Could use some opinions. Not sure about the minigame. If you got any suggestions or think its good enough to upload as an idea go for it
Thanks
Helping Hand
Characters
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Sister Virginia
Body: https://rule34.xxx//images/2159/17e8707 ... eg?2342988
Apperance: https://img.rule34.xxx//samples/1249/sa ... pg?2707444
V-Neck: http://highlowvintage.com/wp-content/up ... 72-if-.jpg
Supreme Mother
Apperance : https://rule34.xxx//images/1352/159275c ... eg?2481873
Demons : https://rule34.xxx//samples/1043/sample ... pg?1237333
Guy
Apperance : https://i.pinimg.com/736x/98/c1/63/98c1 ... i-pray.jpg
Outfit(One on the right) : https://i.pinimg.com/736x/c2/86/6a/c286 ... -ideas.jpg
Library : https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/imag ... en9Fwsn55U
Inside Temple: https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/nar ... 1129233202
Story Plot
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In the Kingdom of Kinkydom there lived people who believed in the lord of Light. Many people would pray and ask the god for his blessings. His temples would be taken care of by the Ladies of Pleasure. Whilst they would assist the people in every way they can they could not touch another man as they were bonded with their lord
Unfortunately for the people in the kingdom all the ladies were considered goddesses with large bosoms and curves that would make any man stiffer than a board. Unfortunately if you touched one you would be burnt alive on orders of the Lord of Light.
Sister Virginia is walking through the temple thinking back to what her Supreme Mother had told her
Supreme Mother Whordry had told her "I am leaving for a couple of hours as i have duties to the Lord of Light. I am leaving you in charge of this place. Don`t muck about and don`t do anything stupid. I don`t want to come back and find this place covered in Bird shit again, SO KEEP THE DOORS CLOSED"
Virginia huffs
Virginia thought: I am old enough to be left alone!! Why does Mother Whordry treat me like a child
*Cuts to Door scene* Three loud knocks are heard
Virginia runs to answer the door thinking that Mother Whordry is back is back.
Virginia: I`m coming mother
She opens the door only to find a normal looking dirty peasant. Virginia isn`t surprised the temple s visited by many people who ask for blessings and also forgiveness for forsaking the god of light
Virginia: How may i help you sir
Peasant: I`ve come to speak my sins to Mother Whordry
Virginia: Mother Whordry isn`t here right now, but you can wait for her she should be back shortly
Peasant: Thank you Sister
The peasant couldn`t stop ogling her but she saw it as him being to shy to look her directly in the eyes, as she was pure from the light of the lord and he was dirtied by sin.
Virginia`s thoughts: He must feel bad carrying all his sins.... AHA I`ll ask him to help me so that he`ll feel better
Virginia: Mister i could use some help in the library, could you help me whilst you wait for Mother Whordry?
Peasant: *Nods head eagerly*
The two move to the library leaving the door open behind them
The peasant walks straight behind the naive sister, but unfortunately all her can stare at is her mouthwatering ass shaking up and down as she moves.
She stops in front of him and he bumps into her.
Sister Virginia: Here we are now unfortunately the ladder isn`t steady so please hold me tightly.
*MiniGame* (Minigame could be skipped)
You have the background covered in shelves and books and she will ask you to move her from one side of the screen to another.
You have two meters on the right side of the screen one is boner the other is stability. When the peasant looks up he can see under the Sister`s dress and look at her Vagina without her knowing. In this moment as he is looking up he starts jerking off .The more he looks the more unstable the ladder gets. You can also make the sister look down or else just move from one place to another
If Stability reaches to a max before the boner is to maxed out the sister will fall and the player will lose the minigame. The aim of the game is to have both bars maxed out at the same time.
The sister falls down and lands on the peasant. She looks up still feeling dizzy from the fall to be realise she is face to face with the peasant`s dick. She screams in horror.(Falls in a 69 position)
Sister Virginia: WHAT IS THAT!!
Peasant: Ughhhhhhh..... My dick?
Sister Virginia: What`s wrong with it? It looks in pain!
Peasant(A lightbulb appears over his head): It`s the reason i came to see Mother Whordy. I think Demons are inside of it.
Sister Virginia Thought: This must be what Supreme Mother referred to as the Sin of Sex
Peasant: The preacher down in the village told me only a holy Sister of the Lord could cure me
Sister Virginia thoughts: I MUST HELP THIS MAN NO MATTER WHAT
Sister Virginia: I am not the holy mother but please let me help you!! What do i need to do?
The peasant surprised that the girl could be so naive and trusting told her: Grab it by the shaft and move your hands slowly up and down Sister
*Sex scene* Hand job- There are three sets of speed. Slow Medium Hard when the bar fills up you unlock(Manual) and (Next). Every time you move from setting to setting you hear the peasant say "Faster Sister Faster". When the (Next) button becomes available the scene remains the same
Sex Position: http://www.sex.com/pin/38936022-69/
Peasant: It`s not working sister maybe try with your mouth
Sister Virginia: I don`t know how but I`ll try my best
*Sex scene* Blowjob- There are three sets of speed. Slow Medium Hard when the bar fills up you unlock(Manual) and (Cum).
When you hit Cum the sister`s face is covered in Cum.
Sex Position: http://www.sex.com/pin/55825979-69/
Sister Virginia: Yes I got the Demon`s out.
Looking at her jumping up and down in joy(Bouncing tits and ass) gets the peasant Hard again
Sister Virginia looks in shook at it: How is it possible?
Peasant: I`m cursed Sister there is nothing that can be done for me
Sister Virginia: No there must be something we can do
Peasant: Well I know of one method that could work
*Sex Scene* Anal- here are three sets of speed. Slow Medium Hard when the bar fills up you unlock(Manual) and (CUM). You have the option to grab her tits as you are fucking her with the option of (Pull) or (Twist)
Sex position: http://www.sex.com/pin/56104669-hair-pull/
Peasant: Thanks Sister i think exorcised the demons
Sister Virginia: Happy to have helped you
Peasant: Could i ask you to keep this between us as i don`t want anyone from the village to know about my problem
Sister Virginia: I won`t even tell Mother Whordy
Peasant: Thanks Sister
The scene cuts to a structure on the ceiling as there are three demons looking down on the two humans
Red Demon: A sister who can exorcise demons?
Blue Demon: This is Bad
Green Demon: We should tell the boss
Story Idea
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WolfMasterUchiha
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Last edited by WolfMasterUchiha on Sun May 20, 2018 7:12 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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WolfMasterUchiha
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Sure got any opinions or ideas ? I already got an idea for something after too(Like a 2nd game)
I haven't quite gotten to the end of the script yet (I've read it up to the end of the mini-game), but I have to say I'm a little confused about the guy in this.
First with the reference images, the one for his appearance is fine, there's nothing wrong with that. But with the one for his outfit, the image you've included has two, rather different outfits in it. I suggest you either do what I would do and edit the image to remove the one you don't want, or simply say which one you want in the script. For example:
First with the reference images, the one for his appearance is fine, there's nothing wrong with that. But with the one for his outfit, the image you've included has two, rather different outfits in it. I suggest you either do what I would do and edit the image to remove the one you don't want, or simply say which one you want in the script. For example:
And second, in the script you refer to him as a dirty peasant, but the images you've included don't look like a dirty peasant. In fact, the images you're using make him look like a clean, well dressed young man. If you want him to be a dirty peasant, then I suggest you find a new image(s) that better reflect that. Or, if you like the ones you have, I would suggest you change the script to stop calling him a peasant and perhaps give him a name. Something like this:Outfit (the one on the right) :
https://i.pinimg.com/736x/c2/86/6a/c286 ... -ideas.jpg
She opens the door only to find a young man standing there. Virginia isn't surprised as the temple is visited by many people who ask for blessings and also forgiveness for forsaking the Lord of Light.
Virginia: Oh, hello. How may I help you sir?
Young Man: Hello Sister. My name's __________, and I've come to speak my sins to Mother Whordry.
Virginia: I'm afraid Mother Whordry isn't here right now, but you can wait for her if you'd like. She should be back shortly.
__________: Thank you Sister.
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WolfMasterUchiha
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Totally forgot about the there being 2 outfits- as for the dirty part i just thought they would be able to use the same outfit but make him look dirty(Mostly because i couldn`t find pics)