Yeah fair enough, I’m not trying to claim this isn’t a weak submission overall, but I was pressed for time and wanted to put atleast something up there before submissions closed instead of all the stubs and incorrect submissions that were up there at the time. I said I was happy to submit nothing if someone else had a solid idea in place, but no one made an attempt but JINXED. Vadim really only wanted some ideas for girls and plot anyway. He will probably want to change things and we’ll end up with something different anyway.
However, As far as I’m aware, Vadim came up with the bulk of the base ideas for Episode 1, but Serrated still wrote all the dialogue for it. So Vadim will still need someone to help with writing the script for the game.
I was working towards using Mighty Mom and Busty Bomber again in the next one. It’s just that I’m cautious of how heavily this series (and others) relies almost exclusively on the use of serrated’s characters. I was simply trying to test the waters with new characters while still giving the old ones a chance to shine. Plus since we only get 3 scenes per game it’s hard to try out anything new if we only ever feature the same old girls in every scenario.
Obviously, I’m biased towards Holly, and maybe I’m forcing her in there a bit, but I liked the idea of playing as someone other than Watson for a portion of the game, and felt like it made sense with Holly and would give me a chance to flesh her out a bit more and try to make her more appealing now that her “bitchy intro arc” has been resolved. But yeah, in that case it’s just me wanting to use my established OC a little bit because why not.
I do want this one to be less superhero-y, and if I get to work on the script I’ll try and lean more towards the paranormal/mystery side. It did come off as being fairly super hero intensive in the synopsis’s provided. The hero element is only there because it was a core component of the first 2 (plus the context specific characters involved) and Vadim did request hero related ideas in the submission text.
And yes, Jinx doesn’t fit, but no one suggested OC ideas for other girls so I just stuck with it for a character design for the submission. I’m not familiar with the original character so it doesn’t bother me as much, but that’s just me being unfair. If the idea gets used we could change her name, and Vadim will probably put his own spin on the design like always. But you’re right, it’s not a perfect fit. But JINXED wanted to use her, and I don’t mind the design of her for the role I was thinking of, so that’s why she’s in there.
Anyway, thanks for the feedback, but it would have been more helpful last week before the submissions closed.
From what I’ve heard from Vadim, he might be trying to do something a little different with this episode anyway, so he might make some big changes to what was suggested.
Votes Are On.
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Kelumir won ! It's his game that must be done !
And the Princess and the Thief is not even in the first 3 !
What the fuck ?!
And the Princess and the Thief is not even in the first 3 !
What the fuck ?!
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I sent this message via the tab contact we should have an answer soon .
"hello, I submitted an idea to the vote of kosmos and I would like explanations, the idea of Kelumir (super whore family 4) had the most vote, followed by my idea (PKMN: road to hoenn) then an idea on yu-gi-oh is in 3rd place and then (the princess and the thief) in 4th.
Why it's the 4th who wins, it's unfair I want an explanation !"
"hello, I submitted an idea to the vote of kosmos and I would like explanations, the idea of Kelumir (super whore family 4) had the most vote, followed by my idea (PKMN: road to hoenn) then an idea on yu-gi-oh is in 3rd place and then (the princess and the thief) in 4th.
Why it's the 4th who wins, it's unfair I want an explanation !"
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I fully agree. This is completely unfair and not the way I wanted to win.
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The answer of Kosmos :
"Sorry for this, Kosmos has been working hard with no days off and we
decided to give him an ability to choose the idea by himself cuz only
he can say how much the energy he has to make it ."
My answer :
please, I therefore ask the creation of a petition to restore the real winner !!
If you have me ! put your support on this forum !
"Sorry for this, Kosmos has been working hard with no days off and we
decided to give him an ability to choose the idea by himself cuz only
he can say how much the energy he has to make it ."
My answer :
please, I therefore ask the creation of a petition to restore the real winner !!
If you have me ! put your support on this forum !
Now I'm worried about submitting my idea that's around a thousand words right now [Still working on it] If the artists need a rest, they should tell us. We don't expect the artists to work like machines. Maybe you can give us a refund for the period of time that the said artist is resting? The idea that gets the most votes and doesn't break any of the rules should be the one that gets made into a MNF game [Though I'm sure that some of us Premium Members, myself included, wish that our ideas get made just because we say so.] Please follow the rules that YOU have come up with. Don't change it as and when you feel like it.crocdeloup wrote: ↑Sat Aug 18, 2018 9:47 pmThe answer of Kosmos :
"Sorry for this, Kosmos has been working hard with no days off and we
decided to give him an ability to choose the idea by himself cuz only
he can say how much the energy he has to make it ."
My answer :
please, I therefore ask the creation of a petition to restore the real winner !!
If you have me ! put your support on this forum !
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Well, in that kinda case, Maybe Kosmos should pick the idea he want but he should also not accept any new game and keeps Kelumir Idea for the next one. THAT would be fair
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Oh great! So not only has he completely ignored the real winner and everyone who voted for it, he's gonna half ass my idea too!crocdeloup wrote: ↑Sat Aug 18, 2018 9:47 pmThe answer of Kosmos :
"Sorry for this, Kosmos has been working hard with no days off and we decided to give him an ability to choose the idea by himself cuz only he can say how much the energy he has to make it."
...Fuck it.
Hey Kelumir?
Write up another idea and I'll keep submitting it for you, so you can have two up at the same time until one of them wins.