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The Princess and the Thief
Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2018 4:51 pm
by anonymoosefan
Just resubmitted TPATT and I have to say, I really thought it would do better than it did in that last round...
Can I ask for feedback? Possible improvements?
Re: The Princess and the Thief
Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2018 12:06 am
by Kelumir
I wish I had something more constructive to say, but I can't really think of anything wrong with it.
Though, there is one thing I was wondering, what's with the tiny "TM" at the end of the sentence at the top?
A steamy story from the heart of France, starring a beautiful princess and a pair of Hilariously Incompetent Criminals™!
Re: The Princess and the Thief
Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2018 1:43 pm
by anonymoosefan
Kelumir wrote: ↑Thu Jun 21, 2018 12:06 am
I wish I had something more constructive to say, but I can't really think of anything wrong with it.
Though, there is one thing I was wondering, what's with the tiny "TM" at the end of the sentence at the top?
Just a little joke about how common the "bumbling criminal" trope is.
