Elica Honkers : The lost Woods Quest (updated)

JINXED
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Sun Feb 18, 2018 4:19 am

What do you think i need to add? More dialog or more chacter details like back ground story ?
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Mon Feb 19, 2018 6:00 pm

Making last min changes im gonna add some dialogue for the sex scene so kinda spice it up
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Mon Feb 19, 2018 7:48 pm

Also Jinxed, are they orcs or bandits?
Because in the mini-game description you call them bandits, but the reference image is still of the orc and all the dialogue markers still say Orc 1, Orc 2 and Orc 3.
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Kelumir
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Mon Feb 19, 2018 9:59 pm

Ok, I've got a gift for ya.

I've done a couple of pics where Elica now has elf ears.

Elica - Maid Uniform:
https://image.ibb.co/bAWDRS/image.png

Elica - Adventurer Uniform:
https://image.ibb.co/maL7mS/image.png

Also, SMX, I hope you see this because I've redone the Lustful as well. For his new design I used Organisation XIII as a basis.
https://image.ibb.co/hH2yt7/image.png
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Tue Feb 20, 2018 12:43 am

Thank you so much for the help and yes they are orcs i forgot to change that
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Tue Feb 20, 2018 5:31 am

Made the changes to the sex scene and added some dialog . If theres anything wrong let me know so i can fix it.
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Tue Feb 20, 2018 7:37 am

I spotted a few typos and grammar problems. They're fixed now. And I added in the new links for Elf Elica as you still had her old human ones in there.

Also, I moved everything for the sex scenes to the end of the script since, you know, that's when they take place. I just feel it looks better.

And, I'd just like to remind you one more time, please don't just copy and paste from the forum post, as you won't get the full links.

Elica is an elf who works as a maid in the Wild Boar Tavern. She is sick of her job with little pay and no fun. All she dreams about is being a member of the Adventurer's Guild, but the only thing that's holding her back is the expensive members fee needed to join. Which is 500 Gold coins. So, she decides one night, after having a bad day of work, to steal her boss’s secret stash of gold and run away to the Adventurer’s Guild. The Morning Elica arrives at the Adventurer's Guild, she pays the fee, joins the guild and is given a guild members uniform. She then gets sent out to investigate a mysterious cave in the Lost Woods.

Characters
Bartender
https://i.pinimg.com/236x/78/d9/0c/78d9 ... 3c538a.jpg

Elica
(Tavern uniform)
https://image.ibb.co/bAWDRS/image.png

(Guild uniform)
https://image.ibb.co/maL7mS/image.png

Orc 1, 2 & 3
https://images.dakkadakka.com/gallery/2 ... 20Orcs.jpg

Guild recruiter
https://orig00.deviantart.net/fa2f/f/20 ... 8m0cxa.jpg

Locations / Backgrounds

(The Wild Boar Tavern)
https://rpg.ambient-mixer.com/images_te ... 0_full.jpg (the Outside)

https://cdna.artstation.com/p/assets/im ... 1472592400 (inside)

(Adventurer’s Guild)
https://hedrick-cs.deviantart.com/art/C ... -608736421

Story Dialog

Elica: *Sigh*. " I wish I could just go and join the Adventurer’s Guild. I could be off having all sorts of adventures. But instead, I’m stuck here. "
Bartender: " Elica! What’s the holdup? We got costumers and all you’re doing is daydreaming about joining that guild, aren't ya!? "
Elica: " No Sir! Sorry Sir, I’ll get back to work. "

Later that night, after a hard day’s work of cleaning and serving customers, Elica is taking a bath and starts thinking of the guild and about how her life would be much better if she quit her boring job to join them. So, she gets dressed, grabs her stash of saved up gold and then sneaks into her boss’s room and steals his stash of gold as well, before she runs off into the night. The next morning, Elica arrives at the Adventurer’s Guild.

Guild Recruiter: " Hey there traveller. What brings you here today? "
Elica: " Hi. I've come here to join the guild. "
Guild Recruiter: " Oh great, and I’m guessing you know about the members fee, right? "
Elica: " Yes. Here you go. " (Elica gives the recruiter the bag of gold.)
Guild Recruiter: " Alright, here's your standard guild uniform and weapon. Just put it on and follow me to the quest room. "
(The two women move to the quest room.)
Guild Recruiter: " This is where you can pick out quests that were given to us by people who need our help. "
Guild Recruiter: " Here, try this one. It's a simple recon quest. It’s an easy one for beginners. Just go check out this cave in the Lost Woods and see why people have been getting chased away from the cave. So just have a look around the area. Here’s a map of the area so you don’t get, well, lost. " (She gives Elica a map to the Lost woods)
Elica: " Alright. Here I go. "

Fades to the map with a red dotted line showing Elica travelling to the Lost woods.

Elica arrives at the Lost Woods and takes the path to the mysterious cave. She sees the cave, but nothing is strange about it, so she wonders into the dark cave until she sees a light in the back of the cave. She sneaks up to the light and sees two huge orcs siting around a camp fire eating meat. She tries to sneak back out until she bumps into something behind her. She then gets picked up by a third orc and he brings her to the other two orcs and all three of them surround her.

(Side note) The orcs are speaking like this due to no education plus accent.
Orc 1: " Wat’z diz boyz? "
Orc 2: " I'z thikz it’z won of dem ‘alf gurlz. "
Orc 3: " Wat she doing in ‘ere? I bet she ‘ere to steal sum of our Grog! "
Orc 2: " Naw. ‘Alfz don’t like orc Grog! "
Orc 1: " Yea. Wat’z you be doing in our cave ‘alf? "
Elica: " Nothing, I swear. I’m just passing by. "
Orc 3: " Tellz uz da truth or elze. "
Elica: " A-alright. Please don't eat me. I was sent here from my Guild to see what was scarring people away from this cave. "
Orc 1: " So you waz sent ‘ere to git rid of uz!? "
Elica: " NO! I swear! I was just about to leave. I mean no harm to you. But... "
Orc 2: " But wat? "
Elica: " You have to stop scaring people that come near your cave. If not, the guild that I came from will send someone to hunt you all down, so please stop. "
Orc 1: " Alright ‘alf lady, we’ll stahp... "
Elica: " Oh thank goodness. "
Orc 1: " For a price! "
Elica: " What do you want? Gold? "
Orcs 1, 2 & 3: " YES! "
Elica: " Sorry guys, but I’m broke. "
Orc 1: " If youz can’t pay uz in gold, then maybe we get to keepz you az a slave instead! "
Elica: " WHAT!? No Way! "
Orc 1: " If'z you cant'z payz us how'z about a lil wager then? "
Elica: (Thought) " What are these guys thinking of? "
Elica: " Fine. What’s the wager? "
Orc 2: " If'z you canz out drink all of us we will leave diz place for gud and we's givez you half of ourz gold. "
Elica 2: " And what do you guys get if I lose?"
Orc 2: " ‘Owz about we get to fuck you? All three of uz? We ‘aven't ‘ad a good fucking in a while. Wat you say boyz!? "
Orct 1 & 3: " Yeaaaaa! "
Elica: *Gulps* " O-ok, fine. But if you must, promise me you will stop Robing people anyway. "
Bandit 1 2 & 3: " We will. "

Mini Game:
You play as the orcs and you sit across the table from Elica and you have to drink as much beer before the timer runs out. This can either be in third-person, side view or POV. The game is played like this, you have to rapidly click the pint of beer to drink faster, and then press on a new pint of beer and repeat the process until you beat Elica. The timer will be set for 1 min per round (3 Rounds) and each round Elica takes a piece of clothing off. At the end of the 3rd round it cuts to a scene with Elica drunk and she slurs:
Elica: (Drunk) " No fair. *Hiccup* How could I have lost to... *Hiccup* these guy? "

Then the foursome begins.

Sex scenes

(Scene 1) BJ & Tit Fuck
https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post& ... id=1925874

Dialog

Elica : " OH MY GOD! You boys are huge! "
Orc 1: " Wat? Youz never zeen an orcs cok beforz? Heh-heh... Get to zuken alf!
After the three orcs cum on her.
Elica : " Wow! So much cum. "
Orc 2: " Diz aint nofing yet afl. "

(Scene 2) Cowgirl & Double BJ
https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post& ... id=2327606

https://xbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=604495
( Show bulge on hard and manual mode. )

Elica: Please go easy, I've never had anything that massive before. (Her face is blushing slightly.)
Orc 1: Easy (penetrates Elica’s pussy) " Dat'z some tight alf pussy we got'z here boy'z. "
Orc 2 & 3: " Dont'z forget abotz uz afl! " "Ya zuk on diz cock! "
Elica: (Medium) " Oh My God! It’s so deep inside me! "
Orc 1: (Hard ) " WAAGGGHHHHH!!! "
Elica: " OH MY GOD! IT'S HITTING MY WOMB! "
Elica: (Thought) " Oh God! I can feel his cock all the way down my throat! " (Deepthraot mode)

(Scene 3) Gangbang
https://www.8muses.com/comix/picture/Jo ... k-Cocks/71
(The camera can change to 3 different viewpoints. A closeup on the dp, bj and a whole view of the gangbang)

Orc 1: " Youz ready for the best fucking ofz your life alf gurl? "
Elica: " Bring it on you brutes. Fuck me like I’m your whore. "
Orc 2: " Diz alf is crazy! Gud ting shez drunk! "
Orc 1: " Ready boyz? "
Orc 2 & 3: " WAGGGHHHHH! "
Elica: (Thought) " Is it possible to be drunk on orc grog and drunk on thick orc cock at the same time? "
(Medium speed.)
Elica: (Thought) " There's too much cock... Fuck Yess! "

(Last Scene) The Bukkake
Orc 1: "Openz up afl! I’ma cumming! "
Elica: " UHN-Haaa! "
Orc 2: "Youz like diz orc cum on yourz face huh?"
Elica: " Oh God Yes! "
Orc 3: " OVER HEREZ SLUT! Hold dem big titz up for me. "
Elica: " WOW! I’ve never seen so much cum before... That was amazing! "

https://www.8muses.com/comix/picture/Jo ... k-Cocks/82
(Please use the pic on right for this scene.)
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Wed Feb 21, 2018 2:03 am

Thank you Kelumir for everything you have done ! :D You been a big help on the garmmer art work and the advice you gave me ,I hope we can work together on future projects like this . I'v gota good feeling that im gonna win this time no thanks to you .
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Wed Feb 21, 2018 5:33 am

JINXED wrote:
Wed Feb 21, 2018 2:03 am
Thank you Kelumir for everything you have done ! :D You been a big help on the garmmer art work and the advice you gave me ,I hope we can work together on future projects like this . I'v gota good feeling that im gonna win this time no thanks to you .
You're welcome.

Maybe you will. But don't forget, I also have an idea up. 8-)
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Wed Feb 21, 2018 5:45 am

Oh yea well you got my vote buddy and let the best man win
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