super heroine hijinks 4

fcrivers
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Thu Apr 18, 2019 12:34 am

??? do you think that makes any sense???

Bruh, quit trying to write ideas, that single handly won worst shit ive read in 2019.

When I read " slightly different", this mess was not what I had in mind.

Why did you even create a new thread? Are you retarded? We do not need more threads m8, you copied your shit here anyway.

FFS

Yoo, Vadim, in case you read my initial idea, stick with what I wrote and do your thing.
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CodeW
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Thu Apr 18, 2019 8:58 am

fcrivers wrote:
Thu Apr 18, 2019 12:34 am
??? do you think that makes any sense???

Bruh, quit trying to write ideas, that single handly won worst shit ive read in 2019.

When I read " slightly different", this mess was not what I had in mind.

Why did you even create a new thread? Are you retarded? We do not need more threads m8, you copied your shit here anyway.

FFS

Yoo, Vadim, in case you read my initial idea, stick with what I wrote and do your thing.
Makes sense to me. I'm sorry my idea made you feel so disgusted but your idea ain't any better. The way I see it, your idea is dull.
fcrivers
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Fri Apr 19, 2019 12:29 am

The fact you replied with "makes sense to me" just shows how braindead you are.

I know, for a fact, I am not willing or interested in writing ideas for games, sometimes I come up with a concept, thats it. But you should understand that, wacky ass writing and plot is what made good people quit this website.

Your entire idea is just wack m8. Understand the fundamental issue with it, a "cop", trained to protect and help the people. suddenly goes rogue and becomes a villain, causing chaos on the city cuz his mom/step-mom doesnt have sex with him....
Atleast my idea just involves a mask and outfit, while leaving room for plenty of scenarios instead of creating a morally and psychologically wrong scenario just for the laughs.

With this said, understand your limitations and leave the writing to someone who has atleast more than single digit IQ.

Cheers bud
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Kelumir
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Fri Apr 19, 2019 8:10 am

If I may act as a neutral middle man for a moment, I do believe both of you have good points.

I've read both of the concepts you guys have suggested, and I find them very similar. I mean, I could easily see what CodeW wrote lead into the fake hostage situation suggested fcrivers.

With that said, I must admit that I like CodeW's idea about Super Son going rouge and becoming a villain to get the woman he wants. However, I also agree with fcrivers that him abandoning everything he stands for just so he can fuck Mighty Mom again is a bit weak. Like I said, I like the concept, but might I suggest that there is more to it then that? Maybe something like since the last time we saw him the public has started to doubt his abilities as a superhero? All the negativity slowly getting to him over time until he finally snaps, figuring since they won't respect him as a hero, then they'll cower before him as a villain.
sebastian
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Fri Apr 19, 2019 11:05 am

Hey guys.

Better if this time seduces her in the House of the officer pretending weakness again, then at the end mighty mom finds out and leaves. Super son gets angry and vows revenge against mighty mom for leaving him.

English is not my first language, I hope to have written clearly.
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CodeW
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Fri Apr 19, 2019 11:53 am

fcrivers Having sex with your own mother is morally wrong but that's what you wanted, isn't it?

I agree with your opinion, Kelumir.
sebastian
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Fri Apr 19, 2019 9:47 pm

Hey guys

CodeW But incest was a mistake in the dialogues of the game.
Dwayne
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Sat Apr 20, 2019 12:18 am

Kelumir wrote:
Fri Apr 19, 2019 8:10 am
If I may act as a neutral middle man for a moment, I do believe both of you have good points.

I've read both of the concepts you guys have suggested, and I find them very similar. I mean, I could easily see what CodeW wrote lead into the fake hostage situation suggested fcrivers.

With that said, I must admit that I like CodeW's idea about Super Son going rouge and becoming a villain to get the woman he wants. However, I also agree with fcrivers that him abandoning everything he stands for just so he can fuck Mighty Mom again is a bit weak. Like I said, I like the concept, but might I suggest that there is more to it then that? Maybe something like since the last time we saw him the public has started to doubt his abilities as a superhero? All the negativity slowly getting to him over time until he finally snaps, figuring since they won't respect him as a hero, then they'll cower before him as a villain.
This. I agree with all of this. Well said Kel.
fcrivers
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Sun Apr 21, 2019 8:30 pm

To me, it's only about having a superhero give up everything he has been taught and trained to do, just for the sake of shagging his mom. The mom attraction doesnt bother me, how you decided to put it in front of sense, does.

Obviously you could still change stuff, he can go rogue, but not because his mom doesnt fuck him lol..
Make it be, like Kelumir pointed out, he his easily influenced and always fucks it up, and, to him, his mom's to blame, so he wants "revenge" on her.

But even this plot cannot exist, I believe, due to the clear hints it has on incest, so your initial idea couldn't stand unless they specifically mention step-son and step-mom.

Anyways, tell you what, this shits just banter and single opinions, write it up, and put it up for vote, if it wins, let them deal with the CCBill workaround.
sebastian
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Mon Apr 22, 2019 12:44 am

hi guys.

i have an idea for super heroine hijinks 4, Where I send the idea?
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