I like it, but I do prefer if there was more
dialogue during sex scenes and maybe a little more BDSM? But good story though
I’m hoping Baka’s mom makes a return
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Sexy Mizuki
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Hey maybe another suggestion for the end, Bakas mother comes home and sees Mizuki giving her Husband a tittyfuck, Mizuki was a bit scared when she saw her come home, but then she took out her tits and said she was ready for a double tittyfuck. From upstairs you see a person recording all of this, it’s Baka saying, I think Mizuki has shown me that I can recruit my motherNilbog wrote: ↑Tue Jan 08, 2019 3:01 pmThe Script:
Baka’s Mom’s Hinder Date:
Characters:
Baka’s Mom
Baka’s Dad
Baka/The Masked Stranger
Diva Mizuki
Baka’s Disguise: https://i.pinimg.com/originals/1e/ba/e3 ... 505741.jpg (naked otherwise)
Baka’s mom is totally naked during the sex scenes.
Outfits:
Baka’s Mom’s outfit (home): Same as the other games.
Baka’s Mom’s outfit (date): Dress http://sororityfashion.com/wp-content/u ... -other.jpg, Jacket http://contentinjection.com/wp-content/ ... -women.jpg Shoes https://i.pinimg.com/736x/22/fe/5a/22fe ... a21505.jpg
Baka’s outfit (final scene): his classic overalls
Baka’s Dad’s outfit: https://i.dailymail.co.uk/i/pix/2013/06 ... 34x432.jpg
Mizuki’s outfit: Top https://img.diytrade.com/smimg/2011319/ ... _/a4dc.jpg Underwear http://latexexpress.com/media/catalog/p ... da7e21.png
Locations:
The Baka Residence: Outside https://readreidread.files.wordpress.co ... es-014.jpg Inside https://i.pinimg.com/736x/26/1f/a4/261f ... aeeee9.jpg
Alley: https://willwriteforsanity.files.wordpr ... -alley.jpg
Club: http://bdsmcafe.com/wp-content/uploads/ ... ungeon.jpg
Mizuki’s house: http://cdn.home-designing.com/wp-conten ... d-sofa.jpg
Sex Scene 1: https://x.imagefapusercontent.com/u/ron ... ure_22.jpg
Sex Scene 2: https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/ ... owgirl.png
Sex Scene 3: https://x.imagefapusercontent.com/u/ram ... 589/03.jpg
Script:
Location: The Baka Residence
(Baka’s dad is sitting on the couch watching TV)
Baka’s Mom: You just don’t satisfy me anymore!
Baka’s Dad: Well, I’m sorry but after working a long, hard day I don’t have a lot of energy.
Baka’s Mom: Your work is the only thing long and hard about you...
Baka’s Dad: Just leave me alone and let me have some time to myself!
Baka’s Mom: Fine. Whatever.
(In another room)
Baka’s Mom: Fuck, that bastard is killing me! I’m so frustrated it’s unreal! Maybe I should check out that website Mizuki told me about. What’s it called again? Hinder?
(PULLS PHONE OUT)
Baka’s Mom: A match already?
MESSAGES: (LatexFiend = Baka/Stranger, Juicy Purple = Baka’s Mom
LatexFiend: hey whats up?
JuicyPurple: My husband isn’t paying any attention for me.
LatexFiend: that sux
LatexFiend: listen i have a solution for u
LatexFiend: u into rough shit???
JuicyPurple: I’ve had some experience.
LatexFiend: really?
JuicyPurple: I love watching rough porn. My son is actually a porn star you know.
LatexFiend: niiice
LatexFiend: whats his name
JuicyPurple: Baka
LatexFiend: that guys fuckin awesome
JuicyPurple: He’s dating Diva Mizuki actually.
LatexFiend: man that guys so cool
LatexFiend: anyway
LatexFiend: cum meet me at 69 Ram Road at 9 and I’ll solve all ur problems
JuicyPurple: Sounds good, I’ll see you then.
(69 Ram Road, 9pm)
Baka’s Mom: (Thinking) Is this the place? Seems kinda sketchy...
“Masked Stranger”: Psst. Hey!
(Pans over to reveal him)
Baka’s Mom: Oh! Hello... Umm, nice mask.
“Masked Stranger”: Hey baby. Damn, you’re looking fine! You ever heard of the Glistening Lotus Club?
Baka’s Mom: Vaguely.
“Masked Stranger”: It’s only the best sex club in town!
Baka’s Mom: Sounds exciting!
“Masked Stranger”: Well then, let’s not waste any time.
(Masked Stranger knocks on the back door and it opens)
“Masked Stranger”: After you
Scene 1:
Before starting:
“Masked Stranger”: Fuck, these are some great jugs!
Scene 2:
Baka’s Mom: Let me top for a little bit.
Scene 3:
“Masked Stranger”: You ever been fucked like this?
Baka’s Mom: I’ve always wanted to try it ever since I saw Mizuki Tour.
“Masked Stranger”: Your son fucked her real good, but I’m gonna fuck you even better!
Outside:
Baka’s Mom: That was amazing! We should definitely do this again some time.
“Masked Stranger”: I can’t wait. See you then.
Epilogue:
(The Baka’s Residence, Baka’s Dad is asleep on the couch)
Baka’s Mom comes through the door
Baka’s Mom: Holy shit, that was just what I needed!
(She glances over at Baka’s Dad)
Baka’s Mom: You don’t need to know about this, honey.
(Mizuki’s house)
Baka comes in
Mizuki: Oh, hi honey, how have you been?
Baka: Oh you know just out and about.
Mizuki: Well, try and get some sleep, we’re shooting tomorrow.
Baka: Speaking of, I think we should invite my mom, she’d make a great pornstar I’d think.
Mizuki: Really? Well, if that’s what you want.
Baka: Trust me. She has a bright future ahead of her.
THE END
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Sexy Mizuki
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Sexy Mizuki
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Yeah and he got released after Baka’s busty adventure, it’s the last time you hear from his mother and see his father.
I loved the addition and of seeing his mother and Mizuki together
Hold your horses Mizuki.
You know how this site works. Just because it's liked here it doesn't mean it's going to get made. You gotta submit it for the votes, just like the rest of us.
I agree with this note. This is a good start! I think the concept is great and the buildup works! The sex scenes need more detail (and more BDSM if you ask me to be true to her storyline). Happy to submit this idea if it gets finished (and if it’s allowed under the rules...never submitted for someone else before).Sexy Mizuki wrote: ↑Tue Jan 08, 2019 9:20 pmI like it, but I do prefer if there was more
dialogue during sex scenes and maybe a little more BDSM? But good story though
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NamelessPerson
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Just to keep the titfuck scene alive here is a link to it https://imgur.com/a/NfyjLvs also with baka cumming over her face with some getting into her mouth and shes drinking it.Nilbog wrote: ↑Tue Jan 08, 2019 3:01 pmThe Script:
Baka’s Mom’s Hinder Date:
Characters:
Baka’s Mom
Baka’s Dad
Baka/The Masked Stranger
Diva Mizuki
Baka’s Disguise: https://i.pinimg.com/originals/1e/ba/e3 ... 505741.jpg (naked otherwise)
Baka’s mom is totally naked during the sex scenes.
Outfits:
Baka’s Mom’s outfit (home): Same as the other games.
Baka’s Mom’s outfit (date): Dress http://sororityfashion.com/wp-content/u ... -other.jpg, Jacket http://contentinjection.com/wp-content/ ... -women.jpg Shoes https://i.pinimg.com/736x/22/fe/5a/22fe ... a21505.jpg
Baka’s outfit (final scene): his classic overalls
Baka’s Dad’s outfit: https://i.dailymail.co.uk/i/pix/2013/06 ... 34x432.jpg
Mizuki’s outfit: Top https://img.diytrade.com/smimg/2011319/ ... _/a4dc.jpg Underwear http://latexexpress.com/media/catalog/p ... da7e21.png
Locations:
The Baka Residence: Outside https://readreidread.files.wordpress.co ... es-014.jpg Inside https://i.pinimg.com/736x/26/1f/a4/261f ... aeeee9.jpg
Alley: https://willwriteforsanity.files.wordpr ... -alley.jpg
Club: http://bdsmcafe.com/wp-content/uploads/ ... ungeon.jpg
Mizuki’s house: http://cdn.home-designing.com/wp-conten ... d-sofa.jpg
Sex Scene 1: https://x.imagefapusercontent.com/u/ron ... ure_22.jpg
Sex Scene 2: https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/ ... owgirl.png
Sex Scene 3: https://x.imagefapusercontent.com/u/ram ... 589/03.jpg
Script:
Location: The Baka Residence
(Baka’s dad is sitting on the couch watching TV)
Baka’s Mom: You just don’t satisfy me anymore!
Baka’s Dad: Well, I’m sorry but after working a long, hard day I don’t have a lot of energy.
Baka’s Mom: Your work is the only thing long and hard about you...
Baka’s Dad: Just leave me alone and let me have some time to myself!
Baka’s Mom: Fine. Whatever.
(In another room)
Baka’s Mom: Fuck, that bastard is killing me! I’m so frustrated it’s unreal! Maybe I should check out that website Mizuki told me about. What’s it called again? Hinder?
(PULLS PHONE OUT)
Baka’s Mom: A match already?
MESSAGES: (LatexFiend = Baka/Stranger, Juicy Purple = Baka’s Mom
LatexFiend: hey whats up?
JuicyPurple: My husband isn’t paying any attention for me.
LatexFiend: that sux
LatexFiend: listen i have a solution for u
LatexFiend: u into rough shit???
JuicyPurple: I’ve had some experience.
LatexFiend: really?
JuicyPurple: I love watching rough porn. My son is actually a porn star you know.
LatexFiend: niiice
LatexFiend: whats his name
JuicyPurple: Baka
LatexFiend: that guys fuckin awesome
JuicyPurple: He’s dating Diva Mizuki actually.
LatexFiend: man that guys so cool
LatexFiend: anyway
LatexFiend: cum meet me at 69 Ram Road at 9 and I’ll solve all ur problems
JuicyPurple: Sounds good, I’ll see you then.
(69 Ram Road, 9pm)
Baka’s Mom: (Thinking) Is this the place? Seems kinda sketchy...
“Masked Stranger”: Psst. Hey!
(Pans over to reveal him)
Baka’s Mom: Oh! Hello... Umm, nice mask.
“Masked Stranger”: Hey baby. Damn, you’re looking fine! You ever heard of the Glistening Lotus Club?
Baka’s Mom: Vaguely.
“Masked Stranger”: It’s only the best sex club in town!
Baka’s Mom: Sounds exciting!
“Masked Stranger”: Well then, let’s not waste any time.
(Masked Stranger knocks on the back door and it opens)
“Masked Stranger”: After you
Scene 1:
Before starting:
“Masked Stranger”: Fuck, these are some great jugs!
Scene 2:
Baka’s Mom: Let me top for a little bit.
Scene 3:
“Masked Stranger”: You ever been fucked like this?
Baka’s Mom: I’ve always wanted to try it ever since I saw Mizuki Tour.
“Masked Stranger”: Your son fucked her real good, but I’m gonna fuck you even better!
Outside:
Baka’s Mom: That was amazing! We should definitely do this again some time.
“Masked Stranger”: I can’t wait. See you then.
Epilogue:
(The Baka’s Residence, Baka’s Dad is asleep on the couch)
Baka’s Mom comes through the door
Baka’s Mom: Holy shit, that was just what I needed!
(She glances over at Baka’s Dad)
Baka’s Mom: You don’t need to know about this, honey.
(Mizuki’s house)
Baka comes in
Mizuki: Oh, hi honey, how have you been?
Baka: Oh you know just out and about.
Mizuki: Well, try and get some sleep, we’re shooting tomorrow.
Baka: Speaking of, I think we should invite my mom, she’d make a great pornstar I’d think.
Mizuki: Really? Well, if that’s what you want.
Baka: Trust me. She has a bright future ahead of her.
THE END
For the BDSM that can be like the chloe pizza delivery game where you can toggle between two different cloths preset.
