Hey everyone. I made my own 3d story and would like to post it here. I've included a script to go with the images. If the MNF team are interested of adapting this idea into their own, I'd greatly appreciate it.
DIVA MIZUKI: SLICK BUSINESS
CHARACTERS
- Diva Mizuki
- Baka
- Franciszek Olejsky
SCENE 1 (Olejsky Skincare)
https://i.imgur.com/5rn2Lex.jpg
Franciszek Olejsky is the CEO of Olejsky Skincare. He recently emmigrated from Poland to sell his wares in the United States, settling in MNF Metropolis. Despite his best efforts, he hasn't found much success in turning a profit.
OLEJSKY: Oh my god, diz iz unbelievable... A whole year I have been here and NOTHINK. The taxmen are breathink down my neck and I have nothink to show for it. At diz point, I might as well file for bankruptcy.
https://i.imgur.com/FwGpC2J.jpg
OLEJSKY: I need to find zome help. UGH! Fuckink adz! Vait a minute iz that...
https://i.imgur.com/9yKaFUQ.jpg
DIVA MIZUKI: Hiiii everyone! Thank you so much for joining me for my third annual Boobs Flashing Tour. I'm so excited to show off my goods to my legions of adoring fans! Of course, this wouldn't be possible without help from our sponsor, Petnis Sex Toys! The absolute pinnacle of pleasure!
https://i.imgur.com/76r8fRj.jpg
OLEJSKY: Hmmph. Maybe I vould go if my life wasn't fallink apart. Petniz, eh?
OLEJSKY HOLY SHIT! Petniz' ztockz have zkyrockted! TO ZA MOON!!! It's now or never, Olejsky. I NEED her to become our zpokeswoman! It is the only think that vill zave my company!
https://i.imgur.com/rDSruTN.jpg
And so, Olejsky writes to Mizuki's management in a desperate attempt to save his life's work.
SCENE 2 (Baka's House)
https://i.imgur.com/OSRFANV.jpg
Baka: Come on... OH MOTHERFUCKER, THIS GAME SUCKS!
https://i.imgur.com/7jojg5B.jpg
BAKA: The hell is this? Olejsky Skincare?
E-Mail: "To the management of Diva Mizuki. I have a business proposition. My products aren't selling that well and I need somebody to help give them the boost they need. In particular, I'd like to invite you to advertise my line of body oils. I'm sure you can find a way to effectively use them in your line of work. This recipe has been passed down for generations and are of exceptional quality. I would like to schedule a meeting with Miss Mizuki at her earliest convienience. I understand she is very busy, but I can assure you this will be very profitable for the both of us. To incentivise you, I will be paying a hefty advancement payment for her to advertise it. Regards, Franciszek Olejsky."
BAKA: Wow, this guy is really desperate. But still, this might be a good idea. If this ad succeds, we all come out rich, and if it fails, we still get this jackass's money.
https://i.imgur.com/OtLgw2R.jpg
BAKA: Yeah, we can work something out.
SCENE 3 (Olejsky Skincare)
https://i.imgur.com/b3Y4yBQ.jpg
OLEJSKY: Mizz Mizuki... Mr... Baka, was it? I'd like to extend my deepezt thankz for your prezence here today. I understand you are extremely buzy and you taking time out of your zchedule for me, I'm zo incredibly gratefu-
BAKA: Yeah, yeah, yeah, we get it, dude. Get on with it.
OLEJSKY OK, I'll be frank vith you. My buzinezz is failink. No matter what I do, I zimply cannot turn a decent profit. I need your help. I zaw how Petniz ztockz zkyrocketed after you partnered up with dem. I feel you could do ze zame for me.
https://i.imgur.com/rH9FIHV.jpg
DIVA MIZUKI: Mr Olejsky, please don't take this the wrong way, but I have a brand and an image to maintain. I can't lower myself to shill for sub-par products. If this goes badly, imagine how this will affect me. I'm on tour right now and I can't afford any scandals or mistakes right now.
BAKA: Yeah, it sucks that you're a total failure in life but that's really not our problem. Needless to say, you're not selling us and I don't think anything will-
OLEJSKY: I vill give you $20,000 in cazh right now
BAKA AND MIZUKI: SOLD!
OLEJSKY: But I need you to give your all. Please. You are my last hope. I need you to vork you magic, Miss Mizuki.
https://i.imgur.com/AVG5wv3.jpg
BAKA: Oh, don't worry friend, we got an idea in store. We're gonna need a few dozen bottles of oil though.
OLEJSKY: Done.
SCENE 4 (Porn Shoot
https://i.imgur.com/fsLfFgO.jpg
https://i.imgur.com/MeZZxIw.jpg
DIVA MIZUKI: Heeeeeeyyy! Today, I'd like to talk to you about an amazing new company I've partnered up with, Olejsky Skincare! They do all kinds of amazing products, like skin cream, lotion, and my personal favorite...
https://i.imgur.com/dUCAEVQ.jpg
DIVA MIZUKI: Body oil! This is the absolute best you can get and I'm here to prove just how great it is. Me and my partner Baka- AHH!
https://i.imgur.com/DFFiosH.jpg
DIVA MIZUKI: Baka!
https://i.imgur.com/RCrO1rO.jpg
DIVA MIZUKI: Are gonna show just how great Olejsky Body Oil is for your skin... and sex!
SEX SCENE 1
https://i.imgur.com/4KtiQb2.jpg
IDLE
BAKA: Let's get those puppies oiled up!
DIVA MIZUKI: Are you watching? Cuz you won't wanna miss a second!
EASY
https://i.imgur.com/dq4tepo.jpg
BAKA: Ohhhh fuck yeah baby!
DIVA MIZUKI: MMM, it tastes like pineapple
MEDIUM
DIVA MIZUKI: Mmmmm MMM!
BAKA: Oh fuck, stick your tongue in deeper!
DIVA MIZUKI: Aaaaah! SLUUUUUURPPPP!
BAKA: Your tits are even softer than usual!
HARD
DIVA MIZUKI: SLUUURP!! AHH! MMMMMM!!!
BAKA:: No friction at all! THIS SHIT RULES!
SEX SCENE 2
https://i.imgur.com/GPFIhD4.jpg
IDLE
BAKA: In the ass already? That's what I like, Miz!
DIVA MIZUKI: Fuck yeah, let's do it!
EASY
DIVA MIZUKI: Fits like a glove!
BAKA: I mean my cock's been in your ass hundreds of times, it's bound to be.
DIVA MIZUKI: But this is the best it's felt!
MEDIUM
BAKA: Ahh, so wet but SOOOOO tiiiight!
DIVA MIZUKI: This is the power of Olejsky Oils!
HARD
DIVA MIZUKI: OH MY GOD! THIS IS AMAZING!
BAKA: HAHAHAHA! RIDE IT, COWGIRL!
SEX SCENE 3
https://i.imgur.com/ZYP1d3u.jpg
IDLE
BAKA: Goddamn, it's like the house is flooded. I do NOT envy whoever has to clean our mess up!
DIVA MIZUKI: Come on, stick it in!
BAKA: Don't have to tell me twice!
EASY
BAKA: Look at this! She's soaked from head to toe and I'm totally stable! What over oil could let me do this?
DIVA MIZUKI: Hahaha! How do you think this stuff up you little perv?
BAKA: I've always had a creative mind. Just ask Juicy Purple!
DIVA MIZUKI: You're fucking crazy! But I like that...!
MEDIUM
DIVA MIZUKI: Uhhh, your huge dick is hitting my depth
BAKA: FUCK! FUCK! FUCK YEAAAAAAAAAH!
HARD
BAKA: MMM! Oh yeah, it's coming! I'm about to explode!
DIVA MIZUKI Ohhhh, I want your cum so bad!
BAKA: How bad you want it?
DIVA MIZUKI: So bad!
BAKA: HOW BAD?
DIVA MIZUKI: I NEED IT!
CUM SCENE
https://i.imgur.com/SdTVDkf.jpg
DIVA MIZUKI: Give it to me, honey...
BAKA: Oh fuck yeah baby! Ngh! Here it comes
CUMSHOT
DIVA MIZUKI: That was some of the best sex I ever had in my life... and it's all thanks to Olejsky Oils!
ONE WEEK LATER
SCENE 5 (Olejsky Skincare)
https://i.imgur.com/76r8fRj.jpg
OLEJSKY: Oh my fucking god... That- that was.
OLEJSKY: No! Focuz man! I need to check za ztock market! Please, please, pleaseeeee
OLEJSKY: $300 A SHARE?! IT WAS 62 CENTZ A VEEK AGO THERE'Z ORDERZ THROUGH ZA ROOF! I'M ZAVED HAHAHAHAHA!
SCENE 6 (Mizuki's House)
https://i.imgur.com/iiBnEAi.jpg
BAKA: What I tell ya? Am I a good idea machine or what?
DIVA MIZUKI: 1000 shares and 20% on all Olejsky product sales? I'm a multi-millionaire!
BAKA: I'm getting a cut, right?
DIVA MIZUKI: Huh? Oh yeah, yeah sure, whatever.
BAKA: Between this, the Petnis deal, the Tour, and snaking the Slut-A-Largo under Rump's nose, we are fucking GOLDEN!
https://i.imgur.com/ENBs2xD.jpg
DIVA MIZUKI: And a lifetime supply of Olejsky Oil! You thinking what I'm thinking?
BAKA: Hell yeah!
THE END
Diva Mizuki: Slick Business (with original images)
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BakaIsBack
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I love this script but I think Baka needs to say more degrading shit to Mizuki. Good job with the pics, that’s some good effort
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BakaIsBack
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I’m disappointed that no one else is commenting on this or at least enjoying the 3D images. It seems it’s very random when the community like a Mizuki or Baka game. I’ve had months of requesting one then getting nothing but disapproval but then all of a sudden after requesting it again, there’s heaps of approval
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L4ever4life
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Yeah community has been off/on lately but I really did enjoy the effort put into this script, the 3D images are a great reference!
Incredible amount of effort and the images are great, so I hate to say this, but if you want it to get made you’re gonna have to cut a bit out aka make it shorter. The classic style is a short intro, 2-3 sex scenes, and a short ending. Or maybe split it into a two part game if that works better for you. Right now the intro is too long and there’s too many sex scenes.
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BakaIsBack
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I agree with the other guy. You should make your own comics. Even though no one really appreciated the story, we did and a few others outside the forums might
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BakaIsBack
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Hey Nilbog, got any other stories with 3D images? Would love to see more of your ideas for games through 3D pictures
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moradiutumd
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Very informative story and I like what the man from Diva Mizuki management did. He did a good job. But I wouldn't pay an advance for advertising as it's not an incentive, it's her job. And the work should be paid after the fact and when there are refinements you should pay further and not demand to do it for free. This will not bring good results. If I were her, I would not be rude to Diva Mizuki because he is a client and would offer https://revenuegrid.com/platform/clari-alternative/ to develop his business
Last edited by moradiutumd on Sat Dec 10, 2022 1:14 pm, edited 1 time in total.