only thing I would change are two things. First, the blindfold. Second, her having sex before. It makes more sense if she didn't. Other then that, really good. With good dialogue, too.
Bartman
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Thu Jun 01, 2023 6:05 pm

Coob wrote:
Thu Jun 01, 2023 9:25 am
Very good. Honestly, this could work for a Geek Girl Gwen game. Only thing I would change are two things. First, the blindfold. Second, her having sex before. It makes more sense if she didn't. Other then that, really good. With good dialogue, too.
Thank you so much! I also wanted her to be a virgin so she could have her first time without knowing it, but I didn't know if that would go down well. Honestly, I didn't know if I was going to finish the story. And at the end I tried to put in a twist (I don't think I did it well) because at the end I had an idea of how the story could go on.
Coob
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Thu Jun 01, 2023 11:25 pm

You should keep going with this. It's pretty hot. It's really is a great fit for Gwen. Also, here's what I wrote for her: viewtopic.php?f=2&t=1972&p=11278#p11278
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