Officer Juggs and Jessica Rabbit

[Kelumir]

Hmm, it looks good, but it still needs a bit of work.

First, the dialogue in a couple of the scenes needs to be expanded on a little. It doesn't have to be a novel, just enough to give it a bit of context.

Second, I think the links for the Detective and his office could be a bit clearer. The ArtStation links have multiple images and I think it would help if you specified which images you wanted.

And lastly there are a number of typos and spelling errors throughout the script. And at the Mini-Game part there's a line that's repeated needlessly.

Mini Game: While they argue you need to fondle their tits without getting caught and fill the meter.

AS they argue they notice the detective has gotten hard again. While they argue you need to fondle their tits without getting caught.

[Sexy Mizuki]

Even though you can't use Officer Juggs, could you share the idea here anyway?
Maybe there's another character that could be used in her place, or maybe create a new one.

Yeah I will give the quick once over , I tweaked it some to fit in a new character

Who Framed Jessica Rabbit?
Roger is missing again and Jessica is the prime suspect and hires the detective to prove her innocence and find the real criminal.

SEX SCENE AND SUMMARY

Characters:
Jessica Rabbit (But with bigger Tits and ass) like;
https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post& ... id=2689842

Private Dick Gracy:
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/3ZeWE
Add classic detective hat

Kelsey Charms: An "Entertainer" that works at the club with Jessica
https://thumbs-cdn.redtube.com/m=/_thum ... 905942.jpg
Dont even need a cartoon to show the body

Office:
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/qyk8n

Club:
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/--BX8rc6iuLU/U ... Movie1.jpg

Scene 1 Premise: Jessica Rabbit comes to the detectives office because she needs to hire him to prove shes innocent. The detective with his hat down looking at a wall of clues and suspects tells her without even looking;

Dick Gracy: I have too much on my plate already. I dont even have time to jack off let alone take on another case!

Jessica Rabbit: Well Maybe I can help you with that

Sex Scene 1
Blowjob to rough blowjob and Titfuck w/cumshot
http://68.media.tumblr.com/a575592cc1f8 ... o5_500.gif
Titfuck starts with her famous red dress still on
https://busy.org/@fumegi/jessica-rabbit ... ger-rabbit
http://ircomix.com/john-persons/c8ca88/02.jpg

Detective: Whew...Alright I will take the case. But when I find out who did this I am gonna need another mind blowing blowjob from you. Deal?

Jessica: Whatever it takes to get my Roger back.

Scene two: Detective decides to start looking for clues. He starts at the club where Jessica Performs
He starts with talking to the DJ but before he can even ask his first question he is distracted by the woman on stage
Detective: Hey, I am trying to get some infor.... WOAH!
Detective: Wow you sure are...stunning!

Kelsey: Thank you stranger. I saw you come in, how about you get a private dance and we get to know each other?

Detective: As much as I would love to im here on business. and trust me I would really love to!

Kelsey: Oh thats a shame, what kind of business is more important then me?

Detective: I am here looking into the Jessica Rabbit case.

Kelsey: Your here for that stage stealing ...... (Thinks to herself "whore!")
Clears her throat... I tell you what, how about I help you out and answer any questions you have? We can go into the private room and I wont even charge you.

Detective: I guess a little privacy wouldnt be a bad thing

They get into the room and Kelsey immediately drops her tits onto his face.

Sex Scene 2
Seated cowgirl
https://smutty.com/s/5FKfQ/

Kelsey: Oh I see you love my tits so much you are ready for more. How about I make your biggest titty dreams come true!

Sex Scene 3
Titfuck from the biggest tits in the world with a charm necklace on.
https://smutty.com/s/akOHj/

Scene 4: Jessica walks in to see Kelsey covered in cum. Mad that the detective is getting off instead of helping her she says;
Jessica: We had a deal! Was my blowjob not enough that you had to come fuck the big tittied bimbo that's always trying to steal my stage time!

Kelsey: Bimbo! Your just mad because he likes my huge tits better then your itty bitty titties!

Jessica: Itty Bitty?!?! My tits are the size of watermelons! You think everyone loves your cartoon sized tits dont you!

While they argue they are pushing against each other boob to boob going back and forth right on the detectives lap with his dick still out.

Mini Game: While they argue you need to fondle their tits without getting caught and fill the meter.

AS they argue they notice the detective has gotten hard again. While they argue you need to fondle their tits without getting caught.

Kelsey: See he likes my tits so much hes ready for round 2!

Jessica: He is hard again because of my tits and Ill prove it to you!

Sex Scene 4
Double blowjob and double titfuck from Kelsey Charms and Jessica Rabbit
https://hentai2read.com/a_school_where_ ... tory/1/73/

After while both of them are still sitting like this
https://smutty.com/s/fViyl/

Jessica: So have you found anything out about where my sweet Roger is?

Detective Gracy: Who?

To be continued...

Dude!!! I’m soooo glad you want a Chelsea Charms like character! We need a character with tits that are way bigger than Officer juggs! I’d so vote for this idea!

[guestysomething]

Yeah like I said this was just a quick once over. There is going to be much more script, I will fix the typos, and get some better pictures. Just grabbed them where I could. Alright I will post it next go round.

[Sexy Mizuki]

Yeah like I said this was just a quick once over. There is going to be much more script, I will fix the typos, and get some better pictures. Just grabbed them where I could. Alright I will post it next go round.

No problem dude, I just hope the artist make it look like Chelsea, it’s so annoying that she will probably never do anything sexual on camera, the closest you get is hearing her have sex or seeing her get her tits licked. I wish Chelsea would do atleast one titty fuck

[guestysomething]

Yeah like I said this was just a quick once over. There is going to be much more script, I will fix the typos, and get some better pictures. Just grabbed them where I could. Alright I will post it next go round.

No problem dude, I just hope the artist make it look like Chelsea, it’s so annoying that she will probably never do anything sexual on camera, the closest you get is hearing her have sex or seeing her get her tits licked. I wish Chelsea would do atleast one titty fuck

Thats the dream

[Sexy Mizuki]

Even though you can't use Officer Juggs, could you share the idea here anyway?
Maybe there's another character that could be used in her place, or maybe create a new one.

Yeah I will give the quick once over , I tweaked it some to fit in a new character


Who Framed Jessica Rabbit?
Roger is missing again and Jessica is the prime suspect and hires the detective to prove her innocence and find the real criminal.

SEX SCENE AND SUMMARY

Characters:
Jessica Rabbit (But with bigger Tits and ass) like;
https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post& ... id=2689842

Private Dick Gracy:
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/3ZeWE
Add classic detective hat

Kelsey Charms: An "Entertainer" that works at the club with Jessica
https://thumbs-cdn.redtube.com/m=/_thum ... 905942.jpg
Dont even need a cartoon to show the body

Office:
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/qyk8n

Club:
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/--BX8rc6iuLU/U ... Movie1.jpg

Scene 1 Premise: Jessica Rabbit comes to the detectives office because she needs to hire him to prove shes innocent. The detective with his hat down looking at a wall of clues and suspects tells her without even looking;

Dick Gracy: I have too much on my plate already. I dont even have time to jack off let alone take on another case!

Jessica Rabbit: Well Maybe I can help you with that

Sex Scene 1
Blowjob to rough blowjob and Titfuck w/cumshot
http://68.media.tumblr.com/a575592cc1f8 ... o5_500.gif
Titfuck starts with her famous red dress still on
https://busy.org/@fumegi/jessica-rabbit ... ger-rabbit
http://ircomix.com/john-persons/c8ca88/02.jpg

Detective: Whew...Alright I will take the case. But when I find out who did this I am gonna need another mind blowing blowjob from you. Deal?

Jessica: Whatever it takes to get my Roger back.

Scene two: Detective decides to start looking for clues. He starts at the club where Jessica Performs
He starts with talking to the DJ but before he can even ask his first question he is distracted by the woman on stage
Detective: Hey, I am trying to get some infor.... WOAH!
Detective: Wow you sure are...stunning!

Kelsey: Thank you stranger. I saw you come in, how about you get a private dance and we get to know each other?

Detective: As much as I would love to im here on business. and trust me I would really love to!

Kelsey: Oh thats a shame, what kind of business is more important then me?

Detective: I am here looking into the Jessica Rabbit case.

Kelsey: Your here for that stage stealing ...... (Thinks to herself "whore!")
Clears her throat... I tell you what, how about I help you out and answer any questions you have? We can go into the private room and I wont even charge you.

Detective: I guess a little privacy wouldnt be a bad thing

They get into the room and Kelsey immediately drops her tits onto his face.

Sex Scene 2
Seated cowgirl
https://smutty.com/s/5FKfQ/

Kelsey: Oh I see you love my tits so much you are ready for more. How about I make your biggest titty dreams come true!

Sex Scene 3
Titfuck from the biggest tits in the world with a charm necklace on.
https://smutty.com/s/akOHj/

Scene 4: Jessica walks in to see Kelsey covered in cum. Mad that the detective is getting off instead of helping her she says;
Jessica: We had a deal! Was my blowjob not enough that you had to come fuck the big tittied bimbo that's always trying to steal my stage time!

Kelsey: Bimbo! Your just mad because he likes my huge tits better then your itty bitty titties!

Jessica: Itty Bitty?!?! My tits are the size of watermelons! You think everyone loves your cartoon sized tits dont you!

While they argue they are pushing against each other boob to boob going back and forth right on the detectives lap with his dick still out.

Mini Game: While they argue you need to fondle their tits without getting caught and fill the meter.

AS they argue they notice the detective has gotten hard again. While they argue you need to fondle their tits without getting caught.

Kelsey: See he likes my tits so much hes ready for round 2!

Jessica: He is hard again because of my tits and Ill prove it to you!

Sex Scene 4
Double blowjob and double titfuck from Kelsey Charms and Jessica Rabbit
https://hentai2read.com/a_school_where_ ... tory/1/73/

After while both of them are still sitting like this
https://smutty.com/s/fViyl/

Jessica: So have you found anything out about where my sweet Roger is?

Detective Gracy: Who?

To be continued...

I still want this idea to happen!!

[guestysomething1]

Its up there now and losing sadly. Need more votes. Feel free to campaign for it

[Sexy Mizuki]

Its up there now and losing sadly. Need more votes. Feel free to campaign for it

We really need Chelsea charms as a meet n fuck character! If she won’t do hardcore, there will be fan fiction about her

[Sexy Mizuki]

Really hoping for this one to win so I can see Chelsea charms in cartoon form

[Brob]

Yea, I'm pretty sure it's going to win anyways, so I'm not sure what's the anxiety all about