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My game idea. If you have a premium account you can submit it.

Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2017 7:30 am
by cine
Title: Officer Lily Sunn: Dirty Business

Text:
(3 sex scenes)
Officer Lily Sunn should look like this: (It's Lisa Ann) https://www.julesjordan.com/trial/conte ... _com-3.jpg
Scene 1: Lieutenant's office, 9:30am Sunday
Lieutenant: Mary(secretary), I want to see Sunn in my office ASAP.
Mary: (on the phone) Officer Sunn, Lieutenant wants to see you in his office ASAP.
Officer Lily Sunn: I'm on my way.
Officer Lily Sunn: (enters the office) Good morning Sir.
Lieutenant: Good morning officer, please have a seat.
(Officer Sunn seats down)
Lieutenant: I called you because you're the best candidate for one of ours top secret operations. If you'll succed you will be promoted to a detective and you will receive 15% pay rise at the start.
Officer Lily Sunn: (very exited) What's the mission?!
Lieutenant: Infiltration. Real hardcore. I can't tell you more until you'll sign this declaration which says that you can't sue us and you can't give up the mission after signing this.
Officer Lily Sunn: (thinking: So... a detective and 15% pay rise. That won't be my first undercover operation so It can't be much worse than my last mission. *Officer signs the declaration*)
Lieutenant: Ok. Your mission is to infiltrate MNF Porn Industry, as a debuting actress "Jane Sweets".
Officer Lily Sunn: (shocked face and thinking: NO WAY!...)
Lieutenant: We believe that MNF Porn Industry's CEO Julia Stevens is using the company for money laundering. Your mission is to find hard evidence and a list of her clients.
Officer Lily Sunn: But... I can't. I'm not a whore.
Lieutenant: If you would've read the declaration before signing It you would know that your mission involves at least one sexual intercourse.
Officer Sunn, disapointed, thinking: ( Why am I so reckless sometimes?)
Officer Sunn, disapointed: ...yes Sir.
Lieutenant: (gives her the note with the adres of the studio) Your porn sesion starts at 10am today, get ready and don't hold yourself back on set. You have to impress her in order to be invited to her House Party where you will probably find everything you need to succed. Mary will give you the bag with false documents and clothes. That's all, good luck.
(Sunn leaves the police station with the bag)
Lieutenant: Mary, do you want a pay rise? (grins)

Scene 2: MNF Porn Industry's studio(https://archinect.imgix.net/uploads/fy/ ... ess,format)
Officer Lily Sunn standing outside: Ok, that's the place

Scene 3: Inside the studio
Reception (http://www.veinpracticemarketing.com/im ... angarc.jpg)
Officer Lily Sunn: Hi, I'm Jane Sweets.
Receptionist(female): Welcome, you must be that new girl. Can i see your ID?
Officer Lily Sunn: Sure (gives the ID to the receptionist)
Receptionist: Go to the room 222 on the 2nd floor. Have fun (smiles)

Scene 4: Inside the room 222
Director: OH WOW! You must be Jane Sweets and you are indeed sweet.
Director: Ok girls(three 19yo girls)! Start warming up the guys!
Officer Lily Sunn thinking: GUYS?!!!
Officer Lily Sunn: Can I ask you what is the movie title?
Director: "A load in every hole"
Officer Lily Sunn thinking: WTF?!!! Why did I sign this fucking declaration? Now I can't quit!

Sex scene 1: (30 guys, 10 for each hole)
3 girls are warming up the guys that are waiting for their turn, while Officer Lily is getting airtight creampies on the bed in the middle of the room https://imgur.com/iAbgh5e
1st airtight, Officer Lily Sunn thinking: I can't believe this is happening.
A moment after the last airtight, her holes look like this pussy: http://pingping.fantasti.cc/big/g/r/i/g ... c078a2.jpg ; ass: http://cdn4.images.motherlessmedia.com/ ... 922A51.jpg ; mouth: https://pbs.twimg.com/media/CGGSHqCVIAACE2L.jpg
Officer Sunn thinking: I'll be walking like a penguin during whole next week...

Sex scene 2: (after all of the guys came inside her)
3 girls that were warming up the guys are now cleaning Officer Sunn with their tongues, 1 is licking the cum on her asshole, the 2nd one is licking the pussy and the 3rd one is kissing her (mouth full of cum) https://33.media.tumblr.com/9894e1f2316 ... o1_500.gif

Sex scene 3: Officer is lying on the bed completly exhausted.
6 guys were still hard so they jerked off on her covering her, from head to toes https://cdncontent1.factporn.com/bigthu ... 518818.jpg
Director: Aaand CUT!
Director: You were born for this job Jane!
Director: My boss was watching everything on live stream and she was so turned on by your performance, that she wants to meet you personally. She invited you to her House party.
Officer Lily Sunn breathing heavily: That's...great... I'll be there... for... sure...
Director: You'll surely become one of the most famous pornstars.
Officer Lily Sunn: Hmm... who knows?
The end
To be continued...

Re: My game idea. If you have a premium account you can submit it.

Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2017 9:57 am
by Kelumir
While that is a sound idea, there a few problems with it.

First, Officer Juggs is the Chief of Police in MnF Metropolis. She is the highest ranking officer in the city and the only person she answers to is the mayor. This is how police ranks work in big American cities (which is what and where I’m assuming MnF Metropolis is). 1 is the highest rank and 14 is the lowest.

1: Chief of Police – This is Officer Juggs’ rank.
2: Colonel
3: Lieutenant Colonel
4: Commander
5: Major
6: Captain
7: Lieutenant – This is your character’s rank.
8: Inspector
9: Staff Sergeant
10: Sergeant
11: Corporal
12: Master Police Officer
13: Police Officer
14: Police Cadet

So your plot that Juggs is doing this to get a promotion makes no sense.

Second, and this is the major one, Officer Juggs is Serrated’s original character and he DOESN’T let ANYONE use her for sex scenes. Ever. Under any circumstances.

So if you want to use this idea, you will have to replace Juggs with another character.

Re: My game idea. If you have a premium account you can submit it.

Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2017 4:15 pm
by Dwayne
Kelumir wrote:
Sat Nov 11, 2017 9:57 am
While that is a sound idea, there a few problems with it.

First, Officer Juggs is the Chief of Police in MnF Metropolis. She is the highest ranking officer in the city and the only person she answers to is the mayor. This is how police ranks work in big American cities (which is what and where I’m assuming MnF Metropolis is). 1 is the highest rank and 14 is the lowest.

1: Chief of Police – This is Officer Juggs’ rank.
2: Colonel
3: Lieutenant Colonel
4: Commander
5: Major
6: Captain
7: Lieutenant – This is your character’s rank.
8: Inspector
9: Staff Sergeant
10: Sergeant
11: Corporal
12: Master Police Officer
13: Police Officer
14: Police Cadet

So your plot that Juggs is doing this to get a promotion makes no sense.

Second, and this is the major one, Officer Juggs is Serrated’s original character and he DOESN’T let ANYONE use her for sex scenes. Ever. Under any circumstances.

So if you want to use this idea, you will have to replace Juggs with another character.
You really buried the lede here, Kel, lol.......but yeah, seconded...officer juggs = no go.

Re: My game idea. If you have a premium account you can submit it.

Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2017 11:01 pm
by cine
Lol. I'll edit my idea soon XD

Re: My game idea. If you have a premium account you can submit it.

Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2017 11:57 pm
by cine
Kelumir wrote:
Sat Nov 11, 2017 9:57 am
While that is a sound idea, there a few problems with it.

First, Officer Juggs is the Chief of Police in MnF Metropolis. She is the highest ranking officer in the city and the only person she answers to is the mayor. This is how police ranks work in big American cities (which is what and where I’m assuming MnF Metropolis is). 1 is the highest rank and 14 is the lowest.

1: Chief of Police – This is Officer Juggs’ rank.
2: Colonel
3: Lieutenant Colonel
4: Commander
5: Major
6: Captain
7: Lieutenant – This is your character’s rank.
8: Inspector
9: Staff Sergeant
10: Sergeant
11: Corporal
12: Master Police Officer
13: Police Officer
14: Police Cadet

So your plot that Juggs is doing this to get a promotion makes no sense.

Second, and this is the major one, Officer Juggs is Serrated’s original character and he DOESN’T let ANYONE use her for sex scenes. Ever. Under any circumstances.

So if you want to use this idea, you will have to replace Juggs with another character.
LOL XD I've just edited my idea.

Re: My game idea. If you have a premium account you can submit it.

Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2017 8:59 am
by beinghaseo
I think it looks good but it is missing something. Can't put my finger on it. Also scene 1 doesn't really scream. Sexy. 30 Dudes is a bit much lol but you do you man.

Re: My game idea. If you have a premium account you can submit it.

Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2017 2:16 pm
by Sexy Mizuki
Instead of Lisa Ann I suggest, “Chelsea Charms”. She has the biggest pair of tits ever.