India's sex bomb and beauty queen Katrina kaif decided to go to Hollywood to try her luck.
After she reached LA she met with a casting director Ben who was a fat black dude
Ben: Hey wassup Kat how are you
Kat: Ben I am good how are you ?
Ben: (looking at her big boobs and ass) ooh just fine now you now fine, lets start with the auditon then.
After the audition
Ben: Kat you have the looks lovely figure and gorgeous face but sweetie you dont have the talent to make it big in Hollywood, sorry dear. you need to work harder and maybe try later.
Kat: Ben please I had a long journey and I will do anything for you to give me another chance dont give up on me yet.
Ben: Anything, hmm well then lets see what you under those fine cloths of yours
Kat: Strips her cloths and stands with her hands covering her boobs
Ben: nice now streach your arms, and kneel, and suck my cock
While kat is sucking his cock Ben partner Jimmy comes into the room
Jimmy: Mamma mia what have we got here?
Ben: Pure Indian sex bomb dog
Jimmy: Hmm isn't she Katrina the one who wants a break in Hollywood
Ben: yeah dude and she sucks like a queen man.. aaaa good I'm gonna cum
Jimmy stips his pants and says: Sweetie lets see how you take care of us and then we take care of you
After both Ben and Jimmy fuck her in all holes, they break the news to Kat that she isnt yet ready for hollywood and that she needs to come to their every saturday afternoon for practice.
After two weeks of Ass pounding practice and six failed auditions,
Kat: Ben when will I get a break in Hollywood ? I have no more money left and I wont be able to stay in the motel any longer, I have to go back it seems
Ben: It would be sad to see this fine piece of ass go back to India
Jimmy: Kat see we have this producer friend of ours Shawn who is having his bachelor party tomorrow he is know as the black king you see, me and ben can't make it due to a meeting, why dont you go on our behalf.
Ben: Yeah it would be the perfect oppurtunity for you to migle with a producer and maybe get yourself a role.
Kat: Thinks about it and agrees to go
She puts on her sexiest outfit which is a low cut Indian red sareer with revealing cleavage and navel and bare back the saree is tight fiting which outlines her big boobs and ass perfectly.
Shawn: Hey dear welcome all of us were waiting for you only
Kat: Looks around the room and see 5 big black dudes all in party attaire waitng by the pool side,there were no women and six black guys.
Kat: Thank you Shawn, for having me over
Shawn: Ben and Jimmy have been saying a lot of good things about you. So you need a role in a flim thats right, Shawn say as he makes her sit on the couch, the other five guys also come and sit around her
kat: yeah , I am desparte to get a role, I have no money left, and I am afraid I have to go back to India without a break in Hollywood
Shawn: Now that would be tragedy not using a fine piece like that
The guys nood in approval
Shawn: See dear now there is role in a flim of mine, but the competition is too stiff so why dont you show us how desparate you are, and then maybe we can arrange a audition or something
Kat: But..
Shawm: Ok lets do it this way you let all of us enjoy you now and I'll pay ypu 1000$ that should keep you in towm for a couple of days and within that time I'll sort out that audition of yours
Kat: Thinks long and hard and say's well if i have to make it in hollywood then it seems I need to do it
All the six guys fuck her hard in all holes in a pure gangbang
Kat isnt aware that the whole sesion is recorded
After the fucking shawn pays her and she goes to her room, when she reaches the room shawn sends her a clip of the video, and with a message well if you make it to hollywood is a differnt matter but for the time being you are my sex toy, I want you over at my apartment tomorrow 3p.m I have some investors over I want you to please them or else well you know you will be a porn star instead of a hollywood star.
Next Kat decides to go to Shawn's place and keep him happy so that her video isn't leaked and that she can still be a hollywood star instead on a porn star.
Can change the plot to MNF world too if it suits you
You can also change her real name and mix it up a bit like the kim kardarshian and ardarshian one..
More game ideas!
I think it's good. Aside from few typo's here and there, the only things I can think to say about it is that I feel the sex scenes could be a bit more defined and that there are a few time when you've typed that a character is doing something, but it's written like they're talking. For example:
Whereas I feel they should look like this:Kat: Strips her cloths and stands with her hands covering her boobs
Kat: Thinks about it and agrees to go
Now this REALLY isn't a big thing and just a minor thing that personally annoys me a little. It's purely a personal problem, and as I've said before, the whole thing does look good.Kat strips her cloths and stands with her hands covering her boobs
Kat thinks about it and agrees to go
Thanks for the feedback will keep it in mind.Kelumir wrote: ↑Tue Jan 30, 2018 9:34 pmI think it's good. Aside from few typo's here and there, the only things I can think to say about it is that I feel the sex scenes could be a bit more defined and that there are a few time when you've typed that a character is doing something, but it's written like they're talking. For example:Whereas I feel they should look like this:Kat: Strips her cloths and stands with her hands covering her boobs
Kat: Thinks about it and agrees to goNow this REALLY isn't a big thing and just a minor thing that personally annoys me a little. It's purely a personal problem, and as I've said before, the whole thing does look good.Kat strips her cloths and stands with her hands covering her boobs
Kat thinks about it and agrees to go
I didn't elaborate the sex scenes because then it would become too long if you want I can elaborate all three of the sex scenes.
(described the sex scenes)
India's sex bomb and beauty queen Katrina kaif decided to go to MnF Metropolis to try her luck.
After she reached MnF Metropolis she met with a casting director Ben who was a fat black dude
Ben: Hey wassup Kat how are you
Kat: Ben I am good how are you ?
Ben: (looking at her big boobs and ass) ooh just fine now you now fine, lets start with the auditon then.
After the audition
Ben: Kat you have the looks lovely figure and gorgeous face but sweetie you dont have the talent to make it big in Hollywood, sorry dear. you need to work harder and maybe try later.
Kat: Ben please I had a long journey and I will do anything for you to give me another chance dont give up on me yet.
Ben: Anything, hmm well then lets see what you under those fine cloths of yours
Kat: Strips her cloths and stands with her hands covering her boobs
Ben: nice now streach your arms, and kneel, and suck my cock
While kat is sucking his cock Ben partner Jimmy comes into the room
Jimmy: Mamma mia what have we got here?
Ben: Pure Indian sex bomb dog
Jimmy: Hmm isn't she Katrina the one who wants a break in Hollywood
Ben: yeah dude and she sucks like a queen man.. aaaa good I'm gonna cum
Jimmy stips his pants and says: Sweetie lets see how you take care of us and then we take care of you.
While Kat goes to suck Jimmy's big black cock, Ben inserts his Big fat black cock in her pussy, while she kept gaging on Jimmy's cock, then Jimmy made katrina lay down and tit fucked her while Ben kept fucking her pussy, then Ben tit fucked her while Jimmy had her ass, then Jimmy takes her pussy, while Ben fucked her ass, then both of them drain all cum on her face giving her a cum bath.
After both Ben and Jimmy fuck her in all holes, they break the news to Kat that she isnt yet ready for hollywood and that she needs to come to their every saturday afternoon for practice.
After two weeks of Ass pounding practice and six failed auditions,
Kat: Ben when will I get a break in Hollywood ? I have no more money left and I wont be able to stay in the motel any longer, I have to go back it seems
Ben: It would be sad to see this fine piece of ass go back to India
Jimmy: Kat see we have this producer friend of ours Shawn who is having his bachelor party tomorrow he is know as the black king you see, me and ben can't make it due to a meeting, why dont you go on our behalf.
Ben: Yeah it would be the perfect oppurtunity for you to migle with a producer and maybe get yourself a role.
Kat: Thinks about it and agrees to go
She puts on her sexiest outfit which is a low cut Indian red sareer with revealing cleavage and navel and bare back the saree is tight fiting which outlines her big boobs and ass perfectly.
Shawn: Hey dear welcome all of us were waiting for you only
Kat: Looks around the room and see 5 big black dudes all in party attaire waitng by the pool side,there were no women and six black guys.
Kat: Thank you Shawn, for having me over
Shawn: Ben and Jimmy have been saying a lot of good things about you. So you need a role in a flim thats right, Shawn say as he makes her sit on the couch, the other five guys also come and sit around her
kat: yeah , I am desparte to get a role, I have no money left, and I am afraid I have to go back to India without a break in Hollywood
Shawn: Now that would be tragedy not using a fine piece like that
The guys nood in approval
Shawn: See dear now there is role in a flim of mine, but the competition is too stiff so why dont you show us how desparate you are, and then maybe we can arrange a audition or something
Kat: But..
Shawm: Ok lets do it this way you let all of us enjoy you now and I'll pay ypu 1000$ that should keep you in towm for a couple of days and within that time I'll sort out that audition of yours
Kat: Thinks long and hard and say's well if i have to make it in hollywood then it seems I need to do it
Shawn is the first to approach her and he kisses her in way bitting her lips off while he kept pressing her boobs violently to which Kat moaned, he then signals the others to join in and the other men come and rip of her cloths violently, their lust for her was visible in their eyes. Shawn makes Katrina kneel and suck his cock, while she stroked two other cocks of the other guys. While the three other guys were busy playing with her boobs, pussy, and ass.
Then Shawn makes her sit on his cock while another guy inserts it into her ass, she lets out a huge moan after which another guys put his cock into her mouth, while she was stroking two others with her hands, while the last guy who was obssed with boobs kept on sucking, pinching and pressing her boobs. All the six guys kept rotating and fucking one hole or the other untill all of them had cummed.
Shawm since it was his bachelor party and was treating katrina as a hooker said it to everyone whenever they are ready to cum they just need to say it and they can cum in any hole of her as they wish. Katrina begs them to not cum inside her pussy, she says them to cum in her mouth face or ass but not inside her pussy, but right then one of the guys puts his cock inside Kat's mouth and unloads his load deep inside her throat, seeing this Shawn drains his load deep inside her pussy, and then one by one all of drain their cum in one hole or the other most of them cum inside her pussy.
All the six guys fuck her hard in all holes in a pure gangbang
Kat isnt aware that the whole sesion is recorded
After the fucking shawn pays her and she goes to her room, when she reaches the room shawn sends her a clip of the video, and with a message well if you make it to hollywood is a differnt matter but for the time being you are my sex toy, I want you over at my apartment tomorrow 3p.m I have some investors over I want you to please them or else well you know you will be a porn star instead of a hollywood star.
Next Kat decides to go to Shawn's place and keep him happy so that her video isn't leaked and that she can still be a hollywood star instead on a porn star.
At sharp 3p.m Kat reaches Shawn's place and as she enters she sees that there are 3Black men all wearing suits and Shawn who is wearing a tight Jeans and t shirt. She is wearing an ethnic Indian dress called Saree which is very reavaling.
Shawn: Welcome Katrina Guys, she is our entertainer for today, I hope you guys will like her
Man 1: Ooh she is smoking hot
Man2: Where did you find her Shawn
Shawn: Thats a trade secret my friend
Man3: Hey lets not waste any time and get to business with this lovely lady
Shawn: Not so quick guys, enjoy the show
Shawn directs Katrina to dance for them as she strips for them, and plays the music
Katrina starts dancing in a slutty manner and strips down to her bra and panties and then Shawn stops the music and asks her to stand in front of couch and let the guest have a better look at her.
Man1 directly starts fondling with her big boobs and rips of her bra with one smooth pull
Man 2 Starts slapping and pinching her big ass
while Man 3 starts fingering her pussy from over the panty
then Man 2 and Man 3 startpulliing her panties in the opposite direction which eventually tears and Katrina lets out a moan as the fabric pentrates her pussy for a moment.
Then all Three men pull out their big black cocks and tell her to knell down and suck their cocks
She kneels and sucks of Man 1 while Man 2 is busy boob fucking her all the while she is giving Man 3 a handjob
then Man 2 makes her suck his cock while Man 3 boob fucks her, while Man 1 moves to her lovely pink pussy
then Man 3 makes her blow him while Man 2 moves to fuck her ass
After a while Man 1 cums iniside her pussy and lets Man 3 fuck her in the pussy suddenly Man 2 exchanges places with Man 3 and fucks her hard in the pussy and he too cums inside her pussy and then Man 3 also fucks her in the pussy and cums inside the pussy.
The three men seemed mighty pleased with her and tell Shawn that they are greatful to him for giving them such a present, they sign the contract papers and shawn is also very happy having got new investors for his venture which would help him even more.
The men get up to leave but want to know if they can have Katrina again anytime soon, to which Shawn smily wickedly and says She is a rare piece but I'am sure we can work something out.
you can change her name to Katitrina instead of Katrina
India's sex bomb and beauty queen Katrina kaif decided to go to MnF Metropolis to try her luck.
After she reached MnF Metropolis she met with a casting director Ben who was a fat black dude
Ben: Hey wassup Kat how are you
Kat: Ben I am good how are you ?
Ben: (looking at her big boobs and ass) ooh just fine now you now fine, lets start with the auditon then.
After the audition
Ben: Kat you have the looks lovely figure and gorgeous face but sweetie you dont have the talent to make it big in Hollywood, sorry dear. you need to work harder and maybe try later.
Kat: Ben please I had a long journey and I will do anything for you to give me another chance dont give up on me yet.
Ben: Anything, hmm well then lets see what you under those fine cloths of yours
Kat: Strips her cloths and stands with her hands covering her boobs
Ben: nice now streach your arms, and kneel, and suck my cock
While kat is sucking his cock Ben partner Jimmy comes into the room
Jimmy: Mamma mia what have we got here?
Ben: Pure Indian sex bomb dog
Jimmy: Hmm isn't she Katrina the one who wants a break in Hollywood
Ben: yeah dude and she sucks like a queen man.. aaaa good I'm gonna cum
Jimmy stips his pants and says: Sweetie lets see how you take care of us and then we take care of you.
While Kat goes to suck Jimmy's big black cock, Ben inserts his Big fat black cock in her pussy, while she kept gaging on Jimmy's cock, then Jimmy made katrina lay down and tit fucked her while Ben kept fucking her pussy, then Ben tit fucked her while Jimmy had her ass, then Jimmy takes her pussy, while Ben fucked her ass, then both of them drain all cum on her face giving her a cum bath.
After both Ben and Jimmy fuck her in all holes, they break the news to Kat that she isnt yet ready for hollywood and that she needs to come to their every saturday afternoon for practice.
After two weeks of Ass pounding practice and six failed auditions,
Kat: Ben when will I get a break in Hollywood ? I have no more money left and I wont be able to stay in the motel any longer, I have to go back it seems
Ben: It would be sad to see this fine piece of ass go back to India
Jimmy: Kat see we have this producer friend of ours Shawn who is having his bachelor party tomorrow he is know as the black king you see, me and ben can't make it due to a meeting, why dont you go on our behalf.
Ben: Yeah it would be the perfect oppurtunity for you to migle with a producer and maybe get yourself a role.
Kat: Thinks about it and agrees to go
She puts on her sexiest outfit which is a low cut Indian red sareer with revealing cleavage and navel and bare back the saree is tight fiting which outlines her big boobs and ass perfectly.
Shawn: Hey dear welcome all of us were waiting for you only
Kat: Looks around the room and see 5 big black dudes all in party attaire waitng by the pool side,there were no women and six black guys.
Kat: Thank you Shawn, for having me over
Shawn: Ben and Jimmy have been saying a lot of good things about you. So you need a role in a flim thats right, Shawn say as he makes her sit on the couch, the other five guys also come and sit around her
kat: yeah , I am desparte to get a role, I have no money left, and I am afraid I have to go back to India without a break in Hollywood
Shawn: Now that would be tragedy not using a fine piece like that
The guys nood in approval
Shawn: See dear now there is role in a flim of mine, but the competition is too stiff so why dont you show us how desparate you are, and then maybe we can arrange a audition or something
Kat: But..
Shawm: Ok lets do it this way you let all of us enjoy you now and I'll pay ypu 1000$ that should keep you in towm for a couple of days and within that time I'll sort out that audition of yours
Kat: Thinks long and hard and say's well if i have to make it in hollywood then it seems I need to do it
Shawn is the first to approach her and he kisses her in way bitting her lips off while he kept pressing her boobs violently to which Kat moaned, he then signals the others to join in and the other men come and rip of her cloths violently, their lust for her was visible in their eyes. Shawn makes Katrina kneel and suck his cock, while she stroked two other cocks of the other guys. While the three other guys were busy playing with her boobs, pussy, and ass.
Then Shawn makes her sit on his cock while another guy inserts it into her ass, she lets out a huge moan after which another guys put his cock into her mouth, while she was stroking two others with her hands, while the last guy who was obssed with boobs kept on sucking, pinching and pressing her boobs. All the six guys kept rotating and fucking one hole or the other untill all of them had cummed.
Shawm since it was his bachelor party and was treating katrina as a hooker said it to everyone whenever they are ready to cum they just need to say it and they can cum in any hole of her as they wish. Katrina begs them to not cum inside her pussy, she says them to cum in her mouth face or ass but not inside her pussy, but right then one of the guys puts his cock inside Kat's mouth and unloads his load deep inside her throat, seeing this Shawn drains his load deep inside her pussy, and then one by one all of drain their cum in one hole or the other most of them cum inside her pussy.
All the six guys fuck her hard in all holes in a pure gangbang
Kat isnt aware that the whole sesion is recorded
After the fucking shawn pays her and she goes to her room, when she reaches the room shawn sends her a clip of the video, and with a message well if you make it to hollywood is a differnt matter but for the time being you are my sex toy, I want you over at my apartment tomorrow 3p.m I have some investors over I want you to please them or else well you know you will be a porn star instead of a hollywood star.
Next Kat decides to go to Shawn's place and keep him happy so that her video isn't leaked and that she can still be a hollywood star instead on a porn star.
At sharp 3p.m Kat reaches Shawn's place and as she enters she sees that there are 3Black men all wearing suits and Shawn who is wearing a tight Jeans and t shirt. She is wearing an ethnic Indian dress called Saree which is very reavaling.
Shawn: Welcome Katrina Guys, she is our entertainer for today, I hope you guys will like her
Man 1: Ooh she is smoking hot
Man2: Where did you find her Shawn
Shawn: Thats a trade secret my friend
Man3: Hey lets not waste any time and get to business with this lovely lady
Shawn: Not so quick guys, enjoy the show
Shawn directs Katrina to dance for them as she strips for them, and plays the music
Katrina starts dancing in a slutty manner and strips down to her bra and panties and then Shawn stops the music and asks her to stand in front of couch and let the guest have a better look at her.
Man1 directly starts fondling with her big boobs and rips of her bra with one smooth pull
Man 2 Starts slapping and pinching her big ass
while Man 3 starts fingering her pussy from over the panty
then Man 2 and Man 3 startpulliing her panties in the opposite direction which eventually tears and Katrina lets out a moan as the fabric pentrates her pussy for a moment.
Then all Three men pull out their big black cocks and tell her to knell down and suck their cocks
She kneels and sucks of Man 1 while Man 2 is busy boob fucking her all the while she is giving Man 3 a handjob
then Man 2 makes her suck his cock while Man 3 boob fucks her, while Man 1 moves to her lovely pink pussy
then Man 3 makes her blow him while Man 2 moves to fuck her ass
After a while Man 1 cums iniside her pussy and lets Man 3 fuck her in the pussy suddenly Man 2 exchanges places with Man 3 and fucks her hard in the pussy and he too cums inside her pussy and then Man 3 also fucks her in the pussy and cums inside the pussy.
The three men seemed mighty pleased with her and tell Shawn that they are greatful to him for giving them such a present, they sign the contract papers and shawn is also very happy having got new investors for his venture which would help him even more.
The men get up to leave but want to know if they can have Katrina again anytime soon, to which Shawn smily wickedly and says She is a rare piece but I'am sure we can work something out.
you can change her name to Katitrina instead of Katrina
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I never said that the sex scenes need to be more elaborate, I said I felt to be more defined, meaning that they're easier to tell apart from the rest of the story.
And I've read through whet you've written, and it's a bit too elaborate.
I’ve looked through it and I can see way more than 4 sex scenes. I’ll lay them out for you:
Sex Scene 1: Kneeling Blowjob.Ben: nice now streach your arms, and kneel, and suck my cock
While kat is sucking his cock Ben partner Jimmy comes into the room
Sex Scene 2: Spit-Roast.While Kat goes to suck Jimmy's big black cock, Ben inserts his Big fat black cock in her pussy, while she kept gaging on Jimmy's cock,
Sex Scene 3: Missionary and Tit-Fuck Threesome.then Jimmy made katrina lay down and tit fucked her while Ben kept fucking her pussy, then Ben tit fucked her while Jimmy had her ass,
Sex Scene 4: Double Penetration.then Jimmy takes her pussy, while Ben fucked her ass, then both of them drain all cum on her face giving her a cum bath.
Sex Scene 5: Blowjob, Double Handjob and Groping.Shawn makes Katrina kneel and suck his cock, while she stroked two other cocks of the other guys. While the three other guys were busy playing with her boobs, pussy, and ass.
Sex Scene 6: Gangbang.Then Shawn makes her sit on his cock while another guy inserts it into her ass, she lets out a huge moan after which another guys put his cock into her mouth, while she was stroking two others with her hands, while the last guy who was obssed with boobs kept on sucking, pinching and pressing her boobs. All the six guys kept rotating and fucking one hole or the other untill all of them had cummed.
Sex Scene 7: Gangbang 2.She kneels and sucks of Man 1 while Man 2 is busy boob fucking her all the while she is giving Man 3 a handjob
Sex Scene 8: Gangbang 3.then Man 2 makes her suck his cock while Man 3 boob fucks her, while Man 1 moves to her lovely pink pussy
Sex Scene 9: Gangbang 4.then Man 3 makes her blow him while Man 2 moves to fuck her ass
Sex Scene 10: Triple Vaginal and Creampie.After a while Man 1 cums iniside her pussy and lets Man 3 fuck her in the pussy suddenly Man 2 exchanges places with Man 3 and fucks her hard in the pussy and he too cums inside her pussy and then Man 3 also fucks her in the pussy and cums inside the pussy.
Also, it might be a bit too ambitious to ask for two little mini-games (I’m not sure what else to call them) like these as well.
Shawn directs Katrina to dance for them as she strips for them, and plays the music
Katrina starts dancing in a slutty manner and strips down to her bra and panties and then Shawn stops the music and asks her to stand in front of couch and let the guest have a better look at her.
3 sex scenes and the dancing part would be fine, but you need to decide on just 1 position per sex scene.Man1 directly starts fondling with her big boobs and rips of her bra with one smooth pull
Man 2 Starts slapping and pinching her big ass
while Man 3 starts fingering her pussy from over the panty
then Man 2 and Man 3 startpulliing her panties in the opposite direction which eventually tears and Katrina lets out a moan as the fabric pentrates her pussy for a moment.