Hey guys,
I haven't been very active on the site lately, because with everything switching over the SITE hasn't been very active lately. But I saw there was a new Officer Juggs game, saw that submissions were open, and decided to see what was going on, and I stumbled across your idea here.
So, here's the thing. I have zero issue with people using Mrs. Megamounds for their ideas. Serrated wrote the first part, I wrote the second and third part, I really don't mind if someone else writes part four, I've been working on other stuff for other websites I write for, and wasn't planning on writing another Where's the Milk game until later in the year....
BUT (and like Mrs. Megamounds rear end, this is a big, giant butt) it would be really cool if the idea at least attempted to fit the over-arcing theme of the first three games. The whole point of the "Where's the Milk?" games is that an uppity bitch with giant udders is humiliated and milked by someone she wouldn't normally be caught dead with. In the first game it was a little person (I don't know if I'm allowed to say midget lol) in the second game it was an old baker, in the third game it was a barely legal teen boy. She's got this amazing gift that to she sees as a grotesque mutation, and due to her experiences in life she gets off on the humiliation of her big stupid tits. I feel like martians and saving the universe is just a little too out there for Mrs. Megamounds, plus, the ending you wrote kind of ruins the character for anyone else who wants to use her.
Now, don't get me wrong, I like your idea, it would make a pretty hot game. And I know this is going to sound hypocritical since I'm not the one who actually created the character, but what if you submitted this exact idea... but with a character other than Mrs. Megamounds? There's plenty of room on this website for multiple busty broads to get milked and fucked
1. Human on non-human sex is unfortunately banned. So you'd either have to switch the martians to be more humanoid or your main character to be an alien princess or something.
2. There's a lot in your story. A LOT. Try to trim it down to be two or three scenes because even if it does win (and trust me, not every idea wins ) Vadim is probably going to cut stuff out to get it done in a reasonable amount of time
3. Get your own premium account if you want to submit a story. There's not a lot of users right now because of the site maintenance, and people who are premium don't really like to post other writer's ideas very often.
Either way, thanks for asking me before you posted it. I hope I could help.
Cheers!
