Tinker's Quest! (Xmas Payrise 7 Part 2!) (MNF Game Idea!)

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TheBraveD
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Mon Jun 08, 2020 7:08 am

I wanted to make a game featuring Tinker from Xmas Payrise 3, cause after the game she was never seen again. :(
This game follows the conclusion of Xmas Payrise 7: The Bumble following the EXTREME ending where the Bumble has Mrs. Claus in his cave and she gets pregnant.
Tinker:
Image
Story:
After Mrs. Claus went missing for months after being captured by The Bumble, Santa gets extremely impatient about her absence...

Santa: Where is that women?! Don't tell me she died of frostbite out there trying to get Sparky!

Elf: I don't know sir, my guess is that she's been captured by one of those snow monsters!

Santa: Snow monsters? I've been here for so long and haven't seen ONE!
I don't care who it is, just have them get back here! I can't deal with these damn letters myself!

Elf: We're not going out there! Your wife's smoking hot but we're not risking our LIVES for her tits!

Tinker behind a door eavesdropping: (Thinking) Mrs.Claus got captured by some monster?! Oh no! What horrible things could that thing be doing to her?
And none of the elves or Santa are willing get to her back themselves!
Looks like it's up to me to get her back safe and sound!
Don't worry, I'm coming Mrs.Claus!

Tinker grabs her dagger pouch and rides off on one of the reindeers in search for the Bumble's cave...
After a few hours searching, Tinker has found it

Tinker: Alright, this has to be it,
There seems to be some big wads of white fur on the ground to confirm it.
Let's hope I don't get gobbled up by whatever's in there.

In the cave...(POV)

Tinker: Boy, it smells terrible in here!
I'm starting to get the realization of what that beast has been doing to her...

(OOOOOOooooooohh)

Tinker: That sounds like Mrs. Claus! She must be in pain right now!
HOLD ON I'M COMING!

(ROWWRRR!!)

Tinker: What...was...that?...

The Bumble (all robotic looking with some wads of fur fallen off) comes towards Tinker: Trespasser in my cave?!

Tinker: GAAAHH!! AHHH, WHAT THE HELL IS THAT THING?! DON'T HURT ME!!

The Bumble: Well since your body's what I desire, you'll be joining her to become my babes!!

Tinker: AHHH, NO WAY!! STAY AWAY!!

The Bumble: Oh NO! You're not getting away from me now!

(Mini-game)
Pretty much the same as Amazon Island 2 where the Amazon Chief chases you and you dodge her spears. But this time, you have to shoot cum at Tinker to slow her down.

Representation (not great but hope you still understand it):
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Rules: Click rapidly to raise the sperm meter, when it reaches the top, you'll shoot you sperm. Tinker can jump to dodge your shots so you have to shoot your cum at the right time or you'll miss. You win by catching her when she's very close. (Like the last Xmas game)

Sex Scene 1:
https://us.rule34.xxx//samples/2978/sam ... pg?3330971
Bumble: Now you're gonna take my cock down your little throat!!

Tinker: SERIOUSLY!? I don't think I can take in the head!

Bumble: Too bad!!
Easy:
Tinker: God! This is gonna break my jaw!
Medium:
Bumble: Now deeper!!

Tinker: (Thinking) I don't think I can take more in!

Hard:
Bumble: DEEPER!!

Tinker: (Thinking) Can't...breath...

Cum:
Bumble: CHUG MY SEED!!

Tinker: (Thinking) Oh god!

Aftercum

Tinker: (thinking) That felt like a waterfall going down my stomach...

Bumble: We're just getting started!

Sex Scene 2:
https://us.rule34.xxx//images/3369/bb3f ... 64d70.jpeg

Tinker: Stop! You're gonna cleave me in half with that thing!

Bumble: Let's see about that!!
Easy:
Tinker: AAH!! Just the head's stretching me out!!

Bumble: You're about to take more!!

Medium:
Tinker: Guuhh! I'm seeing stars now!

Bumble: Quit whining!!
Hard:
(The bumble now slaps her ass while fucking)
Tinker: AH! STOP SLAPPING, IT HURTS!

Bumble: Don't get a huge ass then!
Cum:
Bumble: Time for me to explode!!

Tinker: I think I'll puke it out!

Aftercum:
Bumble: Looks like you're fit enough to be my new breeding toy!

Cutscene:

Then, Tinker grabs a nearby rock to throw at the bumble right in the eye!

Bumble: GAAAAHHHH!!!

Tinker: Take THAT! You big hairy mechanical gorilla!

Then her pouch falls over and Mrs.Claus's growth gel drops out...

Tinker: Hey! That's Mrs.Claus's growth gel! I must've grabbed the wrong pouch by accident.
Hey wait, I can use this to make my tits bigger to take on this beast! Let's try it out!

While the Bumble was immobilized, Tinker rubs the gel on her tits, making them BIGGER!
(the scene can transition for when her tits become bigger, with the gel in her hands.)
Tinker: WOW! My tits are way more enormous now! I'm probably bigger than Mrs.Claus!
Now I can take on that big cock now!

Sex Scene 3:
https://us.rule34.xxx//images/3050/7391 ... if?3425606
Tinker: Hey Bumble, how about a tit-fuck to ease the pain?

Bumble: Well then, GET TO TO IT!
Easy:
Tinker: Woah, my tits wrap around this giant meat pole easily now!

Bumble: Grrr...GOO...FASTER!!
Medium:
Bumble: HNGH...THIS IS... ACTUALLY MORE THAN I CAN HANDLE...
Tinker: (Thinking) It's working! This beast doesn't stand a chance!
Hard:
Bumble: GAAAHHH! TOO...MUCH...TITS!!
Tinker: Prepare to get "Tinkered" with!
Cumshot: On tits. (Unlike the last Xmas game)

After Tinker defeated the Bumble, she continues to search for Mrs. Claus in the cave...
In a room...

Tinker: Mrs.Claus? Are you in here?

Mrs.Claus: Oh Tinker! Didn't know you'd be here.
And what happened to your tits?! They look bigger than mine!

Tinker: It's a long story, but what happened to YOU! You're bigger and pregnant! This is what that beast used you for!
Come on! Let's get you out of here and back to Santa's workshop!

Mrs.Claus: What? No way! That Bumble's been treating me way better than my ungrateful husband!

Tinker: That beast's been using you as a breeding machine! How's he better than Santa for you?

Mrs.Claus: A women has her needs! And Nicolas wasn't helping me out with them!
So if you're here to take me back, you can forget it! I'm staying HERE!
(BOOOM!!)
Tinker: What was that!?

Mrs.Claus: We need to check it out and see if the Bumble's okay!

At the scene, the bumble was actually an elf in a robotic suit!

Elf: Ooh, that hurt.

Tinker and Mrs. Claus: WHAT THE HELL IS THIS!?

Elf: Oh, well you see...This was just a robotic suit I used to catch Mrs.Claus and fuck her.
But your massive tits were too much for it so it blow up, thanks Tinker!

Tinker: So you had Mrs.Claus held in a cave for months?! You know how much trouble we had back home?

Elf: Well I got carried away from acting like a monster for so long, but Mrs.Claus sure was having a fun time.

Mrs.Claus: Yeah I was, but you know I'm always down for a fun time, even if you're not a gigantic Bumble.

Tinker: So why did you go with this robotic suit idea?

Elf: Well our wages were cut, so there were cameras in this suit to record Mrs.Claus getting fucked.
And since you were here Tinker, you were able to get in on the action of being recorded too!

Mrs.Claus: Well, being part of porn movie is interesting, and making money off it makes it better!
I want in on this, as long as I can also get part of the profits!

Tinker: Hold on, I want part of this too! It could be fun having sex for money.
And I have to admit, that suit fucking me was actually kinda fun too.

Elf: Alright! Let's make those movies and get that cash!

Tinker and Mrs.Claus: YEAH!

Back at the north pole in secret...

Sex Scene: https://us.rule34.xxx//samples/3392/sam ... pg?3823102 (but the dick is bigger than the boobs. The boobs should still be big tho.)

Mrs: Claus: Glad you brought the suit back, let's have fun with it while Nic's away!

Tinker: My tits can take this thing no problem!

Elf acting like the Bumble: Enough talking! Get rubbing!!

Tinker and Mrs.Claus: Yes master~

Aftercum:

Mrs. Claus: This was the craziest and best christmas ever!

Tinker: You said it!

The End!

This was a idea for Xmas Payrise 7: The Bumble! in continuation to the EXTREME ending of that game, tho I was thinking of having Serega do this idea, but since he's hard to get to, I'll now settle for Kosmos. And I hope he'll be interested in making the idea. Thanks to the creators of the two character I wanted to use for the game Tinker from MrZen69 and the Bumble from BigK7o8. If Kosmos does see this please give me response saying if you will make the game or not. And if BigK7o8 and/or MrZen69 see this too, if they do or don't like it, tell me in the comments what I should do to change the script. And you guys can comment too on how you think of it.
Hope you guys liked it!
Vote here: https://www.strawpoll.me/20289747
Edit: I put down a poll in the comments asking if should put in a scene of Tinker using the growth gel to make her tits bigger to match the Bumble's dick (And maybe she'll be bigger than Mrs.Claus now.). People said yes so I add the scene, if they don't like it then maybe I'll remove it and stick to the normal story.
Edit 2: My friend suggested for me to make the Bumble more robotic to not get banned and I went with it. And seeing as he's already a robotic suit and Kosmos has drawn robotic animals, it's not too far fetched.
Last edited by TheBraveD on Thu Jul 29, 2021 2:11 am, edited 9 times in total.
TheBraveD
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Tue Jul 21, 2020 5:10 am

I would like to hear some opinions of this.
MNFan
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Tue Jul 21, 2020 6:53 am

Tinker! :mrgreen: That's a character I've always wanted to see make a return

Very nice idea overall, just hoping CCbill won't get in the way
TheBraveD
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Fri Aug 07, 2020 4:29 am

I just hope BigK7o8 and Serega could say their take on this.
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BigK7o8
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Fri Aug 07, 2020 6:07 am

TheBraveD wrote:
Fri Aug 07, 2020 4:29 am
I just hope BigK7o8 and Serega could say their take on this.
Hey, if you want to use the Bumble you have my full permission. I’ll read the through your full idea here later and give you some feedback :D

As for Mrs. Claus, I just had a game I wrote made (Superheroine Hijinks 4) and we’re supposed to wait 3-4 months before submitting ideas so that’s going to put us right around Christmas. I really want to do a Where’s the Milk game with a pregnant Mrs. Claus crossing over or doing a cameo, similar to how Serega draws Officer Juggs for the XXX Files games even though they’re technically Vadim games.

That being said, as long as you don’t do anything to Mrs. Claus that would make it impossible for me to use her it should be cool 8-)

Like I said I haven’t had a chance to read your entire idea yet but I’ll look at it later and get you some feedback
Boopnbop
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Fri Aug 07, 2020 11:32 am

BigK7o8 wrote:
Fri Aug 07, 2020 6:07 am
TheBraveD wrote:
Fri Aug 07, 2020 4:29 am
I just hope BigK7o8 and Serega could say their take on this.
Hey, if you want to use the Bumble you have my full permission.
You don't own the bumble tho
TheBraveD
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Fri Aug 07, 2020 11:58 am

Woahoh wrote:
Fri Aug 07, 2020 11:32 am
BigK7o8 wrote:
Fri Aug 07, 2020 6:07 am
TheBraveD wrote:
Fri Aug 07, 2020 4:29 am
I just hope BigK7o8 and Serega could say their take on this.
Hey, if you want to use the Bumble you have my full permission.
You don't own the bumble tho
They mean the one from the game idea they made. Which I used in this one.
TheBraveD
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Wed Aug 12, 2020 8:28 am

How about a scene where Tinker uses Mrs.Claus's growth gel (from Xmas Payrise 5) to make her tits bigger to match the Bumble's big dick?
Vote: https://www.strawpoll.me/20756113
TheBraveD
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Thu Aug 13, 2020 12:57 am

Alright! I added the new scene! Read to see it!
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