Officer Juggs: night for good deeds ep2

Junior_p
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Sat Apr 22, 2023 12:31 am

I want to add some things to my story without changing the base I made, I'm planning the minigame and I'll send it here as soon as it's finished. what did you add madb45?
madb45
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Sat Apr 22, 2023 9:25 am

Junior_p wrote:
Sat Apr 22, 2023 12:31 am
I want to add some things to my story without changing the base I made, I'm planning the minigame and I'll send it here as soon as it's finished. what did you add madb45?
I didn't add nothing to your story these are your babies, but I didn't add nothing to mines ethier right now I'm doing episode 5 for Heroic Rescue.
Junior_p
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Sat Apr 22, 2023 11:42 pm

sorry the translator disappeared wrong, I wanted to say what would you add to this story of mine
madb45
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Sun Apr 23, 2023 2:39 am

Junior_p wrote:
Sat Apr 22, 2023 11:42 pm
sorry the translator disappeared wrong, I wanted to say what would you add to this story of mine
A little more detail and structure on the main and minor charcters to help strengthen the story plot to keep the reader invested.
Junior_p
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Sun Apr 23, 2023 5:28 am

Sure!.
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Sun Apr 23, 2023 9:00 am

Junior_p wrote:
Sun Apr 23, 2023 5:28 am
Sure!.
Yeah!.
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Mon Apr 24, 2023 6:24 am

Night was falling and chief juggs couldn't forget his appointment to meet last night's bums who helped by satiating their hunger. As soon as she arrives at Beco she notices something different, a bonfire in the garbage can and a sign saying: fill your pot with the best cow's milk for 5. Uncomprehending she arrives asking Fredy, the same filthy drunk bum she kicked and emptied his balls last night.
Juggs: what the fuck is going on here??? Last night the homeless people Juggs fed were no longer there as they had gone to the corner cafeteria to eat. Fredy no longer wanted to know about that "rancid" pee soup, he wanted the same feast as last night and in order to get some change he created this new business that he called "Alley Banquet"

Fredy: I'm just starting a business and since you have a good official heart, I know you'll help me!.
Juggs: look here you filthy piece of shit who do you think i am? My body will not be part of this trade of yours!. Fredy tries to gain her trust with words of mercy "we are hungry, you have the "attributes" to satisfy our hunger". Without delay, homeless people from everywhere arrive asking if it was that place where they had said they would have hot milk soup for only 5!?.Chief Juggs with an ugly face because he didn't want to do that, but with a heavy conscience, if he doesn't help these poor people they can starve to death

Minigame: milk for charity: form two lines, select a homeless person and take it to Juggs, and click quickly to milk the breasts and fill the pot with milk. Remember she has two pairs of breasts get as much money as you can with them and satisfy the hunger of the homeless!

Sex scene 1: blowjob and sucks balls

Sex scene 2: Doggy style

Sex scene 3:missionary position

Fredy jumps for joy because there was so much money that he hardly knew what to spend it on and with audacity, he thanks her saying "same time tomorrow dear, will I give you a little gift?" exhausted sitting on the floor with sore breasts, "I hope it brings you something really good." END
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Junior_p
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Mon Apr 24, 2023 6:26 am

madb45 man i think i made a new game for juggs please read ep 2 I revised the text and improved what you had said
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Mon Apr 24, 2023 10:48 am

Junior_p wrote:
Mon Apr 24, 2023 6:26 am
madb45 man i think i made a new game for juggs please read ep 2 I revised the text and improved what you had said
Okay
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